2023年广州一模大小作文评讲小作文·【投稿类】【2023广州一模】你校英文报“Teenage Life”专栏本期的主题为“Sports and Health”。

请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1．运动的重要性；2．你的运动建议。

注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Sports and Health【2023全国甲卷】你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。

内容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保护海洋的倡议。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。

【2022全国乙卷】学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom 为题的讨论。

请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1．学习活动状况描述：2．简单评论；3．你的建议。

高考小作类型：投稿分析：文章为投稿类型，在2022年全国高考的甲卷和乙卷分别都考察了投稿的文章类型。

有别于信件类，文章开头不能再写“Hi，I'm Lihua...”。

所以，学生首先要了解投稿的文章结构，才能下笔如有神。

★“投稿”结构：第一段：交代背景第二段：运动的重要性第三段：运动建议第四段：总结/呼吁1.第一段：交代背景A.备用句型：①众所周知As we all know,/ As is known to all,② 人们普遍认为... It is commonly acknowledged that ...③ 现今，随着XXX的发展Nowadays, with the development of ...随着XXX的日益流行Nowadays, with the growing popularity of ...④当谈及到XXX，XXX变得越来越...When it comes to XXX, XXX is becoming more and more ...B.内容---直接点题【广州一模】Sports and Health （重要）1)It is commonly acknowledged that sports are significant to our health.（运动于健康很重要）.2)保持良好的身心健康是非常重要的。

It's crucial to maintain good health, both physical and mental.3)众所周知，良好的健康对于每个人都非常重要。

As is known to all, good health is of vital importance to everyone.2.交代现状【Teenage 】成长的关键阶段；学业繁忙；没时间锻炼①我们仍然在成长的关键阶段。

we are still in the critical stage of growing up,② 作为高中生，我们过着忙碌的生活，忙于课业和课外活动As high school students, we lead busy lives juggling schoolwork and extracurricular activities.③ 然而，我们学生的课业负担很重，因此很少抽出时间进行定期体育锻炼However, we students are heavily burdened with school work, and thus spare little time for regular physical exercise.【2022年全国甲卷：世界海洋日】说到海洋，它的污染越来越严重。

6月8日是世界海洋日，旨在提高人们对海洋保护的认识。

When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious.World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.【2022年全国乙卷：课外学习英语】学习活动状况描述：如今，随着智能手机和电脑的日益普及，越来越多的学生选择在课堂之外以各种方式学习英语。

Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.第二段：运动的重要性/ 意义★句型：not only ... but also1)运动不仅可以锻炼我们的身体，还能帮助我们保持活力和健康。

Doing sports can not only build up our bodies, but also help us stay energetic and fit.2)运动不仅有助于我们保持健康和强壮，还可以振奋我们的情绪，缓解压力。

Having sports not only helps us stay fit and strong, but also boosts our mood and relieves stress.3)作为高中生，定期锻炼对我们的健康有益，不仅可以让我们的身体更强壮，还可以让我们摆脱紧张的学习压力。

As high school students, taking exercise regularly is beneficial to our health, which can not only make our body stronger but also free us from the intense study stress【海洋的重要性】海洋不仅为我们提供了充足的食物，而且保持了自然的平衡。

Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.灵活的连贯句运用：1)What is also worth mentioning is the role sports play in maintaining our mental health.2)While working out, we may become more contented, confident and determined.第三段：运动的建议1.中心句：因此，我有一些关于锻炼的建议。

Therefore, there are some advice for us to do exercise.To fully enjoy these benefits, here are some tips.2.建议句型：①祈使句。

首先, 选择你感兴趣的运动。

其次，去找一些好的锻炼伙伴。

最后，适当运动以防止受伤。

First, Choose the sport that interests you.Second, find some good workout partners.Lastly, exercise properly to prevent injuries.其他建议句型：We should do ... You’d better do...②形式主语It’s adj/ n for sb to do ...1) 这是我们步行或骑自行车上学的好机会。

It is a good chance/ way for us to go to school on foot or by bike.2) 提高学生自身的自律性是当务之急.It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline,3) 家长和老师也迫切需要加强指导。

it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.③动名词doing作主语1) 加入学校运动队或俱乐部可以为你提供必要的锻炼和归属感。

Joining a school sports team or club can provide you with the necessary workout and a sense of belonging.2) 周末可以和朋友一起游泳和爬山也是挺好的选择。

going swimming and climbing with friends at weekends are the available choices第四段：呼吁/倡议句型一：I (do)hope everyone will enjoy sports and live a healthy life.句型二：倒装句只有我们采取行动锻炼，我们才能在未来变得越来越健康Only if we take action to exercise can we be healthier and healthier in the future.句型三：虚拟语气It's high time that ....总而言之，现在是我们致力于保护海洋的时候了。

All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean.【运动与健康】范文（1）It is commonly acknowledged that sports are significant to our health. This is especially true for us teenagers. As we are still in the critical stage of growing up, doing sports can build up our bodies, thus helping us stay energetic and fit. What is also worth mentioning is the role sports play in maintaining our mental health. While working out, we may become more contented, confident and determined.To fully enjoy these benefits, here are some tips. First, choose the sport that interests you most and suits you best. Second, find some good workout partners. That way, it's more likely that you'll exercise regularly. Lastly, exercise properly to prevent injuries. I hope everyone will enjoy sports and live a healthy life.【运动与健康】范文（2）As high school students, we lead busy lives juggling schoolwork and extracurricular activities.It's crucial to maintain good health, both physical and mental.Having sports not only helps us stay fit and strong, but also boosts our mood and relieves stress.It's a great break from our workload that also benefits our bodies. Just find a form of physical activity that you enjoy and make it a part of your routine. Joining a school sports team or club can provide you with the necessary workout and a sense of belonging.Remember, taking care of our bodies is just as important as taking care of our minds. Make an effort each day, and your body and mind will thank you for it!【运动与健康】范文（3）As is known to all, good health is of vital importance to everyone. However, we students are heavily burdened with school work, and thus spare little time for regular physical exercise(背景). So I suggest we fit exercise into our busy schedule, making it part of our daily routine.(引出下文) As high school students, taking exercise regularly is beneficial to our health, which can not only make our body stronger but also free us from the intense study stress (运动对大家的好处physical &mental) . Therefore, there are some advice for us to do exercise. For example, it is a good chance for us to go to school on foot or by bike (建议1). Meanwhile, we should make good use of PE lessons to do some sports, such as running and playing basketball(建议2) What's more, going swimming and climbing with friends at weekends are the available choices(建议3).Only if we take action to exercise can we be healthier and healthier in the future.(倡议)【2022全国高考乙卷】范文Learning English Beyond the ClassroomNowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%. As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.【2022全国高考甲卷】范文When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.【2023广州一模·读后续写】第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。