Sentence 3
A
B 例1:
Children in secondary school study international news as a subject, but some think that’s a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
sentence2
改写 点题 易犯错误：1、2、 改写题目的三种方法： 1 2 3
例1：
Do you think it is better to send criminals to jail or let them receive education or job training?
Sentence1.The treatment of criminals has been open to debate in recent years. Sentence2. 1>There is much controversy over whether to send criminals to jails or onal view is that studying international news is of benefits to students./I am not convinced that it is necessary.
B. There are some points in both sides.
例2
Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s resources. Do you agree or disagree?
e.g.2 There is a gap between living in the city and living in the countryside. What are the reasons in your country and how can the difference be reduced?
雅思作文需要注意的几大问题
1.少用第一人称和第二人称 2.单词拼写：要用英式拼法，而不是美式拼
法 3.不要用缩写：don’t改成do not, isn’t改成is
not 等等 4.不要用比喻 5.不要少于规定字数：雅思大作文比较理想
的字数是270-300单词。
雅思大作文分
第一种：观点类report 第二种：讨论类argument 第三种：问题类 文章论述结构： 一边讨论， 两边讨论， 阐述
arrived. Sentence3. A. As far as I know, its benefits are far more overt than its downsides./My personal
view is that its benefits cannot justify its harmful effects. B. This essay will compare and contrast its benefits and downsides.
treating criminals.
例2
Police in Britain do not carry guns. Some people believe that it will make citizens unprotected, but some suggest that it would reduce violence in society. Discuss those two views.
In terms of standard of living, the gap between the city and the countryside is widening in many countries. There are some forces contributing to this phenomenon. The focus of this essay is to illustrate the causes and solutions of this problem.
Sentence1.
In some countries, such as Britain, it is a convention that police do not carry guns.
Sentence2.
1>There is a perception that it will make citizens unprotected, while a counterargument is that it would reduce violence in society.
1> The influence of advertising on our buying behaviors is a subject matter.
2> In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to the influence of advertising on our buying behaviors.
开头段
讨论类和观点类： Sentence 1: background
Sentence 2: rephrase the topic
Sentence3: personal opinion or brief description of the main body 问题类
sentence1
方向 介绍性 例1. Some people who have been successful in the society don’t attribute their success to the theoretical knowledge they learned from their university. Do you agree or disagree? 1>People have long been interested in identifying the forces that contribute to personal achievement. 2>The importance of theoretical knowledge to one’s success is a matter for debate.
receive education or job training. 2>Some people think that to send criminals to jails is better than to let them
receive education or job training. 3>Some people think that imprisonment is better than education or job training in
of water resource?
Water shortage is one of the most challenging issues to address in many countries. There are some factors leading to this problem. Some of the most common factors will be discussed below, followed by some responsible solutions.
开头段
问题类 Sentence 1≈讨论类、观点类
Sentence2=reasons/factors/forces/causes
Sentence3=content [factors/causes + solutions]
e.g.1 What are the causes and solutions of the problem of the scarcity
Sentence1.
International news represents one of the main sources of information from which we discover what is happening around the world.
Sentence2.
However, when it comes to including it in the curriculum at secondary school, there is an ongoing debate.
• 例2. The advertising is discouraging people from being different individuals and makes people to be or seem to be the same. Do you agree or disagree?
2>Some people think that citizens would be unprotected, while some suggest that violence could be reduced.
3>Some people think that it fails to protect citizens while some suggest that it would minimise violence in society.
知识回顾 Knowledge Review
Sentence1. There is little room for doubt about that convenience brought by air travel. Sentence2. However, when it comes to its impact on the environment, no conclusion has been