2021年高考英语题型集训之话题写作05学校生活1.假定你是李华, 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together,内容包括:1. 短片内容:学校的发展;2. 放映时间、地点;3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】NoticeIn order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.The short movie Growing Together is about the development of our beloved school. It will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Everyone will be welcome to watch it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.Please do not be late.Student Union 【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一份书面通知。
【详解】第一步:审题:通知观看英文短片Growing Together人称:第三人称时态:一般现在时、一般将来时结构:总分法,分三部分,第一部分说明通知的目的,第二部分说明通知的具体细节内容,第三部分提醒准时到达。
要点:1.说明通知的目的①观看英文短片①告知放映时间、地点:6月9日下午2:30——4:00 ,在图书馆2.通知的具体细节内容① 短片内容:关于学校的发展①欢迎观看,观影后参加讨论并提出意见3.提醒准时到达第二步:列提纲(重点词汇、短语)have a better understanding of;be shown;organize;relevant details;the development of;meaningful;interesting;enjoy the movie;have a heated discussion;give comments第三步:连词成句(1) You should have a better understanding of our school.(2)An outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th.(3)It is organized by the Student Union.(4)Here are some relevant details about it.(5)The short movie Growing Together is about the development of our beloved school.(6)It will be meaningful and interesting.(7)Everyone will be welcome to watch it.(8) You will enjoy the movie, have a heated discussion afterwards and give your own comments.(9)Please do not be late.根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型,注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)将第一个句子作目的状语,连接下面两个句子(1) You should have a better understanding of our school.(2)An outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th.→In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th.用not only… but also并列句式改写下面的句子(6)It will be meaningful and interesting.→It will be not only meaningful but also interesting.将第二句子改写成用现在分词作状语,连接下面两个句子(7)Everyone will be welcome to watch it.(8) You will enjoy the movie, have a heated discussion afterwards and give your own comments.→Everyone will be welcome to watch it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次,增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】范文要点全面,结构清晰,层次分明,上下文连贯,在表达时用到了很多高级词汇,如have a better understanding of;be shown;organize;the development of;meaningful;interesting;have a heated discussion;give comments 等;复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次,如目的状语的运用in order to have a better understanding of our school…;被动语态的运用使句式多变It is organized by the Student Union;现在分词作状语的运用Everyone will be welcome to watch it,enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments等。
2.假定你是李华。
上周日你校邀请本市志愿援助武汉抗击新冠病毒的刘医生为全校师生做了一场演讲,大家深受感动和鼓舞。
请你就本次活动给校园英语报写一篇报道。
内容包括:1. 活动时间和地点;2. 活动内容;3. 活动的意义。
注意:词数80左右。
新冠病毒Covid-19_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________【答案】Last Sunday, our school held a meaningful activity at our school lecture hall. Mr. Liu, a doctor from our local hospital who volunteered to Wuhan this spring to fight against Covid-19, was invited to deliver a speech for us. All the teachers and students were deeply moved and inspired byhis heroic deeds. At the end of his speech, we showed our respect for Mr. Liu with applause. We learned a lot from him and many students said that they wanted to be a doctor in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类写作,要求写一篇报道。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华。
上周日你校邀请本市志愿援助武汉抗击新冠病毒的刘医生为全校师生做了一场演讲,大家深受感动和鼓舞。
请你就本次活动给校园英语报写一篇报道。
内容包括:1. 活动时间和地点;2. 活动内容;3. 活动的意义。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):hold a meaningful activity (举办一次有意义的活动);school lecture hall(学校演讲厅);volunteer to do(志愿做某事);fight against(抗击);deliver a speech(发表演讲);deeply moved(深受感动);heroic deeds(英雄事迹);at the end of(在……结束时);applause(掌声)等。