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高考应用文写作指导之建议信

建议:1. 课堂上认真听老师讲课; 2. 多和同学和老师用英语交流: 3.坚持每天记单词,读英语课文;多练、
多问等。 4. 培养对英语学习的兴趣爱好。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. In your letter, you said you have some difficulties in learning English. I think I can give you some useful suggestions.
My suggestions are as follows. Firstly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Secondly, the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it. Thirdly, you can speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. What’s more, the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class.
第一段:
开头是成功的一半…
Dear….: (开门见山,点明意图)
(1) I know you have some troubles in learning English after reading your letters. There are some tips for you. 读了你的信后,我知道你在学习英语上有困难….
点题——一两个句子;概括性

构 2. Body

陈述事实,提出建议,给出理由;

层次分明
分 3. Ending
总结全文,表明希望;呼应主题
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
第 三步:列要点
read English aloud everyday / spend one or half hour in reading English books
Dear Peter, I'm sorry to hear that you have some problems on
how to learn Chinese well. I think I can give you some useful suggestions.
My suggestions are as follows. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, because you'll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your classmates. Second, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers in Chinese. Third, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing it, you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
My advice are as follows. Firstly, I think you should have a talk with him sincerely. Because if your friend skips classes, he is not going to do well at school.
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. In your letter, you said your friend spends most of his time chatting on the Internet and often goes to the Internet cafe instead of attending classes. You really want to help him out but you don’t know what to do with it/ how to help him. Well. I would like to give my advice for you.
Secondly, you can e-mail him or leave a message. Thirdly, you should tell him the importance of study. Because every one of us just has one chance to go to high school, he should study hard and not waste time in indulging on the Internet.
➢ First,…Secondly,…Finally,… ➢ On the one hand ,…on the other hand,…
What is more/besides /moreover/furthermore ➢ To begin with,…In addition,…Last but not least
困难,促进学习。 第一步:审题目
思考的问题 第几人称?(person)
样题分析 第一人称
文章的题材是什么?(type)
建议信
要写的文章主题是什么 (topic) 对英语学习给出建议
怎样安排信息点的顺序? (order)
动作是什么时候发生的?(tense)
说理的逻辑性 一般现在时
第二步:找结构
1. Heading
注意:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;开头语已给出。
Dear Peter, I'm glad to hear that you can ask for my advice no how to learn Chinese well.____
_____________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua
我写信和你分享如何学好英语方面的建议。如果你能采 取以下措施,将是明智的选择。
建议信重点
第二段: ⑴ 说明建议的内容;(是什么) ⑵ 提出具体建议的原因;(为什么) ⑶ 指出采纳建议的益处。(怎么样)
注意事项:语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对 方感受。
To list your suggestions
亲们,别东拉西扯,闹糊涂啊
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.
Best wishes.
Yours,xxx
•Homework:
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何 才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。
要点:⑴ 参加中文学习班; ⑵ 看中文书刊、电视; ⑶ 学唱中文歌曲; ⑷ 交中国朋友。
高考英语应用文写作指导
之建议
(recommendation letter)
Objectives:
In this class, we will be able to
1. Know how to analyze the material
of the recommendation letter.
2. Master and use useful
(注意连贯和逻辑,合理使用连接词或短语)
A perfect ending ! 第三段:完美的Ending,可不是说灰姑娘的故事哦。
• In a conclusion / in a word (结论简洁,指明观点) (1) Practice makes perfect! Nothing is
difficult If you put your mind into it.
expressions ,structure and formwork of the recommendation letter.
3. Complete a writing of
recommendation letter.
高考常见的应用文类型有:
建议信
通知
邀请信
海报
信 件 类
道歉信 申请信 祝贺信 感谢信
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.
Best wBiblioteka shes.Yours,xxx
Summary
题材 人称
主题 顺序
一审
时态
二找
三列 四写 五美
•Practice :
第二篇建议信: 对于我的朋友花大量时间上网,耽误学 习的建议信 建议内容: 1)和他面对面地交流、沟通; 2)给她发邮件或短信; 3)告诉他学习的重要性。
Firstly, ____________,because________. Secondly, you should________________, because_________. Thirdly, you’d better
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