专题五 短文改错第2讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误[真题演练]Passage 1(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)When I look at this picture of myself ，I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically ，and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took ，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time ：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes ，playing pop music ，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.答案：When I look at this picture of myself ，I realize how fast time flies.I had have grown not only physically ，and but also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took taken ，I entered my second year of high school and become becamea new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are thethings they that/whichwere very important in my life at that time ：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference differentkinds of cars and planes ，playing pop music ，and collecting the late latestmusic albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your myhigh school days. 【语篇解读】 本文是一篇记叙文。
文章讲述了由一张照片引发的作者对高中时光的回忆。
71．解析：词法错误。
realize“认识到，意识到”，是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语。
答案：去掉of72．解析：句法错误。
由in the past few years可知句子要用现在完成时。
答案：had改为have73．解析：行文逻辑错误。
n ot only...but also...“不仅……而且……”，连接并列成分。
答案：and改为but74．解析：句法错误。
被动语态的结构为“be＋及物动词的过去分词”，take的过去分词是taken。
答案：took改为taken75．解析：句法错误。
句子用了过去时，and连接并列谓语entered和became。
答案：become改为became76．解析：词法错误。
picture在文中第一句已经出现过，故此处可以加the表示特指；也可加this，表示“在这张照片中”。
答案：in后加this/the77．解析：句法错误。
things是先行词，后面是定语从句，从句中缺少主语，故引导词用that或which。
答案：they改为that/which78．解析：词法错误。
形容词修饰名词kinds。
答案：difference改为different79．解析：词法错误。
the latest music albums“最新的音乐专辑”。
latest“最近的，最新的”。
答案：late改为latest80．解析：行文逻辑错误。
句意：这张照片常常让我想起我高中时的快乐时光。
此处是以作者的口吻写的“我的高中时光”。
答案：your改为myPassage 2(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.答案：My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that whereI live.Though not very big ，the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with cus tomersat meal times.Some people even had haveto wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest honesty .Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or andhigh quality oil are using used for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the a short period of time.Instead ，he hopes that our hisbusiness will grow steady steadily. 【语篇解读】 本文主要讲述了作者的叔叔经营餐馆的成功之道。
71．解析：句法错误。
close to 后接宾语从句。
I live 缺少地点状语，故用where 引导宾语从句。
答案：that→where72．解析：行文逻辑错误。
though 与but 不能用在同一个句子中。
答案：去掉but73．解析：句法错误。
文章通篇用一般现在时，故将had 改为have 。
答案：had→have74．解析：词法错误。
主语是the key ，与表语构成同位关系，并非对主语的描述，故用名词。
答案：honest→honesty75．解析：行文逻辑错误。
fresh vegetables 和high quality oil 是并列关系，不是选择关系，故将or 改为and 。
答案：or→and76．解析：句法错误。
fresh vegetables and high quality oil 与use 是被动关系，故用被动语态。
be used for 被用于。
答案：using→used77．解析：词法错误。
dream of doing sth.“梦想做某事”，是固定搭配。
答案：dreams 后加of78．解析：词法错误。
in a short period of time“在短时间内”，是固定短语。
答案：short 前面的the 改为a79．解析：行文逻辑错误。
由“My uncle is the owner of a restaurant...”可知，餐馆是“我”叔叔的，故将our 改为his 。
答案：our→his80．解析：词法错误。
grow 在此是实义动词并非连系动词，故用副词修饰。
答案：s teady→steadilyPassage 3(2016·全国卷Ⅲ)(导学号 58210083)The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However, my parents didn't seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last ，I will be on my own ，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.答案：The teenage year yearsfrom 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They werealso the best and worse worst years in my life.At first ，I thought I kneweverything and could make decisions by yourself myself.However ，my parents didn't seem to think such so .They always tell toldme what to do and how to do it.At one time ，I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely freefrom them.I showed them I was independent by wear wearing strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to for college.At last ，I will be on my own ，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.【语篇解读】 本文中作者回忆了他的青少年时代。