四六级作文常犯错误(1)语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。
在实际的阅卷过程中,语法错误,尤其是较为严重的错误,是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”,有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的,大家可以设想一下,一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分,那将得不偿失。
因此,认清各种各样的语法错误,尽可能地避免少犯,对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。
现将我们在阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类,抽出其中的典型错误,以警示大家,供参考。
1.句子成分残缺不全We always working till late at night before taking exams. (误)We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams (正)We should read books may be useful to us. (误)We should read books which may be useful to us. (正)2.句子成分多余This test is end,but there is another test is waiting for you.(误)One test ends ,but another is waiting for you.(正)The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误)The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正)3.主谓不一致Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective.(误)Some think that reading should be selective.(正)My sister go to the cinema at least once a week.(误)My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week.(正)4.动词时态、语态的误用I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)We have little time to read some books which we interest. (误)We have little time to read some books in which we are interested.(正)I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. (误)I have been studying in the college for two years (正)5.词类混淆It is my point that reading must be selectively.(误)In my opinion,reading must be selective. (正)Honest is so important for every person. (误)Honesty is so important for everyone. (正)The old man was hit by a car when he across the street. (误)The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. (正)6.名词可数与不可数的误用Too much tests are disadvantage for students study. (误)Too many tests are disadvantageous to students. (正)In modern society, people are under various pressures (误)In modern society, people are under various kinds of pressure.(正)7.动词及物与不及物的误用The traffic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways.(误)The traffic accident took place at the junction of two highways.(正)Because of his excellent performance, the boss rose his salary.(误)Because of his excellent performance, the boss raised his salary.(正)8.介词to和不定式符号的混淆Too many tests will do harm to cultivate our independent thinking.(误)Too many tests will do harm to the cultivation of our independent thinking. (正)All these contributed to solve the serious problem. (误)All these contributed to the solution to the serious problem. (正)9.情态动词的误用It may not good to our health.(误)It may be not good to our health. (正)They should spent much time.(误)They should spend much time.(正)10. There be句型的误用There exists some new problems such as being dishonest. (误)There exist/arise some new problems such as being dishonest.(正)There are many way to solve the tuition and fees of college education.(误)There are many ways to raise the money for the tuition and fees for college education.(正)1.动宾搭配不当We must pay attention to it and make solutions to the problem.(误)We must pay attention and find a solution to the problem. (正)It also may help you to make success. (误)It may also help you succeed/obtain your goal.(正)2.根据中文逐字硬译If someone‘s family situation is not well,he can apply for loan to bank.(误)If one‘s family is not well off,he can apply to the bank for a loan. (正)Let alone touch the outside world of campus/keep a good body health(误)Let alone get in touch with the world outside of the campus/keep fit(正)上面这些错误比较典型、集中,请大家务必要注意,其他的错误,如单词拼写、大小写、标点符号的误用等,可谓千姿百态,无奇不有,在此就不一一列举。
常见写作错误(2)一、主语错误1. 主语缺失1)In our country feels very free.People feel free in our country.2)In my hometown aren’t very busy.People in my hometown are very busy.2. 非名词主语1)Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life.Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life. / Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible.Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.3. 主谓错位1)Reading books can acquire knowledge.People can acquire knowledge from books.2)Now people’s lives can’t leave TV.Now people can’t do without TV.二、谓语错误1. 多重谓语1)In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated.In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated. / A large number of people have fallen victim to various tricks.2) Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad. Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad. / Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad. / Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad. / Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty.2. 非动词谓语1)Some people firmly agree, but others against it.Some people firmly agree, but others are against it.2)It is said that the place worths touring.It is said that the place is worth touring.3. 主谓不一致1)I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English.I have to visit the teacher who teaches me College English.2)I use a disk because it hold plenty of data.I use a disk because it holds plenty of data..4. 误用词组1)They insist on post-graduate study is very important for them.They insist that post-graduate study is very important for them.2)I am afraid of that it’s going to rain.I am afraid that it’s going to rain.三、冠词错误1)In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.In my opinion, the future of the bicycle is very promising.2) They suggest that we should choose only the good books to read and never touch the bad ones.They suggest that we should choose only good books to read and never touch bad ones.四、代词错误1. 偷梁换柱1)An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize.An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, he should not plagiarize.2)If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.If we cheat others, friends will never believe us and they will leave us along. / If you cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.2. 指代不明1)He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting. / He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.2)Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden they have to bear.Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden students have to bear.五、形容词、副词错误1)What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look differently.What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look different.2)Surprising enough, he faces the failure very bravely.Surprisingly enough, he faces the failure very bravely.六、分词误用1) Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.Compared with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.2) Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewing through my camera.Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewed through my camera.七、修饰语误置1) Spoken English is an important part for learning English people.Spoken English is an important part for people learning English.2)To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.To keep the air clean, we must move to the countryside the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.八、垂悬修饰语1) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved their living standard.2)To tell my friend the good news, the letter was posted at once.To tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at once.九、平行错误1) While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.While we reduce the number of vehicles, we can increase the speed of traffic.2) Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty and length of the course. / Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted.十、搭配错误1) In the past the price of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford it.In the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford it.2) Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.Heavy traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.十一、破句Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the job interview.Nowadays, if you want to find a job, you must pass the job interview.2) First you should show good manners. Because the first impression you leave on others is important.First you should show good manners, beacuse the first impression you leave on others is important .四六级作文错误(3)1. 不一致(Disagreements)所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等。