It was an exciting trip.I hope to go there again.
1、看语法是否正确，包括单词的拼写，大 小写，标点，动词的时态、语态，名词的单复数， 形容词、副词的比较等级，主谓一致，冠词的用 法，词语的搭配等。 2、一定要数一数文章的词数，标点符号 不算。不过，这些问题在下笔之前应先有思考， 先有答案，免得在卷面上七涂八改，要知道“包 装”也很重要。
3．漓江的水非常的清澈（clean），可以看见小鱼在水里 游来游去。 climbed the mountain 4．我们还去爬了山，累但是很快乐。 5．我们还去城里购物，城市很漂亮，人们很友好。 要求：要点齐全，表达正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写 清晰、规范。可紧扣主题适当发挥，80词左右。
Writing practice实战演练
Opening sentences 开头
1 Last Sunday, I went to …with… 2.On May1st, we traveled to … 3.On Children’s Day ,we had a chance to go to…
Summary 结尾
1.To make a summary进行总结
审，列，连，查，誊 书面表达 请你以“A Visit to Guilin”为题，用英语写一篇 短文。提示语必须用上，只抄提示语不给分 提示内容： 1．去年暑假，我和我的爸爸妈妈去了桂林。 2．那天天气晴朗。我们乘着小船游览了漓江 3．漓江的水非常的清澈（clean）， 可以看见小鱼在水里游来游去。 4．我们还去爬了山，累但是很快乐。 5．我们还去城里购物，城市很漂亮，人们很友好。
Sample
根据提示写一篇日记, 记录五月一日(星期五) 你和朋友 一起去参观福建历史博物馆的事。 提示内容： 1.天气: 晴朗 sunny/fine It is about two kilometres away from… 2. 距离: 离家约两公里。（2 kilometers） 3. 交通工具: 骑自行车去。 It is about two kilometres from…to… 4. 时间: 八点出发, 十点回家。
Eg. What a wonderful place! I think we had a great time there. Although we were a little tired, we were very happy.
2.To show wishes表达愿望
Eg. I wish I can go there again if I have a chance. For your next vacation, why not consider visiting …
set off got back home/return home
5. 内容: 见到了许多照片, 实物等. 学到了很多东西。
learned a lot
6. 游人: 见到许多父母和孩子, 老师和学生, 士兵等。
soldiers
要求: 词数80个左右, 要符合日记格式, 可适当发挥。
Oral practice口头表达
Writing practice实战演练
审，列，连，查，誊 书面表达 请你以“A Visit to Guilin”为题，用英语写一篇 短文。提示语必须用上，只抄提示语不给分 提示内容： 1．去年暑假，我和我的爸爸妈妈去了桂林。 2．那天天气晴朗。我们乘着小船游览了漓江.
took a boat to visit Lijiang visited Lijiang by boat
根据提示写一篇日记, 记录五月一日(星期五) 你和朋友 一起去参观福建历史博物馆的事。 提示内容： It is about two kilometres 1.天气: 晴朗 sunny/fine away from… 2. 距离: 离家约两公里。（2 kilometers） 3. 交通工具: 骑自行车去。 It is about two kilometres from…to… 4. 时间: 八点出发, 十点回家。
Conjunctions 润滑剂（连接词、过渡词）
表顺序 first/then/next/finally 表递进 also/besides/even/what’s more 表并列、选择 and/or… 表转折 but/however/although 表原因 because
作文：
请你以“A Visit to the zoo”为题，根据提示用英语写一篇 短文。 提示内容： 1．那天天气晴朗，阳光灿烂。 2．动物园离我们学校有点远，我们乘公共汽车去那儿。 3．动物园人多，很挤。 4．我们参观了游客中心，看了海豚表演， 海豚聪明可爱，我非常喜欢他们。 5．我们去礼品店买了很多礼物，到下午五点才返校。
set off got back home/return home learned a lot
5. 内容: 见到了许多照片, 实物等. 学到了很多东西。 6. 游人: 见到许多父母和孩子, 老师和学生, 士兵等。
soldiers
要求: 词数80个左右, 要符合日记格式, 可适当发挥。
Sample
Friday May 1 sunny It was fine today. My friends and I went to visit Fujian History Museum. It is about two kilometres away from my home. So we decided to go there by bike. We set off at eight. At first, in the museum We saw many photos and many other things. We learne a lot. There we saw a lot of children with their parents, students with their teachers, and soldiers. At ten, we left the museum for home. We had a good time today.
A visit to the zoo
Last Sunday I went to the zoo with my classmates.The weather was fine and it was sunny all day.The zoo is far from my school,so we took a bus there.(We went there by bus.) There were many people in the zoo. It was very crowded. At first, we visited the Visitors’ Center. Then we watched a dolphin show,and it was very interesting. Dolphins are very cute and I like them very much.After that,we went to the Gift Shop and bought lots of gifts. Finally, we were tired but happy. We didn’t go back to school until five o’clock.
要求：要点齐全，表达正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写清晰、规 范。可紧扣主题适当发挥，8作分享
My summer holiday plans
慧眼识别：
闪光点？
错误？
Work harder now!
May you succeed in June!
Wish you all a good summer holiday!
English Writing
---travel diary
谈论过去的事：
写旅游日记
一般过去时： 1.过去的状态：主语+was/were+… 2.过去的动作：主语+V.ed
How to write a travel diary?
五 步 法
审、列、连、查、誊
审：审题（人称、主要内容、时态）
列：列出各要点,写出关键词/词组 连：词/词组-句-段-篇（开头、结尾、连接词） 查：检查人称，时态，拼写，短语和要点 誊：誊写作文，书面整洁