1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解
2、提出建议并给出理由
注意：词数120左右（信的开头已给出， 但不计入总词数）。
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。
思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？ 要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
样题分析 第二人称
Firstly, it would be better if you __ta_ke_C_h_in_es_e_co_u_rs_e_s.___ Secondly, it would be a good idea for you to
w_a_tc_h _TV_a_n_d _re_ad_b_o_ok_s_, n_e_ws_p_ap_e_rs_a_nd__m_ag_a_zin_e_s.___ Thirdly,you can also benefit a lot from
=tell 用短语来代替单词
要 点 全
如何算是一篇好文章？ －覆盖了所有的要点 －应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
词汇,句型 （高级）和语法
多样化（较复杂）语言地道
连 －有效地使用了语句间的连接成 接 分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯， 词 条理清楚。
如何做到词汇，句型的高级化 和语法多样化
in fact besides
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear _P_et_er_____，
(I am very happy to hear from you.) I am writing to express my views concerning/ with regard to _h_o_w__to__le_a_r_n_C__h_in_e_s_e_w__e_ll_. First of all , Thank you for trusting me. Meanwhile, It’s my pleasure to give you some suggestions.
（1）should • Sb ought to do sth. • Sb be supposed to do sth. • Why not do sth? • It is beneficial for you to do sth. • If I were you, I would do sth. • It is high time that sb did sth.
（5）beautiful • attractive 吸引人的，迷人的 • appealing* 吸引人的，迷人的 • fascinating* 吸引人的，迷人的 （6）difficult • challenging 有挑战性的 （7）important • vital 重要的，必不可少的 • significant* 至关重要的 • essential* 必要的
写一封信
建议：如何解除对高三 生活的担忧
一般现在时
开门见山，表明写作意图。在本 段中，写信人应该先简单介绍自 己，然后陈述事由，表明写信的 目的及原因。
委婉地提出建议及改进措施， 或提出忠告。
礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复。
the form of a suggestion letter
Greeting, Dear … ,
定语从句
=help 用短语来代替单词
=want to 用短语来代替单词
I hope that these suggestions will work.And I am dying to receiving your good news./ I can't wait to hear from you again. /Don't hesitate to write to me about your great progress. =want to 用短语来代短语
从我观点看来… • From my point of view,..
从我观点看来… • As far as I am concerned,…
就我而言 • Personally,…
在我看来,…
适当运用模板
建议信开头常用句式：
I am very happy to hear from you.
I am very glad to hear that you want to ask some advice / suggestions about ..
as a matter of fact in addition
in my opinion as far as I am concerned
first/firstly first of all
suddenly
however have to do sth.
all of a sudden
on the contrary have no choice but to do sth.
（8）we • We teenagers….我们青少年… • We middle school students…我们中学生… • We English learners …我们英语学习者… （10）very • extremely 极端地 • surprisingly 令人惊讶地
（9）In my opinion,/ I think … • From my perspective,…
（2）want • sb plan to do sth. • sb would like to do sth. • sb can’t wait to do sth. • sb desire to do sth. 渴望做某事。 • sb has a great desire to do sth. （3）like sth • sb be fond of sth/doing sth. 喜欢… • sb is crazy about sth/doing sth. • sb fall in love with sth. sb爱上sth。
Secondly, you ought to make proper 定语从句 schedules for your studies and life.
.倒装 Thirdly, you need to learn to solve your problems actively. When faced with 状语从句 difficulties in your life, you can always ask your teachers or classmates for advice,
（4）good • great / wonderful • excellent棒极了的，极好的 • fantastic棒极了的，极好的 • brilliant棒极了的，极好的 • fabulous棒极了的，极好的 • superb棒极了的，极好的 • terrific 棒极了的，极好的 • meaningful 有意义的 • educational 有教育意义的
I am writing to express my views on/ concerning …
You have asked for my advice with regard to /on… and I will try to make some suggestions.
Thank you for trusting me. It’s my pleasure to give you some suggestions.
least … In a word/ In conclusion…
4） Translations. 将要点的内容翻译成地道的 英文句子，组句成篇（打草 稿）
5）检查，修改，誊写。
副词
形式主语句型
Actually, it is common for most students
to be anxious about the busy and tough
Signature Alice Major
建议的构思（拓展）
⑴ 说明建议的内容(要点)； ⑵ 提出具体建议的原因； ⑶ 指出采纳建议的益处。 注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对
方感受。
第二步：搜索相关词组或句型
问题
建议
高二年级学生Lucy 1.保持自信和乐观。
因担心无法适应忙 原因： 是实现目标的基础。 碌的高三生活而写 2. 列好时间表
结尾常用句式：
I hope that my opinions / suggestions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals / suggestions / opinions .
school life of Senior Three, so you
needn’t worry too much. My advice is
as follows.
连词
and, so, or前面有逗号隔开，连接两个ent and optimistic,
_le_a_rn_i_n_g_a_n_d_s_in_g_i_ng__C_h_in_e_s_e_s_o_n_g_s__. Finally, it is essential that you should_m_a_k_e_m_o_r_e_f_ri_e_nds
Body:
1st part: the purpose
2nd part: suggestions
3rd part:
ask the receiver to consider the suggestions and take them
Complimentary close(结束语), Yours sincerely