四级漫画作文
2. 作文提纲 (结构)
第一段:简要描写图画内容(who, what, when, where…):
父子之间的对话,儿子关注核废料处理(disposal of nuclear wastes),父 亲认为要从小事做起(empty the dustbin first);
Doing Big Things Starts from Doing Small Ones
写作概述
1.
审题(1-2mins) 2. 构思提纲 (3-5mins,确 定主题) 3. 写文章 (20mins) 4. 修改检查 (5mins)
Steps
Pre-writing :仔细阅读题干,确定写作主题
Para.1:
describe the picture
简要描述漫画(who,directions 部分虽然给出了大致的 主题,但是也要求考生对漫画进行描述,切忌抛 开漫 画内容直接议论!!! TIPS: 2. 漫画的内容一定要符合图片,切忌无中生 有!!!
Para2:全文的核心段
give your opinion about the
phenomenon conveyed in the picture and interpret its meaning/message
看图作文的解题思路应用
1.审题(认真阅读写作提 示):
漫画信息
确定写作主题: 做任何大事前 都应该从小事 做起 (一屋 不扫,何以扫 天下。)
“express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big”
3. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分,包括满分,该给 低分的给低分,包括0分,一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部 作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。
2. 四级考试写作的评分标准
满分为15分,阅卷标准分为五等:2 分,5分,8分,11分和14分。阅卷人 员根据阅卷标准。对照样卷评分,若 认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定 为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍 劣于该分数,则可加一分(即9分)或 减一分(即7分),但不得加或减半分。
作文提纲 (结构)
第二段:解释图画深刻含义 (揭示主题)并加以 解释和说明论证。 努力做好小事可以培养做大事所需要的优良品质 (develop good qualities needed undertaking important tasks);
TIPS:主题句的复述不是简单地重复,通常需符合
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如果在段末,用强调词转换方式连接。
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3.
与主题句保持意思一致,更进一层。
转换方式:词对应,同根,逆向
实例运用+分析
实例一
看图作文的解题思路应用
1.审题(认真阅读写作提示):
漫画信息
确定写作主题: 年轻人应该做 好人生规划以 及人生规划的 重要性的原因
SAMPLE 1
As is vividly revealed in the picture above, the boy expresses his worries about the disposal of nuclear wastes, while the father tells him to empty the dustbin in the room first. The picture reminds us of an old Chinese saying—If you don’t like to do trivial things like cleaning your room, it’s impossible for you to undertake any important task.
全国大学英语四级考试答题卡2
1.四级考试写作的评分原则
1.作文采用总体评分法(Global Scoring),就总的印 象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点错误 数目扣分。 2.从内容和语言两方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语 言是一个统一体。作文应该表达题目所规定的内容,而内 容要通过语言来表达。既要考虑作文是否切题,是否用 英语清楚而明确地表达了主题思想,也要考虑语言上的错 误是否造成理解上的障碍。
CET4概述
大学英语四级试卷的结构
写 听 读 译
30 mins 15%
30 mins 35%
40 mins 35%
30 mins 15%
你知道四级的答题顺序吗?
作文
听力
选词填空
在答题纸1上作答 , 完成后交答题 纸1.剩下题目在 答卡2上作答. 段落翻译
长篇阅读
仔细阅读
全国大学英语四级考试答题卡1
实例二 2013.06 真题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
SAMPLE 2 We can see from the cartoon that there is a father talking with his son. Having heard his son’s words that “ Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapon.” The father replies that “ If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything” and points the garbage can beside him. Funny and common as the conversation sounds, it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking big.
2分——条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错 误,且多为严重错误。
5分——基本切题。表达思想不够清楚,连贯性差,有较多的严重语 言错误。 8分——基本切题。表达思想比较清楚,文章尚连贯,但语言错误比 较多,其中有一些是严重错误。 11分——切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。 14分——切题。表达思想清楚,内容丰富,文字通顺,连贯性好。基 本上无语言错误。 白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而思想无法表达, 则应判为0分。 另外,字数不足,也酌情扣分,如累计字数为110-119扣1分,100- 109扣2分,90—99扣3分,70-79扣5分,50-59扣7分,少于49扣9分。 累计字数不包括题目中给出的主题句、起始句和结尾句中的字数。 如果字数不少,但段落数不够,也酌情扣分。比如在要求写三段的作 文中只写了一段,只能得0—4分;只写两段,只能得0—9分。
揭示主题(观点)并加以解释和说明论证;揭示现象(问题)并阐述现象
(问题)产生的原因。
TIPS:可以从2-3个方面进行阐述,也可以将这部分分为两段。
Para3.:give your conclusion.
(a) 提出建议,重申观点 主题句 (b) 对如何解决漫画中所反映的问题提出合理 建议或总结观点。
“focus on the topic about making a life plan and explain why it is important for young people to do”
2. 作文提纲 (结构)
第一段:简要描写图画内容(who, what, when, where…):
第二段:解释图画深刻含义 (揭示主题)并加以解释 和说明论证。
Firstly, planning your life helps you set up specific life goals and follow through on your goals. When you have specific goals, you’re more likely to be self-motivated. Secondly, life planning helps you have a full understanding of your life deficiencies and make prompt adjustments. If you fail some of your life goals, you can re-examine your life plan and decide whether to make more efforts to fulfill those goals or change some of your goals. Last but not least, you can meet many new opportunities after some of your life plans come true, because success breeds more success and opportunities bring in more opportunities.