人物荟萃Describing people点拨：人物主题训练为主题之榜首，可见它的重要性。

在这个主题训练中，学生可以向各行各业的成功人士和周围熟悉的人物学习，并撰写有关的小作文。

很明显，榜样力量、人物奋斗等话题都可以从此主题的训练中得到启示。

主题词汇：Appearance:good-looking,pretty,beautiful,lovely,medium,height/build,of average height(中等身材)，well-built,overweight, slim,middle-aged,very fit, a fair complexion, long wavy black hair, wear glasses, always smileCharacter: brave, self-confident, honest, patient, easy-going,outgoing, energetic, forgetful, generous, talented, hard-working, helpful, selfless, punctual, humorous, optimistic, help sb. with sth., get along well with, learn from, help each other, reasonable, good-tempered, get rid of bad habits, straightforward, considerate, insist on, never give up常用句型：1.Mr. Green is a reporter who...2.He’s kind and polite.3.I like/enjoy doing...I’m good at...4.I’m interested in...5.My favorite subject is...6.She will have challenges, but life can still be good.7.She is a strong-willed person. She never gives up on anything.8.He is a little shy. His fave goes red when the teacher asks him a question.9.My mum has a hot temper. I dropped a cup this morning and she exploded.10.She is a very merry girl. Her cheeks are always rosy and she skips more than she walks.11.When he fails, he will insist on practising again and again and get ready for another match.12.I like my English teacher because whenever students ask her questions, she’s always ready to help them.13.After class, she likes teaching us English songs to make us more interested in English.模拟试题：The person I admire most is...1.Who is the person you admire most?(What does he/she look like?)2.Why do you admire him/her/3.What can you learn from him/her?要点分析：1.这是一篇记叙（一件事）与描写（人的外貌和性格特征）相结合的文章。

2.记叙一件事用一般过去时，而描写一个人用一般现在时。

3.记叙一件事避免报流水账，可选用典型事例。

4.结尾要扣题，可适当用从句或排比句。

写作思路：一：写出你最钦佩的人1.I admire...most.2.I like a bunch of singers. All of them are excellent. But the person called Eminem is the one I admire most.二：描述他/她的外貌，品格及作为（成绩/成就）1.He is very brave and is a man of iron.2.He is famous not only for his amazing height, but also for his perfect skills in basketball.3.Mum, it is a word full of love.4.When I have some trouble with something , she helps me. When I want to give up, she encourages me. She always shows me her love and patience.5.She teaches me a lot of things about how to be a brave man.6.She is very kind. Whenever someone is absent from school because of illness, she will go to his house to help him with the missed lessons.7.I think he is a confident and brave man, and he has broken the record of the 110-metre hurdle race. He is a hero in the whole Asia.8.He spent almost all his time making our life better.9.No matter how serious mistake I made, he always forgave me.10.He always shows great respect to his parents, string love to his wife and enough care to me.11.She always helps others who are in trouble.12.He is not only good at studies but also honest and always ready to help others.13.He is also fond of English and takes an active part in English activities.14.He is an elderly man but has a lot of energy.15.I usually tells him my secrets and he always gives me good advice.16.He is a legend in American Rap history indeed.17.Once I was affected by what he did.18.I think she is patient and helpful.19.She is good-tempered and well-mannered.20.When he worked as a clerk, he didn’t lose his burning desire.21.However, it is surprising that he didn’t play basketball well at first and he was even shy.22.He never gives up and always works hard and tries his best to lead his team to a success.23.When I get confused, she gives me helpful suggestions and points out the way for me.24.His ambition was to be a famous singer but his family was too poor to pay for his study.25.She’s little educated. But in my eyes, she is absolutely a glamorous woman.26.Friends never run away from difficulties. It is always shown that true friends always stay together with their friends in times of difficulties.27.Understanding: friends understand each other without even saying a word. A single smile can brighten up the faces of all the friends.谈谈你的感受：1.Because of her, I know how to overcome difficulties.2.I admire him because he is the one who gives me the best things and loves me from the beginning of my life.3.She will be with me forever.4.She is a superwoman in my heart.5.I should try my best to study and work so that my dream can come true.6.That’s why I admire him/her most.7.He has set a good example to me.8.From him, I know what the saying “No pains, no gains”means.9.Only through persistence can he realize his dream.10.I learn that life needs strong will and hard work.11.Unless you work hard, you will miss the success.12.Although my father becomes older and older, he is still the person who I admire most.13.He is not only a father but also a friend.14.I admire him not only for his perfect songs, but also for...15.No matter what happens, if you are ambitious and hard-working, you will succeed sooner or later.16.She taught me a lot about life and future.17.That’s what I learn from her.18.I learn to be patient and determined from hi,.19.I’ve learnt that success isn’t easy to achieve, but if you are ambitious, you will succeed sooner of later.20.She always gives me a lot of ideas on how to make my own life better.21.Great people are remembered not because they were handsome or beautiful, but because they did not give up when their lives were difficult.22.Hard work, not good luck is the reason why he could become world-famous.23.When i feel sad, her/his story always helps me feel better.24.That is why I admire her. I would like to follow her example, and serve as a doctor in the future.范文：1.There are many people in my life. Among them, I admire my mother most. She is good-looking and of average height. She is a well-built woman as well. She has big eyes and short black hair, she is good0tempered and considerate. Last year, i met some difficulties in my study and i couldn’t solve them. I really wanted to give up at that time. But my mother told me to insist on studying and never give up. She said, “No pains, no gains.”I was encouraged by her. At last, i overcame the difficulties and got a good mark. From her, i learn we should never give up even though there are lots of difficulties. Mum, I admire you most.2.Mother is the most important person in everyone’s life. Since I was born, my mother has cared for me for 15 years. Though I was very naughty when I was a child, my mother always forgave me. But she also told me what could be done and what couldn’t be done. As the time goes, I’m not a thoughtless girl any loner. With the help of my mother, i become an excellent student in school and a kind daughter in family. I love my mother who gives me life and a warm home to live in. I love my mother who leads me to a bright and right way in my life. Maybe she isn’t pretty, wise orrice, but there’s not doubt she is the most important person in my life.3.The person i admire most is my father. He is a strong and healthy man because he often does some exercise to become more and more healthy. He always shows great respect to his parents, strong love to his wife and enough care to me. He works hard and tries hard to make our life better. He doesn’t often get home until none o’clock. He is really a hard-working person. He has set a good example to me. From him, i know that i must study harder so that i can have a good life in the future.4.I admire Mr Wang most. She is a great teacher who has been teaching for nearly 30 years. In my eyes, she is very smart. Her teaching methods are different from those of other teachers. She makes every class interesting. She does not teach in a boring way. Sometimes she lets us exchange ideas and have a debate in class. That is why we like her lessons. I shall never forget all the things Mr Wang does to help me. Thanks to her help, I have made rapid progress in English. Here I just want to tell her that thank you for caring so much for me.5.Everyone has his or her favourite teacher, so do I. my favorite teacher is Miss Li, our English teacher.Miss Li is beautiful. She has big eyes and curly hair. She wears glasses. Most of all, I like her because she is very kind to us. Three years ago, when I started at my school, I found English very difficult. At first, Miss Li seemed very strict. But she asked students having difficulties in English to go to her office where she helped them in person. Little by little, I began to see she is very kind and patient. She explains everything to us until we understand it. She never gives up on students like me who have trouble with English. She tells us not to worry and never to give up. She inspires me and makes me try my best to study English. I have made great progress over the last three years.Time flies! I’m going to graduate soon and I really want to say, “Thank you, my beloved teacher.”6.During these three years, I can’t go through without her help. She is my deskmate, Mary. She isa really kind girl who often helps me with my lessons. At first, i was not very glad of sitting beside her because she was so excellent, and that would bring me too much pressure. However, one thing changed my opinion and we became close friends.On a clod winter morning, I got a bad cold. Nobody noticed that I felt very sad. When mydeskmate knew that, she ran to the school clinic and bought some medicine for me. Then she gave me some fruit and prepared hot water for me. Looking at her busy doing these things, I was moved entirely. Thanks to her help, I spent the terrible day happily.That is my deskmate. She gave me help and warmth. I feel lucky that I have such a good deskmate. She is the sunshine in my world!7.As the saying goes, “There is a golden house in the books.” The book is the most important friend in my life.First of all, when I am reading, I am just life talking to a knowledgeable friend. He gives me a lot of information. Second, when I am in trouble, the fiend often gives me suggestions, which are very useful. Last but not the least, Mr Book is the light to my soul. He teaches me if life gives you lemons, then make lemonade.Read thousands of books and travel thousands of miles. Book is the most important friend in my life.。