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专四写作范文历年专四作文范文can afford it. It doesn’t need any oil, and it can’t cause the polusion. All of these are the good needs pared to the car.In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles.Score: 14Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- man and woman, old and young -- ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.注:1. 第一句总写,第二句和第三句分写,最后总写。

2. During the rush hour 分词结构开头。

3. 破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。

Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more fortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty ofoil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficultfor a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and aidents.注:1. Compared with cars 分词结构开头。

2. be superior to/ be inferior to 优于/ 低于3. thirst, second, third 英语语言有层次感,信号词4. cheap 便宜,最好用inexpensive5. be good for health 对健康有好处(万能理由)6. Moreover 表示递进In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.注:promising 有前途的 a promising young manScore: 11There millions of bicycles in today’s China. Bicycles are very important means of transport in people’s daily lives. Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider’s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.注:第一句应该用there be结构Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.I think the population of China’s bicycle will be kept for the long run. Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it’s quality will be improvedI、对比观点选择题:1.有人认为……; 2.另外一些人认为……; 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。

(最好写成4段)题目说明根据所给的作文题目、图标或阅读材料等,写一篇200词左右的作文。

文章题材主要属于说明文、议论文或记叙文。

考试时间45分钟。

要写好作文,注意以下几点:1合理分配时间先用大约5分钟通读题目要求和阅读材料,把握材料意思,便于提炼总结;接下来用两三分钟提出自己的观点,并构思相关的支撑理由或论据;然后用约35分钟进行写作;最后两三分钟回顾整篇作文检查拼写失误。

2充分利用素材阅读材料与作文主题息息相关,有的涉及某一社会现象,有的涉及某个热门话题,有的展示正反两方的观点……这些素材看似增加了阅读负担,其实为考生提供了大量的相关词汇和话题(再也不用从阅读理解里抄句子了);而且把作文第一段的总结写完,20分就算是拿到5分了。

所以,考生一定要仔细阅读,提炼材料主题,引出自己的观点。

3注意前后呼应作文不是句子的简单罗列和拼凑,而是句与句、段与段的紧密衔接和相互呼应。

要利用过渡词(transitional words),来增强上下文的“起承转合”等逻辑关系。

表示“启”的词:nowadays,first of all,in the first place,to begin with,at present,in recent years等表示“承”的词:secondly,similarly,in addition, for example,in other words,certainly,at the same time等表示“转”的词:but,while,however,on the other hand,on the contrary,in contrast,conversely,otherwise等表示“合”的词:finally,at last,therefore,as a result,on the whole,in conclusion,in short,in a word,to sum up等这些过渡词是文章的润滑剂,让句子更顺畅,文章思路更清晰。

4紧扣题目要求作文题目要求中,有一句斜体加粗的提示,被很多考生“熟视无睹”了:Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, grammar and language quality. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks. 大意就是:内容相关(不跑题)、内容充实、组织条理、语法正确、语言通顺,给予高分奖励。

否则会被扣分。

这其实明确了好作文的标准。

照此标准努力,才有可能得高分。

据说阅卷老师30—50秒评完一篇作文。

要赢得阅卷老师的青睐,清楚美观整洁的卷面也很重要。

5考前动笔练习纸上得来终觉浅,绝知此事要躬行。

要提高写作,还是要多动笔练习。

不少学生以为“背诵范文,套用模板”就万事大吉,却忽视了“眼高手低”的通病,结果是一写就错。

比如:Nowdays,roomates,As far as I concerned;Every thing has two coins;There have many people…出现这样低级错误,分数立马拦腰砍,很难高于10分。

所以考前背了范文,还要试着默写出来,再核对拼写失误。

作文范文:怎样做一个好学生作为新一代的我们,应该从小做一个胸怀大志,品学兼优的好少年,努力使自己成为有理想、有道德、有文化、有纪律、爱祖国的无产阶级革命事业接班人。

好好学习!用智慧和文化武装自己,长大后报效祖国。

争当一名新世纪的祖国好少年,犹有路标,使我从中找到自己的向导;犹如目标,使我从中找到自己的方向;犹如一盏明灯,永远闪烁在我的心中。

别看我年纪小,可大家都夸我是祖国好少年呢!起初我在家里,只是在爸爸炒菜时帮他递递盘子,后来我学会了洗碗。

吃过晚饭后,看着劳累了一天的爸爸妈妈,我便“挺身而出”,主动要求去洗碗,每次上街、外出时,我从不损坏公物。

一次,在公园里看见一个小孩正在摘花,我就忙上前去劝阻他,当时,旁边的游人都伸出大拇指夸我是文明的小标兵。

在学校我尊敬老师,团结同学,主动帮助身边所有需要帮助的同学,这已成为我生活和学习中的一大乐事。

总之,在家中,我是一个孝顺父母,热爱劳动的“小帮手”;在学校里,我是一个听从老师教导的好学生;在公共场所里,我是一个遵纪守法的小公民;在生活中,我是一个爱护公物、讲究卫生、保护环境、遵守纪律、勤俭节约的小卫士;在与同学交往中,我是一个团结友爱、互相帮助、诚实守信的小伙伴;在独处时,我还是一个心理健康、勇于自立、勇于创新的小主人。

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