高考英语作文——建议信
一.感谢信写作注意事项:
1. 该书面表达任务是一篇感谢信,因此首先应该注意书信格式,以符合感谢信的文体特征。
2. 感谢信的语气应当友善真诚,由于收信人系作者的同学,因此语言较为简洁,随意,避免使用过于正式,生硬的表达。
3. 灵活把握时态感谢信的正文中的时态灵活多变。
通常,在提到对方曾经所给予的帮助时,应用过去时态;在提到对方的帮助所产生的实际效果时,可以使用现在完成时态;在涉及到现状时,应用一般现在时;在表达祝愿或希望时,使用一般将来时态。
4. 运用规范的语言
感谢信有其自身的特色语言,在行文的每一个环节也有一些常用句型。
另外表示从对方的帮助中获益时,可以用I benefited greatly from your help./
With your help, I achieved …等句型表达;也可以用虚拟语气表达,例如:
Without your help, I couldn ' t have …/ But for your help, I couldn ' t
have…/If it hadn ' t been for your help, I couldn ' t have …等,这样
更能增强表达效果。
二.写作模式
首段:表达感谢之情并说明原因
首段常用句型:
1.1 ' m writing this letter to thank you for..我. 写这封信是为了表达我对……的谢意
2.1 ' mwriting to express my sincere thanks for... 我写这封信是为了表达我
对……真挚的谢意
3.1 would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt (adj. 衷心的) thanks to you for... 我想借这封信来表达我对您关于……的衷心感谢。
4.With deepest gratitude i write you this letter for... 我怀着深深的感激之情给
你写这封信是因为……
主题段落:详细描述并赞赏对方给予的帮助
中间段落常用句型(详细描写一般是具体问题具体分析):
1.lt was nice/kind/thoughtful (adj.考虑周到的)of you to do.... 做.... 你真是太好
了/友善/考虑周到的
2. Thank you very much for your kind hospitality (n,好客,热情招待)during my visit 非常感谢您在我拜访期间的热情招待。
3.It was your kind help that...(强调句型)是你的热情帮助...
4.If it had not been for your (help/assistance) I wouldn ' t h&ven the prize)女口果
不是你的……,我不可能……
结尾段:再次阐述谢意并表达回报的愿望
尾段常用句型
1. Thanks aga in for your gen erous help. Sin cere best wishes to you在次感谢你的慷慨帮助。
最真诚的祝福送给你。
2. My true gratitude is beyond the word de s cription. 任何语言都不能表达我的
真挚谢意。
3.1 would like to take this opport unity to express my great appreciati on for your timely help and assista nee我谨借此机会感谢您给予我们的及时帮助和支持。
4.Ma ny tha nks for all the good things you have done in help ing us to..非E 常感谢您为帮助我们……所做的一切。
5.1 feel deeply in debted to you and i really do not know how to tha nk you eno ugh for your help.
三.应用模板一:
Dear ___ :
How about your life/ study/ work? I ' m writing to thank you for your .
During _____ , you 详细描述(具体作文具体分析)Ano ther thi ng that I
can' t forget is that you详纟田描述/ There is still one thing that I can ' t forget. That is 详细描述.
Tha nks a lot for your kindn ess aga in. Best wishes to you.
Yours sin cerely,
应用模板二:
Dear :
I am writi ng to exte nd my sin cere gratitude for 感谢的原因.If it had not been for your assistanee in 对方给予的具体帮助,i fear that i would have been 没有对方帮助时的后果Every one agrees that it was you who 给出细节
Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sin cerely,
四.练习:假定你是李华,暑假你参加了英国游学活动,住在房东Tricia家
中,回国后给房东写一封信表示感谢,要点如下:
1. 安全抵家;
2. 回顾英国游学体会;
3. 感谢房东的帮助;
4. 表达愿望。
注意:1、词数100左右;
2 、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3 、结束语已为你写好。
Dear Tricia,
I ' veome back home safely. Thank you very much for everything during this period of time.
Looking back to my stay in Britain, I felt so happy and satisfied. The beautiful sce nery and frie ndly people impressed me a lot. I also ben efited a lot from lear ning together with local students. More importantly, your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culture and adapt to the life there. So I ' m sgrateful to you.
You are expected to come to China soon .Look ing forward to your reply.
Yours sin cerely ,
Li Hua。