背景句The past several years has witnessed [a huge development in information technology in our life.][A rapid economic development in China][A thought-provoking phenomenon that we students pay very little attention to the study of Chinese.].With the development of science and technology, it cannot be denied that [ ] tend to play an increasingly important role in our life.When it comes to this question/phenomenon, people have come up with various opinions.We are expected to pay special attention to [education].It has been exerting profound influence on the way we live, work, play and learn.图片描述【完全倒装+非谓语动词+独立主格】Around the table sit a group of people, with one standing up moaning that:”we have lots of information technology, we just don’t have much useful information.”The picture displays a very special scene:__________.Simple as it is, what the picture convey to us is thought-provoking:__________.引言开头Just as an old saying says, if you can’t do great things, do small things in a great way. This proverb is really sparking and refreshing, which deserves our further study and discussion.社会有形话题有利有弊The author of this cartoon demonstrates that [the emerging mobile Internet technology] has become an integral part of our life and it has been exerting profound influence on the way we live, work, play and learn.Indeed, the advance of [this technology] is in the best interests of our society, and enhance, promote and boost our life quality, with our daily events made more convenient.(独立主格结构，如果把with 去掉，变成两句话，made 变be made) Nevertheless, it also brings some adverse effects to our life at the sametime. It is not hard to notice that misleading information is one of them. Fortunately, this topic has captured wide media attention, occupying newspaper headlines and sparking heated discussion among the public.This is a good start. The self-protection awareness is expected to be cultivated, nurtured and fostered among the general public. At the end of the day, [the online video streaming] will stay here in one form or another. The wise way to deal with this phenomenon is that regulations are introduced to make it benefits more achievable and its bad impacts more avoidable, I argue.The author of this picture intends to show that [the ability to manage time efficiently] is a key ingredient to the success in this society.To be honest, without [the capacity to balance work and play],we would have no advance to speak of, either in academic performance or in other aspects.Many high achievers of our times tend to attribute their success to the possession of [this quality].For example, [Jack Ma], the richest man of China, the founder of Alibaba company, best illustrate the importance of [being efficient] with his glorious success in e-commercial business andinvestment category. (Nelson Mandela, a giant and a great hero, tells with his life story that fortitude in the face of adversity and perseverance on your dream however, whenever and wherever are the golden rules to the success.纳尔逊·曼德拉（Nelson Mandela）是一位巨人和伟大的英雄，他的生活故事讲述的是，在逆境中坚忍不拔，坚持梦想，无论何时何地都是成功的金科玉律。

)It is not hard to imagine lack of [this quality of cherishing time] will definitely lend to one’s poor performance and lower achievement.From my personal perspective, [the spirit] plays an indispensable role on one’s road to the self-realization, especially in this ever rapidly changing modern world. So, much more attention should be attached by individuals to the cultivation of [his trait]. Beyond any dispute , he who is lack of [this ablility] will accomplish nothing. We, youngsters, are expected to learn from this picture’s sparking and refreshing meaning, I firmly believe.The author of this picture intends to demonstrate that [the professional spirit] is and remains as the key to be an integral part in this ever rapidly changing modern society.Beyond any doubt ,[this spirit] serves as the key link for the development chain of many sectors.It is not hard to imagine the absence of [this quality] will make/cause our train of progress delayed or even derailed.According to the survey, the general public have rated [made in China] as what makes them proudest of our nation.To some extent, we dare to say the citizens livelihood and communities growth are rested on this [spiritual wealth] simply put, it boosts the sound evolution of our nation.From my personal perspective, the presence of [such spirit] will make our social fabric stronger and people more prosperous. So a coordinated mechanism should be established to enhance the flourish trend of [this virtue].By doing so, we can hope to witness the ideal scene and the trend will bring us much more rewarding than we expected.Fortunately, this topic has been high on the agenda of government. This is a promising start.经济类：1. The reform and opening-up policy in China has led to rapid economic growth, which has given rise to a higher standard of living.中国的改革开放政策导致了快速的经济发展，从而促进了更高的生活质量。