高考英语的书面表达如何遣词造句一.造句的基本方法首先,我祝愿大家更快乐、更健康。
Above of all , I congradulate all the students to happirer ,body is more healthier.(这样的句子里有语法错误和短语错误,如果作文是这样的句子,就是胡说=想到哪里写到哪里=逐字翻译,最多得7--8分)心花怒放:heart flower angry open(错误)1.造句五步法中文---完整的中文----简单的中文-----英文-----升级英文今天来了很多人。
(逻辑是错的)----今天,很多人来了。
--- Today so many people have come.你妈妈对你好。
(心法口诀:当你发现一句话不好翻译的时候,想一想这句话到底是什么意思呢?)----你妈妈关心你。
----Your mom cares about you.-----(如果不会说care about)你妈妈爱你。
-----Your mom loves you.----(升级英文)There is no doubt that your mom loves you.写作文真正的难点:1.想到简单的内容2.造出完整的句子3.合情合理的逻辑你得知某报社“Global Mirror”创刊周年,征集读者意见,请根据以下提示给编辑写封信。
提示一:说明你是该报的忠实读者。
提示二:赞扬该报的优点:1.兼顾国内外新闻;2.介绍名人成功故事。
提示三:提出建议,刊登英语学习的文章(1)我是贵报的忠实读者。
----我非常喜欢你们的报纸。
----I like your newspaper very much.----I am crazy about your newspaper.------Iam undoubtedly crazy about your newspaper.-----Iam undoubtedly crazy about your newspaper which is not only meaningful but also entertaining.(题外话:高考作文中的关于校园活动的作文肯定是既有意义,又有娱乐性)(2)兼顾国内外新闻。
----你们报纸兼顾国内外新闻。
----你们报纸上有国内外新闻。
---There is news about both China and other countries in your newspaper.----There is various news about both China and other countries in your newspaper.---Various news can be read in your newspaper about both China and other countries.(3)介绍名人成功故事----名人成功故事被介绍在你们报纸上----关于名人成功经历的故事被介绍在你们报纸上。
----Stories about famous people’s success experience are introduced in your newspaper.老头晒太阳。
---老头在享受阳光。
---The old man is enjoying the sunshine.二.造句的升级方法(关键是show off,就是把最好的句子写给阅卷老师看)A)遣词的角度1.换词法(1)晚学词优先Good---useful---beneficial--meaningful---educational----excellent----outst anding----splendid----helpful(good是黯然低分词,要换成闪光高分词)You Should ----you are supposed to do----you had better do----if I were you, I would do ---it is beneficial for you to do sth----why not do sth Like---be crazy about ---be fond ofWant to do --be longing for doing ---desire to doMore and more students ----an increasing number of studentsMore and more beautiful---increasingly beautiful(2)短语优先We ----we high school students---we teenagers---we Chinese young students---we English learnersImportant---of great importanceEnglish is importantEnglish is of great importanceEnglish is an important languageEnglish is a language of great importance.Different---of great differenceUseful--of great useBeautiful--of great beautyHarmful---of great harmJoin--take part in---be part of(3)具体词优先I go to school---I ride to school----With the sun rising from the east, I together with Jay Chou,ride to school ,singing and laughing all the way.2.添词法(1).在名词前添上一个或多个形容词You should understand your mom.---You should understand your kind, patient and considerate mom.(2).在名词后面加上同位语或者定语从句You should understand your mom.----You, a 17-year-old teenager who can not live all by yourself, should understand your mom.他们外国人对我们评价高。
They foreigners speak highly of us Chinese.(3).在助系情之后、实义动词之前加副词I love you.---I really love you.---I undoubtedly love you.I can do it.---I can certainly do it.This is a good idea.--This is an excellent idea.---This is obviously an excellent idea.(4).名形动副可并列You should understand your mom.---You should understand , love, respect and appreciate your momB)造句的角度1.前面添一添“黄金圣衣句型”(“清明疑否不用走”)It is clear thatIt is obvious thatIt is no doubt thatNo one can deny thatNeedless to say,It goes without saying举例:I like English.2.后面补一补(万能尾巴句型,口诀:因为以防所以为了如果只要这件事)We are supposed to master English in that English is essential (必要的)in the modern society.We are supposed to master English in case that we would fail in the exams in the college entrance examination.We are supposed to master English;consequently,we need to read English aloud everyday.We are supposed to master English in order that we can find a well-paid job in the future.We are supposed to master English if / as long as we desire to look for awell-paid job in the future.We are supposed to master English which is significant to our future life. (1)因为:,in that/, considering that/,for the reason that/ ,for(2)以防:in case / for fear that(3)所以:;consequently/; as a result /; therefore(不是连词)(4)为了:,in order that /so that/in a way that does/in ways that do/in a bid to do / in order to do/ in an effort to do(5)如果:if(6)只要:as long as(7)这件事:, whichIt is obvious English is undoubtedly significant in that it is spoken across the globe.3.中间变一变(1)变主语不要用人做主语,用物、动名词、it做主语I like English.---English is my favourite.---English attracts / appeals to me.I have been using the cellphone for 3 years.----The cellphone has been used for 3 years.----The cellphone has been keeping me company for 3 years. ----It has been 3 year since I bought the cellphone.I love you.---Loving you is the meaning of my life.It is adj+ for sb to do sth(评价句型)It has been +时间长度since sb started to do sthIt is essential for me to love you.It has been 3 years since I fell in love with you.(2)变句式地点方位词---完全倒装Between the two buildings stands a young tree.否定词--部分倒装You should not hate your mom---By no means/At no time/On no account should you hate your mom.形容词、副词---部分倒装So fast does he run that none of us could catch up with him.只有。