As the importance of education draws more and more attention in the public. It has sparked the controversy that over whether the government afford their citizens‘tuition fees. From my point of view,every citizen has the right to obtain education. It is the duty of a government to provide education for the citizens of its country.
The government provide financial assistance to help their citizens has many benefits. The first benefit is that advanced education is the key factor in promoting the basic quality of a nation’s population. Free education provided by the government should be deemed as a returned favor. As far as we know, not everyone can afford to pay tuition fee for education. Free education enable those students coming from humble background or remote poor areas to receive fine education. Every citizen could become the beneficiary of a good education.
On the other hand, the government finance is limited, there are numerous livelihood issues need to be solved by government. Free education will impose much pressure upon a nation economically. The government have many extremely difficult problems that need to render more concerns to deal with, such as optimize the environment, strengthen the construction of infrastructure, improve and perfect the national
public health system and so on.
In short, as long as the government can properly allocate the educational budget, the government should provide funds to help their citizens bear the responsibility for education. This practice should have very positive results in the long term.
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