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高中英语---读后续写素材:人与动物精彩描写

读后续写素材:人与动物精彩描写关于狗的神态描写How to make the dog in your writing vivid and eye-catching?1.Upon his master’s arrival, the dog leapt to his feet ,snorted happily and bounded forward.(高兴狗狗)2.The dog curled into a wet lump and lay shivering on the ground. (可怜狗狗)3.Aware of the immense danger, the crippled dog was doing impression of a corpse. (胆怯狗狗)4.He stretched, shook himself and circled several times before dropping to the ground.(伸个懒腰抖抖身,保证有个好睡眠)5.With pricked ears, he watched for a moment and then yawned. (警觉狗狗)6. Lying on the ground,the dog kept his eyes wide open, ears flat,a vibrating growl deep in his chest.(别惹我,后果自负)7.The dog wandered off to rest her noses in her paws.(我想静静,不想理你)8. Dogs take much pleasure in rolling and rubbing their necks and backs with their paws.(调皮狗狗)9.Seeing the meat in the master’s hand, the little dog wagged its tail and watched with hopeful eyes.(馋狗狗)10.At the sight of a stranger approaching the house, the dog watched him, earsup, head slightly cocked. (高度戒备狗狗)11.The dog, when intently watching and slowly approaching the prey, kept one ofits fore-legs doubled up for a long time, ready for the next cautious step.(伺机一扑,成败在此一举)12.Little puppies enjoy playing growling and biting each other’s faces and legs.(天真烂漫小可爱)13.The dog got worried, crawling up around the old man’s feet as if to seek for safety and warmth. (好怕怕,别过来)A heroic dogLike most dogs whose homes are situated on large plots of land,one New Zealand dog regularly went off exploring through the farmland around his home for hours at a time.But as Louie,a sheepdog rescued from a shelter when he was just a puppy,got older,his trips got shorter and shorter.Now that Louie is 12 years old,he chooses to stay close to home and hardly ever goes out to explore any more,which is why his family was so worried when herecently disappeared and didn't return home as usual.“My mother was a little upset as he had stopped his wandering,” said Marolyn Diver,whose parents own Louie.“We were very concerned that he might forget where his home was.” But thankfully,Louie turned up at the house a few hours later.“He looked so tired and had basically just collapsed(崩溃),”Marolyn said.“We were concerned that someone might have hurt him.But then we realized there was a small note attached to Louie's collar.After reading the note,I felt complete relief and relaxed,and then my heart melted.”“Louie is the hero of the day,” read the note,which was written by a neighbor about a mile away.“He led me to Maddy in distress stuc k under a pile of branches.Cheers,Rob.” “According to Rob,Louie was waiting for him at his house and demanded to be followed.Rob said that he was 100 percent sure that Louie knew what he was doing,and leading him to Maddy was his pure focus,” Marolyn expla ined.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:Once Rob found Maddy, Louie helped him dig herParagraph 2:“That night we were very worried about Louie,” Marolyn【参考范文】Once Rob found Maddy,Louie helped him dig her out. According to Rob,Louie pulled at branches and dug her out of the ground.Rob said that as soon as Maddy was free,both dogs ran to a nearby pond and jumped into it and began to drink water.Then he gave Louie a huge handful of dog biscuits as a thank-you.He knew that Louie might get in trouble for being late for home,so he thought he would write a small note to explain why Louie was absent.“That night we were very worried about Louie,” Marolyn said.“He could hardly walk and looked terrible.We were concerned that he might not make it through the night.” Thankfully,Louie was back to normal the next morning when Rob came by with Maddy for a visit.Marolyn said,“It has changed the way I look at him.And I think my parents feel the same way.I'm so proud of him.”02阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

It was one of the hottest days of the dry season. We had not seen rain in almost a month. The crops were dying.Cows had stopped giving milk. The streams were long gone back into the earth. If we didn't see some rain soon we would lose everything.I was in the kitchen making lunch for the family when I saw my six year- old son,Billy,walking toward the woods.I could only see his back. He wasn't walking in his usual way. He was obviously walking with a great effort,trying to be as still as possible. Minutes after he disappeared into the woods,he came running out again,toward the house.Moments later,however,he was once again walking in that slow and purposeful step toward the woods.This activity went on for over an hour:walking cautiously to the woods,then running back to the house.Finally,my curiosity got the best of me.I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked;being very careful not to spill the water he carried. Branches and thorns slapped(拍打)his little face but he did not try to avoid them. He had a much greater purpose. As I leaned against a tree to spy on him,I saw the most amazing site.Several large deer appeared threatening in front of him. But Billy walked right up to them. I almost screamed for him to get away. And I saw a baby deer laying on the ground,obviously suffering from heavy loss of water and heat exhaustion,lift its head with great effort to lap(舔饮) up the water in my beautiful boy's hand.Paragraph 1:When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to thehouse.Paragraph 2:And later I knew what was goingon.【参考范文】When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house. My curiosity once again drove me to follow him back.After he reached the kitchen,he turned on the tap. As he was trying hard to cup both hands to receive the water,it was still running away through his fingers.And he also had great difficulty turning off the tap with hands occupied. He seemed to be so sorry and selfcondemned for his wasting of water.Wearing a note of upset on his face,he carried it carefully toward the woods.And later I knew what was going on. It began to make sense to me why he wasn't walking in his usual way. I stood on the edge of the woods watching the most beautiful heart working so hard to save a life. As my tears began to hit the ground,they were suddenly joined by other drops...and more drops. It was as if the nature itself was moved by the great effort made by my son and began to weep with pride.03阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

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