m writing to tell you a problem that troubled me for a long time. It is the relationship I’　among my mother and me. I’m a student and Mother is an university teacher, who is too busy withher work that she has little time to talk to me. I love her and I do well in my studies, but I still feltafraid of her because she is much too strict with me. I don’t know why to communicate with her. Maybe it’s because of we’ve seldom sat down and exchanged our feelings and thoughts. I hope wecan know much about each other and understand each other better. What can we do?Looking forward to hear from you.Best wishes!51. troubled 前面加has 52. among→between 53. an→a 54. too→so 55. felt→feel56. why→how 57. of 去掉58. much→more 59. we→I 60. hear→hearingDear Harry,I have good news for you that there will be a international music camp in our city this summerThe camp is openly to students from all over the world who is interested in playing musicalinstruments. I know you are a music lover, so why not to join the camp together with us?At the camp, campers are giving classes by experts in the moring and in the afternoon they do acouple of hour of practice. In the evening, there is a music exchange concert that campers can giveperformances and plays different kinds of music from their own counties.I’m sure you will have a lot of funs there. I’m looking forward your reply.Yours,Li Hua第一节短文改错【答案】1.a→an2.openly→open3.is→are4.to join→to去掉5.giving→given6.hour→hours7.that→where8.plays→play10.forward 后加toOne morning, a blind boy sat on a square with a hat by her feet. He held up a sign which wassaid: “I am blind, please help me.” There was only a few coins in the hat. A man was walking by. He took the sign, turning it around, and wrote something on it. He put the sign back so thateveryone walked by would see the new words. Surprising, soon a lot more people were givingmoney to the blind boy. That afternoon, the man who had changed the sign came to see whatthings were. The boy recognized his footstep and asked: “Are you the one who changed my sign this morning? How did you write?” The man said: “Today is a beautiful day and I cannot see it.One morning, a blind boy sat on a square with a hat by herhis feet. He held up a sign whichwas said: “I a m blind, please help me.”　There waswere only a few coins in the hat. A man waswalking by. He took the sign, turningturned it around, and wrote something on it. He put the sign backso that everyone ∧who walked by would see the new words. SurprisingSurprisingly , soon a lot more peoplewere giving money to the blind boy. That afternoon, the man who had changed the sign came tosee what how things were. The boy recognized his footstepfootsteps and asked: “Are y ou the one whochanged my sign this morning? HowWhat did you write?” The man said: “Today is a beautiful dayandbut I cannot see it.”One neighbor of my is aunty Anabel. Everyone in the neighborhood knows her for the“q of the neighborhood ”. You may ask what. Well, it ’s because she used to cooking for the entireneighborhood whenever there was festival. I remember the day that Mr. Carter celeberated his90th birthday. In order to make sure everyone knew about it, he made Mrs. Carter bake smallcookies. Then he walked around and give every house one cookie. Believe it or not, but it was aninvitation. As soon as my aunty heard the news, she got all neighbor together and started a hugebarbecue party for him. There wasn ’t one person who willing stayed home that day.One neighbor of my mine is aunty Anabel. Everyone in the neighborhood knows her foras the“queen of the neighborhood ”. You may ask what why . Well, it ’s because she used to cookingcook for theentire neighborhood wheneverthere was ∧a festival. I remember the day that whenMr Carter celeberated his 90th birthday. In order to make sureeveryone knew about it, he made Mrs Carterbake small cookies. Then he walked around and give gaveevery house one cookie. Believe it or not, but it was an invitation. As soon as my aunty heard the news, she got allneighbor neighbors together and started a huge barbecue party for him. There wasn’t one person who willing willingly stayed home that day.It ’s not easy for us to accept the fact which we are going to leave our beloved school. However, we are looked forward to our future life. Last night, my friends and I walk around our school talking about the funny things that had been happened in the past three years. Suddenly, I got an idea. I said to him we should make a deal that we could get together here four years late.My friends were so exciting about it, and they agreed with me. I started to think about what I would become in the future. I may becoming a teacher, or a doctor. I think deal will help us keep in touch to each other.51. which-that 52. looked-looking 53. walk-walked54. had been happened 去掉been 55. him- them56. late-later 57. exciting-excited58. becoming-become 59. deal 前加the 60. to-withAs the saying goes, chances favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of myexperience.I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.From this, I am firmly convincing that, no matter when chances arrive, we were able to seize them as long as we get well prepared.As the saying goes, chances favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my favorexperience.experiencesI was not chosen as∧member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, Iadecided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was playing andmy laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball thaton every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was 去掉on fullyselected and became an important player on our school team.From this, I am firmly convincing that, no matter when chances arrive, we were able to seizeconvinced are them as long as we get well prepared.The winter holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges that we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.71.【答案】第1处how改为what第2处chose改为choose第3处take改为taking第4处but改为and;第5处about后加the第6处your改为our第7处knowledges改为knowledge第8处删除can或can改为should第9处thought改为think第10处many改为muchAs a Senior Two student, my favorite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. We practice for three times a week and often watch football match on TV or on the Internet together. Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in minds that we play for the team instead ourselves. Also, sports teach us the important of obeying the rules in a match. Each player must listen to the captain, which is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.As a Senior Two student, my favorite sport is football. I wasama member of our schoolfootball team. We practice for three times a week and often watch footballmatchmatcheson TV or onthe Internet together.PlayPlayingfootball not only makes us grow tall and strong but alsogivegivesus asense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in mindsmindthat we play for the team instead∧ofourselves. Also, sports teach us theimportantimportanceof obeying the rules in a match. Each player mustlisten to the captain, whichwhois the leader of the team. Andtheywemust not break the rules too oftenif we want to win the game.Dear Sir,I’m Xiaoli, a student of Senior 3. I am writing to ask yourself for some advice. Since Ientered Senior 3, my parents and teachers have kept asking me to board（寄宿）in the school.They say it will be very much convenient for me to ask question whenever and wherever.However, they think boarding will make this possible to make full use my night time, and that Ican also develop the ability to look after myself.However, in my opinion, stay at home in the evening allow me more time to work at mylessons. At a same time, I can learn which I think I’m not good at. I really don’t know ho with the disagreement. Can you help me out?Yours,Xiaoli71. yourself改为you 72. 去掉much 73. question改为questions74. However 改为Besides 75. this 改为it 76. use 后面加of77. stay 改为staying 78. allow 改为allows 79. a 改为the80. which 改为whatNowadays, as the development of high technology, smart phone is very popular to high school student. Smart phone once is forbidden. But now it has become a very common tool forstudents. A lot of students keep his eyes on smart phones all the time. Teachers are annoying about this situation, so they feel most students ignore them when they are giving lessons. Some teachers think it is time to let the students hand to hand in their smart phones.I don ’t think it is good idea. Even for the teachers, they used their phones so much, let alone the students. The teachers should improve their teaching methods to catch the students’ in Nowadays, aswith the development of high technology, smart phone is very populartowith/among high school students. Smartphone once iswas forbidden. But now it has become avery common tools tool for students. A lot of students keep histheir eyeson smart phones all the time.Teachers are annoyingannoyed about this situation, sobecause/as they feel that most students ignorethemwhen they are giving lessons. Some teachers think it is time to let the students to hand in their smart phones.I don ’t think it is ∧a good idea. Even for the teachers, they useduse their phones so much, letalone the students.The teachers should improve their teaching methods to catch the students ’　interest.Last summer, to my delight, I got a chance to go to the United Kingdom. I was eager to see how England was like. Although my parents objected to my decision at first, but finally they were persuaded. It was the first time that I have travelled abroad alone. Felt excited, I boarded the plane. Suddenly, however, I found my luggages gone and felt helplessly. It was on that moment that the airhostess came to my assistance. After helping me find it back, she suggested that I attached a label to my suitcase on my next journey. I was thankfully to the kind lady for his help! What unforgettable trip!Last summer, to my delight, I got a chance to go to the United Kingdom. I was eager to seehowwhatEngland was like. Although my parents objected to my decision at first, but finally theywere persuaded. It was the first time that I havehadtravelled abroad alone.FeltFeelingexcited, Iboarded the plane. Suddenly, however, I found my luggagesluggagegone and felt helplessly. It wasonatthat moment that the airhostess came to my assistance. After helping me find it back, shesuggestedthat I attachedattacha label to my suitcase on my next journey. I wasthankfullythankfulto the kind lady forhis her help! What∧anunforgettable trip!My parents live in the country. They keep a dog calling Ah Fu. One day my parent went towork in the fields taking my little sister and Ah Fu along. While they working, my sister walked tothe river nearby. Ah Fu follows her there. She was trying to pick a flower while she fell into the river. Ah Fu barked and jumped to the water immediately. When my parents heard of Ah Fu barking, they ran to the river. They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carrying his little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warm. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.短文改错1. calling 改为called2. parent改为parents3. they后加were4. the改为 a5. follows改为followed6. while改为when7. to改为into8. 去掉heard 后面的of9. his改为my10. warm改为warmlyWhen my twentieth birthdays came, I was not at home. In order to celebrate such important day with my parents, I wrote him a letter, in which I thanked them for having raised me for twenty years, and expressed my love for them. Later my mother tell me when they read the letter, tears were filled her eyes. And my father appeared very cool. Before that, he read it alone careful, and then he put it away into a desk drawer. I can imagine the scene clearly because I know father.Being a man with little words, he prefers show his love for me in a silent way.短文改错：61. birthdays 改为birthday 62. such 后加an 63.him 改为them64. tell改为told 65. 去掉were 66. And 改为But67. Before 改为After 68. careful 改为carefully69. little 改为few 70. prefers 后加toThe blue whale is certainly the largest animals on the planet today. Just the heart of a blue whale can weight as many as a family car. You might think that such a big animal would need toeat another big animals to surviving. Surprising, the blue whale feeds on some of the smaller ocean animals.A blue whale can live between 80 and 90 years. Unfortunately, it is believe that there wereonly 10,000 to 25,000 alive. They were hunted for in the 1900s but hundreds of thousands of themincrease in the coming years. were killed. Let’s hope number of whales on the planet starts toThe blue whale is certainly the largest animals on the planet today. Just the heart of a blue animalwhale can weight as many as a family car. You might think that such a big animal would need to mucheat another big animals to surviving. Surprising, the blue whale feeds on some of the smaller other survive Surprisinglyocean animals.A blue whale can live between 80 and 90 years. Unfortunately, it isbelieve that there werebelieved are only 10,000 to 25,000 alive. They were hunted for in the 1900s but hundreds of thousands of them 去掉for andwere killed. Let’s hope∧number of whales on the planet starts to increase in the coming years.aOne night I was going to work on my usually bus route. Upon our arrive at the terminal, I noticed that I was the only passenger left on the bus. I looked around and saw a mobile phone in a chair that must have been left behind by the passenger. I give it to the conductor.Two day later, the conductor told me that the passenger was very much happy that I returned themobile phone. The passenger was trying to get her name, so she wanted to post on Facebook about what had happened as a sort of appreciation. I thought it was unnecessary. What was important was when I saw the smile on her face, I was happy.46.第1处【答案】usually 改为usual【解析】用形容词修饰名词。