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【中考英语突破】最新中考英语作文(书面表达)专题 (5)健康饮食、安全与救护

英语 第三部分 中考题型实战篇
中考题型六 书面表达
话题(五) 健康饮食、安全与救护
1 考情分析
分析云南近 6 年真题可知,针对“健康饮食、安全与救护”这一话题, 云南中考仅考查一次:2015 曲靖“Let's keep healthy”。
分析全国近 3 年真题可知,对于此话题通常有以下命题角度: 1.谈论健康饮食以及如何保持健康,如:2019 安徽、2019 乐山、2019 海南、2018 乐山、2017 咸宁; 2.如何保证自身的安全:如:2019 安顺、2018 毕节、2018 德州、2017 龙东、2017 常德。
【标准范文】 Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily?Now let me share my experience and ideas with you. First,I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red light.When the traffic light is red,I won't go.I will go after it turns green.I always cross the zebra walk because it's safe.Second,I often eat healthily and safely.It's important to eat more fruit and vegetables.Eating too much fast food will do
2 典例分析
树立自我保护意识,健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课。下面是某 地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》 的部分内容。作为一名中学生,请你写一篇文章谈谈你是如何进行自我保护 的,内容包括:①陈述你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的;②补充至少 一条你认为重要的其他事项。
What's more,I'd like to give you some advice.Now summer is coming, it's dangerous for us to swim alone,especially in deep lakes or rivers.So don't do that.
How to Keep Safe
Traffic
traffic lights
Swimming
rivers,swimming pool…
Internet
ID number,code(密码)
……
……
要求: 1.短文必须包含提示中所有内容,并适当发挥; 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范; 3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名; 4.词数:80-100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
First,I always obey the traffic rules
In short,if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves,we will grow up safely and healthily.
【审题思路】 1.本文介绍的是如何践行《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》中的部 分内容,因此文章为说明文。 2.写作时以第一人称为主,偶尔涉及第三人称。 3.介绍如何践行手册的部分内容,通常用一般现在时,偶尔涉及将来 时。
In short,if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves,we will grow up safely and healthily.
【句子升格】 1.When the traffic light is red,I won't go.I will go after it turns green.(用 not…until…改写句子) When the traffic light is red,I won't go until it turns green. 2.I never meet strangers alone.I make some friends on the Internet,but I never meet them.(用 who 引导的定语从句改写句子) I never meet strangers alone,especially friends who I make on the Internet.
Let's
keep healthy
Nowadays,more and more people have known about the importance of
keeping healthy.But how to keep healthy?In my opinion,it is important to
harm to my body.Third,I never meet strangers alone.I make some friends on the Internet,but I never meet them.At the same time if we are true friends,we should help each other.
【优秀范文】 Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily?Now let me share my experience and ideas with you. First,I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red light.When the traffic light is red,I won't go until it turns green.I always cross the zebra walk because it's safe.Second,I often eat healthily and safely.It's important
我保护的经 3.不独自去见陌生人(alone;on the Internet;at the same time;
历和想法
each other) 4.夏天不去游泳(especially)
结尾:遵守规则,遵守规则,照顾好自己,健康安全地成长(take care
保护自己
of;safely and healthily)
junk food.Secondly,it is necessary to take some exercise every day.Thirdly,
getting rid of bad hadbits like staying up is also an important way to keep
2.About food eat fruit and vegetables √ eat fast food ×
?
要求: 1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范; 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称; 3.80—100 词,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily?Now let me share my experience and ideas with you.
How to Keep Safe Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student,how to keep safe is very important. First,we should obey the traffic rules.When the lights are red,we shouldn't cross the road. Second,we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous.We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool.
healthy.
I hope all of us can enjoy a happy and healthy life.
B(2019·南充改编) 近年来,学生意外伤害事故频发,给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中 学生,我们该如何有效的自我保护,免受伤害呢? 我市正在举行以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛,请你根据下表提示,写一 篇短文参赛吧!
爱好以及社会关注的一些问题,把题目“Let's
”补充完整,然后用
英语写一篇短文。例如,你可以写 Let's make a banana milk shake/keep
healthy/get on well with parents/save water 等等。
要求: 1.抄写并补全所给题目,短文词数不少于 60。 2.语言流畅,内容连贯,书写规范,卷面整洁。 3.文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名,否则以零分计。
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