Conclusion (some advice for visitors who haven’t visited the place)
task
Write a report about a place you have visited. Follow the stages.
Stage 1 Stage 2 Stage 3 Stage 4
Date: 3rd August Subject: Underwater
World
1. General Description
Introduce the report with a general descrzixxkpw tion of the place.
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2. List of good points
3. Sea Theatre – great fun virtual reality voyage – not very realistic
4. view from café– very good food and coffee – terrible
• Ex.1. On the one hand, seals and penguins are very exiting. On the other hand, the café is very expensive.e hand, on the other hand, however, but
Adjectives
1. seals and penguins – exciting café– very expensive
2. fish – very interesting dolphin show – cruel
Give a list of things that you think are good about the place.
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3. List of bad points
Give a list of the things that you think are bad about the place.
General Description
On the one hand, there are several good things about Underwater World. a – It has modern buildings and some of the latest technology. b – It also has some exciting things to see like the man-made iceberg and some beautiful coral. c – It has an excellent picnic area.
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4. Conclusion
Finish the report by making recommendations (or some advices) about the place.
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The Underwater World is a new park. It is located on a beautiful part of the sea front, ten kilometres from the city centre.
Go to Underwater World, especially to see the coral and iceberg. However, don’t go to the dolphin pool. And take your own food, and use the picnic area.
List of good things
On the other hand, some things are not
so good:
a – The pool for the dolphins is very
small and generally there are too many
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Pre-writing
☺Imagine you are in the Hong Kong
Underwater World. Use the notes and the words below to make comments.
b – The discovery pool is good but you
have to wait a long time to get in.
c – There are problems with the sound
in the virtual reality show.
List of bad things
• Seals and penguins are exciting. However, the café is very expensive
• Seals and penguins are exciting, but the café is very expensive.
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To: Mrs Brodman e.g. From: Amanda Bartok
preparation
making
first
draft checking
notes
(click)
Stage 1
Work in groups. Talk about some of the tourist attractions in your area, e.g. a zoo, a national park, a museum, a skating rink (a place for people skating) and so on. Choose one attraction for your report.