2016年安徽中考作文解析——语言桥【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack来信，说他暑假期间要来中国交流学习。
他学了两年中文，但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。
请你用英语给Jack写封回信，提几点建议，要点如下：1.大胆自信2.放慢语速3.借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式注意：1.词数80-1002.可适当增加细节使行文连贯3.信中不能出现与本人相关信息4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数参考词汇：自信的confident 肢体语言body languageDear Jack,How is everything going? I'm glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua 【列提纲找思路】【句式】I know it isn't easy to communicate with others using a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help.You should be confident in yourself and don't give up whenever you meet with difficulty.I'm sure you will succeed through your hard work.【注意事项】1.从文体来说,本文属于应用文,重点在于如何提出建议。
2.文章所用的时态要以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
3.注意保持行文连贯,使文章具有条理性和逻辑性。
【满分作文1】Dear Jack,How is everything going? I'm glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer. I know that you have learnt Chinese for two years, but you're still worried about communicating in Chinese.Don't worry, I'll give you some useful suggestions.Firstly, you should try to catch every chance to practice speaking Chinese, and when you speak with others, it’s very important for you to be confident.You needn't be afraid of making mistakes.Secondly, speaking slowly can help you have enough time to think about how to organize words, it can also help you to express yourself clearly.Last but not least,in order to make successful exchange in communication, body language together with drawings and pictures also plays an important part.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【满分揭秘】本文格式正确，要点齐全，内容连贯，用Firstly，Secondly，Last but not least三个过渡性词组组织段落结构，每个段落对应一项建议，层次分明，描述有条不亲，而且三点建议运用了不同的句式，富于变化。
固定词组的运用显示了作者对英语词汇的熟练运用能力，动名词作主语和一些特殊句型的选用也显示出作者扎实的基本功。
【满分作文2】Dear Jack,How is everything going? I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer. You said you are worried about having difficulty in communicating with us in Chinese in yourletter,so I want to offer you some advice.Firstly, being brave and confident is very important. Only in this way you can improve your spoken Chinese greatly. Secondly, you’d better slow down your speed when speaking Chinese to make sure others can follow you. Thirdly,you can make yourself understood by drawing pictures. Besides, body language is also an important method when people communicate with each other. Thus, why don't you use your body language when you don’t know how to express yourself in Chinese?Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua【精彩译文】亲爱的杰克：最近怎么样？得知你这个夏天要来中国我很高兴。
你在信中说你担心用中文和我们交流会有困难，所以我想给你提供一些建议。
首先，大胆自信是非常重要的。
只有这样你才能够大幅提高中文口语水平。
第二，当你说中文时你最好放慢语速以保证其他人能够听懂。
第三，你可以通过画画来使自己被理解，另外，（使用）肢体语言也是人们与对方交流时一个很重要的方法。
所以，当你不知道如何用中文表达自己时，为什么不用肢体语言呢？祝顺！你的，李华【积累卡片】communicate v. 交流brave adj. 勇敢的Confident adj. 自信的method n. 方法【满分作文3】Dear Jack,How is everything going? I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer.Since you’ve learned Chinese for two years, I don' t think you feel the need to worry about speaking Chinese.I'd like to give you some tips. First of all, bravery and confidence are needed when you communicate with others in Chinese. If you fear to make mistakes, you'll never make progress. Second, try to speak slowly and use simple words and sentences. By doing this, people can easily understand what you' re saying. Last but not least, use body language or pictures to express what you think if necessary.I believe you can communicate in Chinese better and better if you take these suggestions.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【精彩译文】亲爱的杰克：最近怎么样？得知你这个夏天要来中国我很高兴。
由于你已经学习中文长达两年，因此我认为你没有必要担心说中文。
我想给你一些建议。
首先，当用中文和他人交流时要大胆自信。
如果你害怕犯错，那么你将不会进步。
第二，尽量说慢一些并使用简单的措辞。
这样人们就会容易理解你说了什么。
最后但同样重要的是，必要时使用肢体语言或图画来表达自己的想法。
我相信，如果你采纳这些建议，你用中文交流时会越来越好。
祝顺！你的，李华【积累卡片】progress n.进步necessary adj.有必要的last but not least 最后但同样重要的是【标准范文】Dear Jack,How is everything going? I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer. It's not necessary to worry about your Chinese. I'd like to share my ideas,which I think might help.First, be brave enough to speak Chinese when you communicate with others.It's of great importance to be confident about yourself. We Chinese are very friendly so you needn't be afraid of making any mistakes. Second, it's better to speak slowly and clearly. In this way you can make yourself understood more easily. What's more, sometimes you can use drawings or pictures, and as you know, body language is also widely used across cultures and very often it really works.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【精彩译文】亲爱的杰克：最近怎么样？得知你这个夏天要来中国我很高兴。