高考英语图表作文
People’s Diet的短文。注意:1、尽可能少引用数据;2、词数100左
右。
1998 1999 2000 2001 2002
Grain 43% 42% 41% 41% 40%
Milk 13% 14% 14.5% 14.5% 15%
Meat 25% 25% 26% 26.5% 27.5%
Fruit 19% 19% 18.5% 18% 17.5% Vegetables
图表作文的框架 As is shown / indicated / illustrated by the figure/
percentage in the table (graph / picture/ pie/ chart), ___________ (作文题目的议题) has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/ increases/ drops/ decreases ), significantly / dramatically/ steadily rising / decreasing from ________ in _______to _______in _________. From the sharp/ marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that________.(描写趋势)
2、分析数据间的主要差异及趋势,然后描写(在描写数据间变化 及总趋势特征时,可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题,并阐明必 要的理由)。注意层次。常用词汇:
rise, increase, reduce, drop, decrease, fall, while, but, however, on the contrary, in contrast to, compare…to/with…, as…as, the same as, similar to, different from, difference between, among, more than, less than等等。
图表式作文
图表式作文写作要求学生通过对数据和文字内容进行分析与讨论, 系统准确地表达内容,并得出令人心服的结论。
图表式作文形式:
1、以表格形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式 体现出来,即统计表。
2、以图形形式,可分为: a) 以曲线形式表示数据变化的线形图; b) 以条形方式表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异; c) 以圆内扇形的大小表示总体内部结构变化的圆形图。
In a word, the changes are the signs of the improvement in people’s lives. There is no doubt that there will be greater changes in people’s die in the future.
Total 100% 100% 100% 100% 100%
分析:本统计表描述中国人民从1998年至2002年饮食结构的变化。
短文可分为三小节:
1) state the changes in people’s diet in the past five years; 2) give possible reasons for the changes; 3) draw your own conclusions.
第一步:点明主题。
There have been some changes in the diet of the Chinese people.
第二步:观察图表中数据的增减总趋势,分类式阐明,并说明原因。
Grain, the main food of the most people in China, is now playing a less important role. The amount of fruit and vegetables in the average person’s diet has also dropped by 1.5 percent from 1998 to 2002. The amount of milk and meat has increased.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ________.(给出原因) On the one hand, __________, on the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that_________. In addition, ________ is responsible for ____________. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
3、归纳总结或发表评论。常用词汇:
in a word, in short, generally speaking, It’s clear from the chart that…, We can draw the conclusion that…, We can learn/know…等等。
例题1:请你根据下表提供的信息写一篇题为:Changes in Chinese
The changes in diet can be explained by several reasons. For one thing, with the development of the economy, people can afford to buy better food. For another, people have realized the importance of a balanced diet. 第三步:归纳总结并得出结论。
第一季度 第二季度 第三季度 第四季度
100 80
60 40
20 0 第一季度
第二季度
第三季度
第四季度东部 西部 北部来自图表式作文三步骤:1、开门见山:点明图表所反映的主题。常用词汇: table, chart, graph, figure, describe, tell, show, represent 等等。