举办一 次征文比赛,要求围绕 “You can lead a horse to water, but you can’t make it drink.”这一 主题发表意见. 请根据下列提示写一篇文章.
内容提示: 许多家长望子成龙,不惜重金送孩子上私
立学校,到国外留学,请家教,给他们买大量的 资料,电脑等,但往往这些都…… 注意事项:
Go into the park. Go forward. Cross the street. Turn right. →After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right.
作文: 1.记叙文
2.说明文
3.议论文
英语写作多数为指导性写作或称: 半命题写作，也就是说，是先给一定的材
料，然后让学生依据所给的材料按要求作文。 方法：组写、缩写、扩写、
改写、 或看图作文等。
一.写好句子
1.句子要正确：
1).Do you know where is the People’s Park ?
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How to Write a Composition ?
如何写好英语作文呢?
一.写好句子 1、句子要正确。
2、句子要平行。 3、句子要连贯。 4、句子要有逻辑性。 5、句子要避免过多重复。 6、句子要避免头重脚轻。 7、句子要避免汉式英语。
二.写好段落 三.用好过渡词 四.写好开头和结尾
This proves the meaning of the saying “You can lead a horse to water, but you can’t make it drink.” That is to say, you can give someone all the opportunities for success, but you can’t make every person successful.
listening to popular music.
→In my spare time, I enjoy swimming, skating……
→In my spare time, I’m fond of swimming,……
→In my spare time, my hobbies are swimming, skating……
4.句子要有逻辑性
I’m very interested in computer and won first prize last year.
→I was very interested in computer and won first prize last year.
5.句子要避免过多重复.
You will continue to walk. You’ll see a hill. You will go around the hill. You’ll get to a lake.
They spare no effort to offer their children as good a chance as possible: They not only send them abroad for further education and to private schools at great expenses, but also hire personal teachers. They buy all
→After walking for a while, you’ll come to a hill, walk round to the other side of the hill. There you’ll see a lake.
6.句子要避免头重脚轻
Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer are the main subjects.
2.句子要平行
In my spare time, I enjoy popular music and collecting stamps. →In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps.
3.句子要连贯
投稿人应提示内容,表明自己的观点:
Nowadays, knowledge is becoming more and more important with the development of society, so many parents expect the children to be useful or successful.
→The main subjects are Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.
7.句子要避免汉式英语 My spare lovers are swimming, skating, collecting stamps and
Kinds of learning materials, computers and so on. But no matter what their parents do for the children, what becomes of the children ? Some of them really make it, but most of them want to enjoy and relax themselves and at last they are really disappointing.
→Do you know where the People’s Park is?
2). There are many visitors enjoy the dish.
→Many visitors enjoy the dish.
→There are many visitors who enjoy the dish.