• determined • capable • warm – hearted • easy – going • energetic
• generous • intelligent • ambitious • attractive/ • charming
• 健忘的 • 诚实的 • 幽默的 • 勤奋的 • 独立的 • 谨慎的 • 多话的 • 健康的 • 耐心的 • 宽容的
• 我们的老师都很热情。
Our teachers are all enthusiastic.
• 吴尊很受年轻人的欢迎。
Wu Zun is very popular with the young.
• 我的理想是到中山大学主修音乐。
My dream is majoring in music at Zhongshan University.
Self-introduction & Introduction to a Person
（一）人物介绍的写作步骤；
概况）age, sex, birth-place, background 外貌和性格）appearance ,character 爱好）hobbies 平时事）big events in one’s life ( in
• forgetful • honest • humorous • diligent • independent • cautious • talkative • healthy • patient • tolerant
• 严格的 • 谦虚的 • 考虑周到的 • 杰出的 • 乐观的 • 悲观的 • 热情的 • 心不在焉的 • 脾气不好的 • 举止得体的 • 有天赋的
→There are many students who enjoy the lessons.
2.句子要平行
In my spare time, I enjoy popular music and collecting stamps. →In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps.
1.句子要正确： 1).Do you know where is my school?
→Do you know where my school is?
2). There are many students enjoy the lessons
→Many students enjoy the lessons.
order of time )
评价）evaluation or self-evaluation
概貌好平评
A. 概况 （尽量用非谓语/同位语结构，
使文章简洁，通顺) 1) Born in ______ on __________, ________ is a
________________. 2) ___________, the son of a _____ family, was
→In my spare time, I enjoy swimming, skating……
→In my spare time, I’m fond of swimming,……
→In my spare time, my hobbies are swimm• 热心肠的 • 随和的 • 精力充沛 • 慷慨的 • 聪明的 • 雄心的 • 有吸引力的
4.句子要有逻辑性
I’m very interested in computer and won first prize last year.
→I was very interested in computer and won first prize last year.
5.句子要避免过多重复.
I am talking all the time in my class,I can’t help talking and I know talking in the class is not a good habit.
• strict • modest • considerate • outstanding • optimistic • pessimistic • enthusiastic • absent – minded • bad – tempered • behave well • gifted / talented
Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.
7.句子要避免汉式英语 My spare lovers are swimming,
skating, collecting stamps and
listening to popular music.
→I am a talkative boy in my class and I know it is not a good habit.
6.句子要避免头重脚轻 Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer are the main subjects. →The main subjects are
3.句子要连贯
Go into the park. Go forward. Cross the street. Turn right. →After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right.
Practice sentences
• 我总是举止得体。
I behave myself well.
• 李泳不但很有天赋而且很勤奋。
Li Yong is not only gifted but also diligent.
• 陈翔铎是个很有能力的英语课代表。
Chen is a very capable English monitor.