高中英语读后续写素材积累2
suspense one
unclean; rough; caring little about details;
mysterious (a man of stories);
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Since the 1970’s, in many countries, a yellow ribbon has been used to symbolize forgiveness and welcome to someone long lost.
who? when? where? what?
happiness; excitement; liveliness;
contrast
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Paragraph3: Development of the story Interaction one (Vingo and one of the girls)
He sat _r_o_o_t_ed__i_n_ his seat. (para3) He kept chewing the inside of his lip, _fr_o_z_e_n__in_t_o_c_o_m__p_le_t_e_s_il_e_n_c_e_. (para2)
As the bus passed through New Jersey, they began to notice Vingo. He sat in front of them, dressed in a plain, ill-fitting suit, never moving, his dusty face masking his age. He kept chewing the inside of his lip a lot, frozen into complete silence.
Reading
Going home
Paragraph1-2: Setting of the story
They were going to Fort Lauderdale – three boys and three girls– and when they boarded the bus, they were carrying sandwiches and wine in paper bags, dreaming of golden beaches and sea tides as the gray, cold spring of NewYork vanished behind them.
My father stood there isnusrupripsreidse/s.hocked/stunned.
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He asked if she would take him back and put a yellow ribbon as a signal.
let go love
return to love
What does a yellow ribbon mean for Vingo?
It means his wife’s love, acceptance and forgiveness.
silent; nervous; worried; a heavy heart
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He kept chewing the inside of his lip, frozen into complete silence.
As the bus passed through New Jersey, they began to notice Vingo. He sat in front of them, dressed in a plain, ill-fitting suit, never moving, his dusty face masking his age. He kept chewing the inside of his lip a lot, frozen into complete silence.
Paragraph4-6: Development of the story Interaction two (Vingo and one of the girls)
out of deep love
first letter
second letter
suspense three
He told his wife she could have a new guy if she couldn’t stand it.