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高中英语作文写作——如何写建议信
润色小建议
“高峰期”可意译: at peak time, a large current of cars and people “交通繁忙”可译为: traffic jam congestion 交通堵塞 be choke up with
be crammed with 被…堵塞/塞满
加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤
addition, _____(建议二). What’s more _____(建议三).
I hope you’ll find these proposals useful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Dear____, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _____, and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _____. I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you / your ______(祝愿). Yours sincerely Li Ming
思考的问题 第几人称?(person)
文章的体裁是什么?
样题分析
第一人称 一封信
通拥挤的状况
要写的文章主题是什么 (topic) 建议政府采取措施舒缓交
怎样安排信息点的顺序? (order) 动作是什么时候发生的?(时态) (when)
说理逻辑性 一般现在时
书面表达如何写?
三 个
Step 1 List the key nts
my suggestions.
5. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. 6. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
假如你叫孙军,是红星高中的学生,要给市长 写一封信,反映学校门前交通拥挤现象,包括 以下要点: 问题 建议
第二步:搜索相关词组或句型
问题
建议
学校和一所小学毗 政府应采取措施 , 邻,对着大街,高 如修天桥等。 峰期交通繁忙;加 之孩子小 , 家长接 送。交通更拥挤; 学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。
学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街
stand next to… primary… face/be faced with… the main street… 推荐句型:There be+并列句 There’s a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street. 非谓语结构 Our school stands next to a primary school, faced with/facing the main street. Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street.
将介词短语提前(全倒装) Next to a primary school stands/lies/is our school
, faced with / facing a main street.
润色小建议
可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语 be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与…毗邻 在…对面 be opposite to
(照应材料,表明写作意图)
1. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry
5. I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you.
6. You have asked me for some advice with regard to … and I will try to make some conductive suggestions. 7. You have asked me for my advice about/on …
B. 表达建议(body)
1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 2. I would like to suggest/recommend that… 3. If I were you, I would… 4. Why not …?/ How (What) about doing … First,/Firstly,/ Secondly,/ Then,/ After 5. …is a In good/great idea. Finally, /Meanwhile, that,/ the end,/ 6. You may more,/ consider doing … /What’s 7. It would seem/seems to me Furthermore, that you could …… In addition,/ Besides,/ 8. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 9. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should…
C.建议信结尾常用句式
1. I believe you will take my advice into account/ consideration.
2. I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/
recommendations practical/ useful/ helpful. 3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider
书面表达专题
---How to write a letter for advice
如何算是一篇好文章? 要 -覆盖了所有的要点 点 -应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 全 词汇,句型 (高级)和语法 多样化(较复杂)语言地道
连 接 词
-有效地使用了语句间的连接成 分,使全文结构紧凑,行文连贯, 条理清楚。
Step 2 Make sentences
步 骤
Step3. Form a passage and polish
适当运用模 板
模板二:
Dear _____(对象),
I am writing to express my views concerning
______(问题).
First and for the most, _______(建议一). In
常用套语
A.建议信开头常用句式
to know that … 2. I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3. I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter 4. I am writing to you for the purpose of …
•高峰期交通繁忙…..
traffic…. during the rush hours The traffic is busy during the rush hours. During the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic. so…. that… During the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road that… with结构 With so many cars and buses going on the road, …
加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤 What’s more, … pick up…. make…. To make things worse/ What’s worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded. In addition/ Additionally, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier. What’s more, parents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams. What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.
写作要点: 1.建议信:作者就有关问题进行分析并针对 这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。 2. 对象: 1)写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己 的看法和观点; 2)写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。