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医学英语论文摘要写作模板


摘要写作中的注意事项
冠词。主要是定冠词the易被漏用。the用于表 示整个群体、分类、时间、地名以外的独一无 二的事物、形容词最高级等较易掌握,用于特 指时常被漏用。这里有个原则,即当我们用the 时,听者或读者已经确知我们所指的是什么。
例如:
The machine is operated with (the) solar energy.
一、标题
(一)要求 • 1.简明扼要(short and concise) • (1)尽量控制在一行,但不是一个句子 • (2)不超过25个单词或120-140个字母 • (3)除DNA、RNA、CT等不用缩写 • 2.信息丰富(informative) • 3.便于索引(indexing) • 4.较长标题可采用副标题
6)与复数名词连用,指整个群体: They are the teachers of this school.指全体教师) They are teachers of this school. (指部分教师)
7)表示所有,相当于物主代词,用在表身体部位的名词前: She caught me by the arm.. 她抓住了我的手臂。 8)用在某些由普通名词构成的国家名称、机关团体、阶级、 等专有名词前: the People’s Republic of China 中华人民共和国 the United States 美国
• Chronic abdominal pain : A surgical or psychiatric symptom?
• Leptin: An independent risk factor of insulin resistance?
原题目:
Relationship between tissue type plasminogen activator and coronary vulnerable plaque in patients with acute coronary syndrome
title写作举例
• Preliminary experience in using high dose of methotrexate to treat ALL.
• High dose methotrexate therapy in acute lymphocytic leukemia
title写作举例
修改后:
Reduced plasma tissue type plasminogen activator in acute coronary syndrome patients with vulnerable plaque 伴有不稳定性斑块的急性冠脉综合征患者血浆组织型纤维蛋白溶酶 原激活剂下降
Reduced plasma tissue type plasminogen activator as a predictor of vulnerable plaque in patients with acute coronary syndrome 血浆组织型纤维蛋白溶酶原激活剂下降是急性冠脉综合征患者不稳 定性斑块的预测指标
摘要写作中的注意事项
5)用在序数词和形容词最高级,及形容词only, very, same等前面:
Where do you live? I live on the second floor. 你住在哪? 我住在二层。
That’s the very thing I’ve been looking for. 那正是我要找 的东西。
Abstract
• 目的(objective / purpose / aim) • 方法(materials and methods) • 结果(results) • 结论(conclusion)
论文摘要的作用:
“The function of the abstract of a scientific paper is to provide an overview of the paper so that the readers know the main story and a few essential details of your work without reading the whole text of the paper. The abstract should make sense both when read alone and when read with the paper.” – URMSBJ
• Vitamine D and prevention of colon cancer : Doses, duration and side effects
title写作举例
• A case report of SLE appearing pancreatitis and review of literatures
Abstract writing
By Shao jiaqing
国际医学杂志编辑委员会 ICMJE
• 生物医学杂志投稿统一要求 Uniform Requirements for Manuscripts
Submitted to Biomedical Journals (URMSBJ)
医学科研论文的格式
contractivity of diaphragm and its mechanism
修改后:Effect of Sheng-Mai injection on the contractivity of diaphragm in rats
原题目: × Study on the detection host cellular immunity after inoculation
医学科研论文必须具备以下几个部分: • (1)标题(title) • (2)摘要(abstract) • (3)引言(introduction) • (4)材料和方法(materials and methods) • (5)结果(results) • (6)讨论(discussion) • (7)致谢(acknowledgement) • (8)参考文献(references)
title写作Байду номын сангаас例
• Retinal arteriolar change is an indicator of coronary artery disease.
• Retinal arteriolar change as an indicator of coronary artery disease.
• Abdominal pain in the emergency room: Retrospective study on 170 consecutive cases
title写作举例
• Use MRI to conduct an in vivo study on the enlargement of the pituitary gland during normal pregnancy
• Pituitary gland enlargement during normal pregnancy: An in vivo study using magnetic resonance imaging
title写作举例
• A preliminary study on doses, duration and side effects of Vitamine D in prevention of colon cancer
不要使用无意义的词
× Studies on … × Investigation on … × Preliminary observation on … × The significance of … × A case report of …
VII. 英文题目
原题目: × Experiment study on the effect of Sheng-Mai injection on the
• A study of the relationship between the content of potassium in diet and blood pressure
• Diet potassium and blood pressure
title写作举例
• A retrospective study on 170 consecutive cases of abdominal pain in the emergency room
(二)标题写作中注意点
• 标题通常为名词短语 • 一般不包含谓语动词 • 疑问句时,可以使用谓语动词。
(二)标题写作中常用词组和表达方式
1.用…(方法/手段)对…进行研究/分析/观察/评价: Study(analysis/observation/evaluation/assessment) of (on) … (by) using 方法/ with工具)
摘要写作中的注意事项
9)用在表示乐器的名词之前: She plays the piano. 她会弹钢琴。 10) 用在姓氏的复数名词之前,表示一家人: the Greens 格林一家人 (或格林夫妇) 11) 用在惯用语中: in the day, in the morning (afternoon,evening),
• Pancreatitis in systemic lupus erythematosus (SLE): A case report and review of the literature
title写作举例
• Is chronic abdominal pain a surgical symptom or a psychiatric symptom ?
(二)标题写作中常用词组和表达方式
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