• 交代背景信息用到了with的复合结构
• 应用文开头：交代背景 + 写明来意
非谓语/形容词 /with复合结构
I‘m writing to express/ convey/extend my文体 for/
about..
I'm fairly privileged to give a speech on..
• Passionate about... • Delighted to know that.. • 5. With XXX coming/ drawing near/ around the corner,
写明来意
• 1. I‘m writing to express/ convey/extend my文体 for/ about.. • 2. I'm writing to express/convey/extend my
sincere/complete/deep 文体 for/about... • 3. I'm writing with heartfelt/profound..情感 to express/ convey/extend my full/genuine/earnest..文体 for/about...
• 那不同的文体词汇有哪些呢？？？
注意文体都是用的名词
• 咨询信 enquiry
道歉信 apology
• 邀请信 invitation
投诉信 complaint
• 申请/求职信 application
• 建议信 suggestion/proposal
• 推荐信 recommendation/preference
• 感谢信 appreciation/ gratitude/thanks
• 适当加入with+情感/形容词/副词来修饰程度
• 求助信 my earness for your timely help
写明来意的跟踪练习
• 1. 道歉信 • I’m writing to express my sincere apology about.. • 2. 投诉信 • I‘m writing to extend my earnest complaint... • I'm writing with deep disappointment to convey my serious complaint..
How time flies!
低分开头
Long time no see!
It's been a long time since we last met.
I'm glad to receive your letter.
• 以上开头没有展示丰富的词汇，也没有呈现复杂的语法结构，给人一种没 有章法，没有受过作文系统训练的印象。刚开始的负面印象一旦形成，再 加上后面同样糟糕的语言，这篇文章基本就和及格分说再见了。
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• 假定你是李华， 从网上获悉一家国际青少年志愿者组织正在全球
招募暑期志愿者。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 • （Greatly）passionate about the valuable chance to be a
volunteer in your program, I'm writing with great expectations to express my genuine application for the job.
应用文开头格式 ...,I'm writing to..
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ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
应 应用文开头的功能
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交代背景 + 写明来意
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简介题干信息
体现文体
交代写作背景
• 1. Knowing that.../of.., • 2. Having heard(learned/received) that../of.. • 3. Informed that/of.. • Attracted by... • 4. Aware of...
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• 假如你是李华，你的英国好友Mark在孔子学院主办的汉语桥节目中荣获一
等奖。请给他写一封邮件表示祝贺。
• 根据交代背景 + 写明来意模式我们来仿写一下开头。
• Knowing you have won the first prize in Chinese Bridge held by Confucius Institute, I'm writing to convey my sincere congratulations on your success.
演讲稿开头比较特殊
• ... I'm very honored to give a speech about/on...
• fairly privileged •
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• 你的城市即将开展“垃圾分类”的活动，你的学校也将参与其中。 你作为校学生会主席，将面向全校发表一个倡议演讲。
• With the trash sorting campaign in our city to launch, I'm fairly privileged to give a speech here to involve everyone in this meaningful activity.