2020年中考英语作文总复习题
1.Write at least 60 words on the topic " …give(s)me courage"(以"…让我鼓起勇气"为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
在生活或学习中我们难免会遇到一些困难与挫折,面对困难我们需要鼓起勇气.请结合你的一次自身经历,补充完整标题,说一说什么令你鼓起勇气,谈一谈你是如何勇敢克服困难的.
(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分.)
The following is for reference only (以下表达仅供参考)
have difficulty in…
encourage me to…
try my best to…
【分析】高分句型一:
She gave me great help and encouraged me not to give up.
给了我很大的帮助,鼓励我不要放弃.encourage sb not to do sth鼓励某人不要做某事,give up 放弃
高分句型二:
I still remember when I failed in an exam,she encouraged me to keep trying.
我还记得当我考试不及格时,她鼓励我继续努力.I still remember 后跟了宾语从句,宾语从句中包含了when引导的时间状语从句,encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
【解答】My English gives me courage
I used to be lazy and had difficulty in learning English.I wasn't interested in English at
all.So my English was very poor.I almost gave it up.(遇到一些困难与挫折)Last year,my new English,Mrs Liu,had a long conversation with me.She gave me great help and encouraged me not to give up.【高分句型一】She taught me some good ways of learning English ,such as taking notes in class,watching English movies as often as possible and so on.(我英语不好,她教给我学习方法)I still remember when I failed in an exam,she encouraged me to keep trying.【高分句型二】When I had trouble in life,she told me to be brave.(学习、生活中遇到困难,她鼓励我)From then on.I tried my best to study English.Later I became more and more interested in English and made much progress.(努
力学习,取得进步)Now I'm very good at English.
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.。