审题——初稿
• • • • • • • 文章体裁 中心人称 主体时态 语言表达 句子分配 文章连贯 修饰润色
• 说明文 • 第三人称 • 一般现在时
濒临中国南海，毗邻香港和澳门
• Guangzhou is on the South China Sea.
• Hong Kong is to the southeast of Guangzhou.
• 6.Places of interest(名胜) • E.g. • The West Lake is famous for its beautiful scenery. • In Sydney, there are many places of interest, such as the Opera House. • Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places of interest, among which is the Opera House.
• Standing on the top of the mountain, ...has experienced many changes in this area. • There stand ... near the river.
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2.Surroundings (周边环境) in the south\north\east\west of... on the south\north\east\west of... to the south\north\east\west of... ...is located\situated on the south\north\east\west of the lake \ to the south\north\east\west of the mountain\in the south\north\east\west of the province.
三、Useful expressions
• • • • • 1.Location (所处位置) be located in\on... be situated in\on... lie in\on... ...lies near\behind\in front of\by the side of...\between\among... • ...stands at the foot of\on the top of...
Finish the draft. Seek suggestions. Rewrite it. Copy it carefully.
Guangzhou ,with the history of 2800years, is known as “the flower city”, which is the birth place of “the silk road on sea” in ancient China. It has a population of 10 million and the area of 7434.4 square kilometers. Guangzhou lies on the south China sea, with HongKong to the Southeast and Macao to the South. It is rich in traveling resources, such as the famous “eight scenery of YangCheng”. Tourists from home and abroad are attracted to Guangzhou by its beautiful scenery.
• Macau is to the south of Guangzhou.
• I’m standing here. A is on my left. B is on my right.
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• I’m standing here, with A on my left and
B on my right.
Homework
Our School
• 面积15万平方米
• 历史：50年 • 位置：韶关浈江河畔，浈江南路1号
• 现有教师：约170多人
• 在校学生：3000多人 • 是湞江区的重点中学
Basic writing 题材(1) 某一外商考察组一行来到你们工厂考察投资环境。 你负责接待，请你按以下提示写一篇工厂的介绍。 历史 位置 15年历史 位于长江北岸，靠近京广线，水路交通便利
你的一位网友向你了解你的家乡广 州,请根据以下提示介绍广州.
• 1.广州地处广东省中部,面积7434.4平方公 里,人口约1000万,是广东的省会,是一座有 两千二百多年文明的历史的古城。 • 2.1982年，广州被选定为全国首批历史名 城之一。 • 3.广州一年四季如春，繁花似锦，故有“花 城”之美育。 • 4.广州正以迷人的风采迎接来自四面八方的 海外游客。
Basic Writing
——introducing a place (3)
How to introduce a place
一、语言特点： 1.开门见山，直截了当。 2.准确明了，介绍清楚。 3.详略得当，重点突出。
二、写作结构
• 1.根据写作提示的顺序来写； • 2.如果是描述地点的位置，顺序通常是由上 至下，从里到外，从左到右，从远到近。 • 3.开头可用：I would like to introduce... • 4.结尾可用：That’s all. Thank you, and you’re welcome to my hometown.
• West of ...stands a .... • E.g. Surrounded by mountains on three sides, our school faces a clear river on the west.
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3.Population(人口) has a population of ... with a population of ... Japan has a small population of... China is a developing country, with a population of 130 million. • The population here is increasing year by year. • Eighty percent of the population here are farmers.
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1.位置（所处位置）是位于\上... 设在\上... 位于\上... ... 位于靠近\落后\前面的\由身边... \与\中... ...站 在脚下\上顶...对站在山顶上，...在这方面经 历了许多变化。 • 有站...附近的河流。 • 2.Surroundings（周边环境）在南\北\东\西... 在南\北\东\西...到南\北\东\西... ...位于\上南\ 北\东\坐落在湖的西岸\到南\北\东\山西\南\北\ 东\省西部。西站一.... ... • 例如，通过三面环山，我们的学校面临着在 西清澈的河流。
规模
产品
工人2000多人，占地4.5平方千米
妇女服装
市场
评价
全国各地、东南亚
发展迅速，前景广阔，投资的明智选择
Our factory, with a history of 15 years and an area of 4.5 square kilometers, is located on the north bank of Changjiang River and near the railway line from Beijing to Guangzhou. As a result, the transportation is very convenient both by water and by railway. In our factory, there are over 2,000 workers, who mainly produce women’s clothing. The products are of very good quality and are sold everywhere in China and in some Southeast Asian areas. Our factory has been developing rapidly and has a very bright future, so it’s a wise choice to invest here.
好作文具备的优点
• 书写整洁
• 语言简练地道
• 语法和句子结构准确
• 包括所有信息内容，条理清楚 • 适当使用过渡词语，行文连贯
• 句式富于变化，长短句搭配合理
基础写作
有一群外国人来到中国旅游，
去广州之前他们想了解一下广 州的情况。请你根据以下内容
写一篇介绍广州的短文。
名称
历史
广州有“花城”的美誉
2200多年，是中国古代“海上丝绸”的发祥 地 1000多万 7434.4平方千米 濒临中国南海，毗邻香港和澳门
人口
面积 位置
广州旅游资源丰富，有著名的“羊城八景”，现以 其迷人的风采吸引了来自四面八方的海内外游客。
• Located in the middle of Guangdong Province, Guangzhou, the capital of Guangdong, is an ancient city with a history of over 2200 years. It covers an area of 7434 square kilometers with a population of 10 million or so. Because it is warm and flowery all the year round, it is also called “Flower City”. Since 1982, Guangzhou was named as one of the first historical and cultural cities. The special character of Guangzhou is attracting more and more tourists from all over the world.