• 递进关系： furthermore；what’s more； not only...but also...； not...but...；, besides； in other words；on the one hand...，on the other hand...； meanwhile； at the same time；
英语建议信
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
小结；呼应主题
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要符合英
语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多
用一般现在时和一般将来时。
建议信的模板
Try and write me in Chinese next time. Best wishes！
Yours,
Li Hua
• Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice
on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try to write to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes
Li Hua
练习
• 假如你是李华，从你的美国朋友Peter来信中得 知，他一直因为自己身体太胖而苦恼，请你用 英文给他写一封Email，提出你的建议。主要 内容包括：
• 1.保持饮食平衡，不要吃的太多； • 2.适量运动； • 3.不吃垃圾食品。 • 参考词汇：过重overweight 名词；
保持饮食平衡keep a balanced diet
（1）提出写信的原因 第一段 或提出对方面临的问题
（2）过渡句引出建议
第二段
(3) 提出第一条建议； (4) 第一条建议的理由； (5) 提出第二条建议及理由； (6) 提出第三条建议及理由
第三段 (7) 总结并表达本人的愿望
• 注意衔接词使用: • 表先后次序： • First, second, third….Finally • Firstly, secondly，…eventually • to begin with/ to start with, at last
First, you should attach great importance to listening carefully in class and taking notes. Second, what worries me is that many students copy the homework, which is bad for their study. So you must make up your mind to do it by yourself. Besides, it is of great importance to practice listening and speaking every day. Only by practicing more can we learn English better. The last but not the least, you’d better read more articles after class. It is a wide vocabulary that helps you improve your English.
• 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向 你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列 要点写回信。
• 要点： 1. 参加中文学习班。
2. 看中文书刊和电视。 3. 学唱中文歌曲。
4. 交中国朋友。
注意：1. 词数120左右
2. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for
my advice on ______________________________
_______________________________________ _____________________________________ __________________________________
First, why not…..? If you do this,…../ First, you’d better ….. Otherwise, you will…..
Secondly, you should/can…. Then / That way
Thirdly, it would be a good idea if…. By doing this,… ●Para3
假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学 的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议， 帮助他学好英语。
内容提示：
1. 课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记 2. 课后认真独立完成作业 3. 每天进行英语听说练习 4. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量
建议信模板
●Para 1
I’m sorry to hear that…../I’m sorry you are having trouble in…… however, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you./ I am sorry to hear that you ….. so I write this letter with the purpose of giving you some advice on how to ●Para 2
As far as I am concerned, practice makes perfect. Only when you try your best will you have a good command of English.
连接词
• First • Second • Besides • The last but not the least
积累好词好句
• ①have trouble learning English • ②with the purpose of • ③attach great importance to listening • ④what worries me is that many students
copy the homework, which is bad for their study. • ⑤make up your mind to do • ⑥it is of great importance to do
I do hope you will find these ideas useful./I do hope that my suggestions will be helpful to you.
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble learning English, so I write this letter with the purpose of giving you some advice on how to learn it better.
积累好词好句
• ⑦Only by practicing more can we learn English better.
Only when you try your best will you have a good commandocabulary that helps you improve your English.