Parents will always accompany with their kids during the childhood.错误的原因：1accompany是与物动词要去掉withTeachers usually help children to gain knowledge about science, math and language, which are a regular part of daily life.错误的原因： 2 gain knowledge去替代acquire more common sense 后面定语从句的谓语动词应该是单数 which is important to their day-to-day decision making. 用单数If children live in a family full of violence and conflicts they can be very easy to get angry.错误的原因：人不能说easy, 应该说they can be temperamentalThis means that they can save much time and allocate this timeto company with 〔应该是accompany〕 their families or focus on their work to make more money.shopping online sometimes may mislead people make some unwise decisions (两个动词)It is because that children in cities can receive more information.错误的原因：去掉that， because本身就可以引导从句Online shopping is changing their lifestyles, they can shopping (应该是go shopping) via the Internet on smartphones, computers or other devices. They do not need (应该是need to) go out and it save 〔应该是saves〕 much time. Then they may have more time to stay with family or to do some social activities with friends.There are various products are saled 〔两个动词〕online and people can buy what they like without limit. For example they can buy a product which is produced in America through e-buy and this product may not be saled 〔应该是On sale〕 in stores. In this case,people buy more things so the local economy will see a (应该是an) increase.More and more libraries are equipped with advanced equipments to help readers.错误的原因：equipment是不可数名词，没有复数Technology has the changed the way of people to access knowledge.错误的原因：“of doing something“是正常的表达，可以说〞the way people access knowledge〞变成定语从句There are many people tend to search the web to gather information.错误的原因：两个动词，在“people〞后面加“who〞，使其变成定语从句2. Family life and parents 〔觉得这两个有点重复〕absolutely play a vital role in children’s life,while they 〔指代不清，改为children〕are also exposed to many external influences.4. Parents can encourage children to do their interested activities.(貌似没这个说法，改为activities that they are interested)错误的原因：interested过去分词不可能修饰没有生命的物体。

应该是do their favourite activities.7. the government should implement some policies to punish some behaviors such as destroy the environment.错误的原因：such as后面跟名词或者动名词的destroying1. Tourist play a vital role in preserving the environment.错误的原因：主谓不一致，改为touristsPeople who prefer to shopping online might spend more than they earn.错误的原因：prefer to do something.People are normally exposed to various news about celebrities,错误的原因：news不可数，不能用various形容Highly unemployment rates have also caused people to work overtime.错误的原因：highly是副词，不能修饰名词，只能说the high unemployment ratePeople will feel stressful and upset, if overwork.错误的原因：stressful不能修饰人，只能说stressed，而if 状语从句要写完整的句子，应该是if they overwork.Men are likely to pay closer attention on their career advancement when communicate with othersWhen 是连词，后面要加完整的句子，或者分词communicatingElderly people usually cannot have a good understanding of advanced technologies这里应该是do notIt has been argued that whether fast food advertisements should be banned.错误的原因：“whether〞去掉，主语从句里要有一个独立的句子。

There is an increasing number of young people seek jobs in cities.错误的原因：主谓不一致，is改成“are〞；两个动词seek，改成“seeking〞There has been an increase in the number of elderly population.错误的原因：〞the number of〞后面要加可数名词复数，population改成peoplePeople who age 50 and over have to retrain to survive in a competitive world.错误的原因：〞who age〞改成agedWe expose to a world of knowledge on the Internet.错误的原因：expose与物动词，要么加宾语，要么被动“we are expose d to〞Globalisation can cause harm to local economy错误的原因：economy可数名词不裸奔，要说the local economy or local economiesMany cities have lost character, which may caused by globalisation.错误的原因：情态动词要加动词原形，may be causedMany tall buildings are builded in recent years.错误的原因：“in recent years〞一般用完成时态，改成“have been built〞The views in a various of places seem to be similarity.错误的原因：应该是various或者a variety of;表语和主语不匹配，应该改成similar应该是thoroughThe cost of fuel will become increase错误：两个动词，应该将“become〞去掉Private car use can have negative effect on environment.错误：effect和environment都是可数名词，不裸奔，分别写上“a negative effect〞，还有“the environment〞People lack of knowledge about environmental problems.错误：〞lack of〞的lack是个名词，所以去掉“of〞，使其变成动词There is no doubt that regula rly exercise can improve people’s health.错误：“regularly〞副词不能修饰名词，应该是regularChildren can enjoy the fun of sports and thereby improving their health.错误：thereby的用法限制：1 前面是逗号，而不是and 2 后面是doing Watching movies became a popular pastime since 1999.错误：用“since+时间〞, 要用完成时态Mobile phones brought convenience and enjoyment to our commute.错误：bring enjoyment to是介词，应该是to commutingWhen it comes to teach children life skills, parents should take on more responsibilities.错误：when it comes to的to是介词，应该是to teachingThere a re good schools where provide a good education for children. ‘错误：where应该改成which，定语从句修饰schoolsPeople can live in places which near to the workplace.错误：定语从句缺少谓语动词，将which 去掉Living in a horizontal city where has less skyscrapers is beneficial to health.错误的原因：“where〞改成〞which〞， less改成fewerLiving in a large city may affect our moods and thus influencing our work and study.错误的原因：thus前面的and改成逗号A smaller class can allow a much faster progress.错误的原因：去掉a ，因为progress不可数the price of resources will be rised错误的原因：rise不与物, 直接写will risethe consumption of natural resources has negative impact to living standards.错误的原因：应该是a negative impact on, 因为impact 可数名词the high cost of living poses a threat to people’s qualities of life.错误的原因：应该是quality of life，这里的quality是不可数名词If shops do not sell unhealthy food, people could becoming more healthy.错误的原因：应该是could become healthierThey have to under the heavy pressure at work.错误的原因：主系表结构缺乏系动词，应该是“have to be〞Children can make decisions independent when they meet difficult.错误的原因：independent形容词不能修饰动词，只有写independently，而difficult是形容词，不能做宾语，应该是overcome difficulties.The consumption of some resources have caused severe potential damage to the environment.错误的原因：主语是consumption，谓语动词应该是hasRecently, the using of fossil fuels are required to cut down globally by an international organisation.错误的原因：recently 一般用完成时态；Fossil fuels as a essential industry resources which brought both benefits and pullotion.错误的原因：这个句子没有动词，应该去掉which；然后复数不能加上“a〞，去掉、Electronic books can be extemmely powerful in terms of providing you with convience and money-saving.错误的原因：money-saving是形容词，要变成saving moneyA increasing number of people using digital book instead of the real one.错误的原因：应该是an increasing …；而BOOK应该用复数booksA large population normally means more household garbage, thus result in serious pollution.错误的原因：1,thus不是连词， result改成resultingIn order to travel conveniently, private cars have increased.错误的原因：2 private car不能做travel conveniently的主语，increase的是the private car use. 整句话是“the private car use has increased because people want to travel conveniently〞There are more and more people want to live in urban areas.错误的原因：3 want 前面加who，否则这个句子两个动词As the fast accumulation of waste, soil degradation will become serious in some areas.错误的原因：as是从属连词，后面加句子 as waste accumulates rapidly These pollution in big cities leads to many diseases.错误的原因：These 只能加可数名词复数，而pollution不可数，可以说“this kind of pollution〞Living in mega city is good for people seeking medical advises.错误的原因：advice 不可数名词，而city可数名词没有复数。