SCI修改稿回答审稿人意见范文模板SCI修改稿回答审稿人意见范文模板修改稿回答审稿人的意见(最重要的部分)List of ResponsesDear Editors and Reviewers:Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers’comments concerning our manuscript entitled “Paper Title”(ID:文章稿号).Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper,as w ell as the important guiding significance to our researches.We have studied comments carefully a nd have made correction which we hope meet with approval.Revised portion are marked in red i n the paper.The main corrections in the paper and the responds to the reviewers comments are as flowing:Responds to the reviewer’s comments:Reviewer#1:1.Response to comment:(……简要列出意见……)Response:××××××2.Response to comment:(……简要列出意见……)Response:××××××。
逐条意见回答,切忌一定不能有遗漏针对不同的问题有下列几个礼貌术语可适当用用:We are very sorry for our negligence of……...We are very sorry for our incorrect writing ……..It is really true as Reviewer suggested that……We have made correction according to the Reviewer’s comments.We have re-written this part according to the Reviewer’s suggestion As Reviewer suggested that……Considering the Reviewer’s suggestion,we have……最后特意感谢一下这个审稿人的意见:Special thanks to you for your good comments.Reviewer#2:同上述Reviewer#3:××××××Other changes:1.Line60-61,the statements of“……”were corrected as“…………”2.Line107,“……”was added3.Line129,“……”was deleted××××××We tried our best to improve the manuscript and made some changes in the manuscript.Thes e changes will not influence the content and framework of the paper.And here we did not list the changes but marked in red in revised paper.We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers’warm work earnestly,and hope that the correction will m eet with approval.Once again,thank you very much for your comments and suggestions以下是审稿人意见和本人的回复。
与大家分享。
从中可以看出,这位审稿人认真读了文章,提出很多宝贵的意见。
这些意见分布在文章的各个地方。
我很诧异有人真正读了我的文章。
看到这些意见,我觉得很感激,不是因为接收文章的原因,而是这些意见能真正有助于提高文章的质量。
从中还看出,回答审稿人问题的“技巧”。
对于回答问题,有的人就是一味反驳,却不加改进。
记得ACS Style Guide里面说,当审稿人问到问题的,哪怕是他理解错误,这也说明作者这么写,其他读者也会理解错误,引起歧义。
因此,作者就是要修改句子,使表达不引起歧义。
因此:有时间一味反驳,还不如指出具体改进在第几页、第几段。
============================================Reviewers'comments:Reviewer#3:While revising the script,it is to be suggested that author should clearly indicate the aim&scope of the study and while making conclusion,it is to be mentioned how the study is us eful for the practical purposes.In addition the following are the few suggestions/comments,whic h may be included while revision.Introduction part first para last line,author must avoid to write ambiguous statement i.e.,much work is still ahead,may indicate properly.2.Author could not demonstrate the reason why,to select the organic compound such as ethyl p yruvate for this study?3.Experimental part:It is difficult to understand the in-situ RAIRS experiments with homemade li quid-solid RAIRS cell.More detailed information may be useful for the others those who are work ing in the area.Photograph of the assembled cell may be included.4.The description given for the experimental set up(page4)can be presented by flow diagram in stead,as an ease to understand the set up.5.Resluts Part(Page6):"CO adlayers with identical monolayer coverages",the monolayer covera ge,is it been performed with some adsorption model?Further,it was suggested that CO-saturate d Pt surface,but not mentioned about the saturation experiments.Is it obtained after60min of CO bubbling?6.Page12,2nd para:The displacement of EtPy by CCl4flushing,is it confirmed by the EtPy peaks If so,it has to be mentioned clearly in the para.Also in the same para,author referred for Fig.7 a and7b but in the figures,it didn't appear,only figure7appeared.I feel it refers for figure7,por tion A and B,to be corrected.Similarly,in the text referred the fig2a,2b.etc but on the figure sh eet it is mentioned as2A,2B.etc.to be corrected.7.Page14,1st para:'contamination of the Pt surface by corrosion of o-rings in high concentratio n EtPy',but the statement has not been supported by other evidence/literature.8.Pages14through17:the observed reactivity of various solvents for adsorbedCO on the Pt surface(figs3&4)has to be discussed more precisely.This reviewer is unable to foll ow the reason why they showed different reactivity,is it principally due to the organic moieties,o r due to the impurities of commercially available chemicals or a mixed effect.It has to be clearly d emonstrated,however,the only experiment performed with CO/water?CCl4would difficult to de scribe it in detail.9.The author try to restrain with repeated arguments in the text e.g.,page3para1:It was gener alized that.........,also appeared on page21first para.10.Captions of the figures are too long,the detailed description already given in the text,hencewould not be included here.Captions should be short and crispy.===============================================Dear Editor,I quite appreciate your favorite consideration and the reviewer’s insightful comments.Now I have revised the JCIS-06-247exactly according to the reviewer’s comments,and found these comments are very helpful.I hope this revision can make my paper more acceptable.The revisions were addressed point by point below.[general]The objective of this research was added at the beginning of the third paragraph of Intr oduction.How the study is useful for practical purposes was added at the end of Conclusion as o ne paragraph.[1]Ambiguous statement i.e.,“much work is still ahead”was deleted.[2]Ethyl pyruvate was used here as a typical compound(containing two carbonyl groups)to dem onstrate the feasibility of using our diagnosing tool to detect low-coverage CO(coming from deca rbonylation of EtPy)at the liquid-solid interface.EtPy is a reactant used in liquid-phase chiral cata lysis,and slight decomposition of EtPy to adsorbed CO was reported to influence the catalytic per formance.In addition,by studying that,we can directly compare our results with previous studies .More details in the first paragraph of Section3.2.[3]The IR cell was designed according to the IR cells used by many electrochemical workers.Refe rences were added.A photo was given in the Supporting Information.[4]A flow diagram of the experimental setup was given in the new Fig.1.[5]The CO adsorption experiments were performed in the same adsorption mode,by bubbling C O through a clean Pt surface in different days to achieve the same saturation coverage of CO.Initi al experiments indicated that given the CO bubbling rate was0.85cm3/min,CO can saturate on P t after30-45min.We bubble CO for60min to guarantee the same CO coverage.If we bubble CO for more time,or if we increase the CO flowing rate several times,the CO saturation coverage do esn’t change,indicating60min is already enough.A figure showing the CO uptake as afunction of bubbling time was given in the Supporting Information.[6]The displacement of EtPy by CCl4was confirmed by the removing of EtPy peaks.The mention of Fig.7a and7b etc.throughout the text were all corrected.[7]It is known that some solvents such as acetone can corrode the Viton o-ring.We saw the dam age of o-ring after using high-concentration EtPy.A reference to the Viton o-ring information was given.[8]The observed reactivity trend is due to a combination of both effects,with the accumulation of organic moieties on Pt surface during numerous flushing cycles the more important reason.A fe w proper sentences were added to clarity this point.[9]The repeated arguments in the first paragraph in Section4.3were deleted.[10]The too-long captions were significantly shortened.In all,I found the reviewer’s comments are quite helpful,and I revised my paper point-by-point.Thank you and the review a gain for your help!==============================================结果:[2]Ethyl pyruvate was used here as a typical compound(containing two carbonyl groups)to dem onstrate the feasibility of using our diagnosing tool to detect low-coverage CO(coming from deca rbonylation of EtPy)at the liquid-solid interface.EtPy is a reactant used in liquid-phase chiral cata lysis,and slight decomposition of EtPy to adsorbed CO was reported to influence the catalytic per formance.In addition,by studying that,we can directly compare our results with previous studies .More details in the first paragraph of Section3.2.[3]The IR cell was designed according to the IR cells used by many electrochemical workers.Refe rences were added.A photo was given in the Supporting Information.[4]A flow diagram of the experimental setup was given in the new Fig.1.[5]The CO adsorption experiments were performed in the same adsorption mode,by bubbling C O through a clean Pt surface in different days to achieve the same saturation coverage of CO.Initi al experiments indicated that given the CO bubbling rate was0.85cm3/min,CO can saturate on P t after30-45min.We bubble CO for60min to guarantee the same CO coverage.If we bubble CO for more time,or if we increase the CO flowing rate several times,the CO saturation coverage do esn’t change,indicating60min is already enough.A figure showing the CO uptake as afunction of bubbling time was given in the Supporting Information.[6]The displacement of EtPy by CCl4was confirmed by the removing of EtPy peaks.The mention of Fig.7a and7b etc.throughout the text were all corrected.[7]It is known that some solvents such as acetone can corrode the Viton o-ring.We saw the dam age of o-ring after using high-concentration EtPy.A reference to the Viton o-ring information was given.[8]The observed reactivity trend is due to a combination of both effects,with the accumulation of organic moieties on Pt surface during numerous flushing cycles the more important reason.A fe w proper sentences were added to clarity this point.[9]The repeated arguments in the first paragraph in Section4.3were deleted.[10]The too-long captions were significantly shortened.In all,I found the reviewer’s comments are quite helpful,and I revised my paper point-by-point.Thank you and the review a gain for your help!==============================================结果:/10.1016/j.jcis.2006.09.005CI修改稿回答审稿人意见范文模板修改稿回答审稿人的意见(最重要的部分)List of ResponsesDear Editors and Reviewers:Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers’comments concerning our manuscript entitled “Paper Title”(ID:文章稿号).Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper,as w ell as the important guiding significance to our researches.We have studied comments carefully a nd have made correction which we hope meet with approval.Revised portion are marked in red i n the paper.The main corrections in the paper and the responds to the reviewer’s comments are as flowing:Responds to the reviewer’s comments:Reviewer#1:1.Response to comment:(……简要列出意见……)Response:××××××2.Response to comment:(……简要列出意见……)Response:××××××。