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中考英语作文专题训练—学习技巧类作文

主题训练(十二)学习技能—Learning skills名师点拨:对于一个中学生来说,学习一门技能是很有必要的。

每个学生可以选择自己喜欢的项目去学习和练习。

这样一方面可以让自己掌握一门额外的技能,一方面也丰富了自己的业余生活。

总之,这是非常值得讨论的主题之一。

主题词汇:as a middle school student, a kind of skill, for these reasons, depend on,with the help of sb, put my heart on it, be interested in, make our bodies strong, practice doing sth carefully, learn from, one’s favourite traditional skill有用句型:1. This is the first reason I want to learn swimming. The second one is ……2. I want to learn swimming by ………3. … is an important skill in our life.4. As we have grown up, we are no longer depend on parents, so we should5. Although the knowledge in our books is important, different skills in our daily life are also important6. Life is full of challenge, so we can’t stop the step of learning7. I;m sure it will be one of the most delicious soup in the dishes. I’m eager to make it.8. This is the first reason I want to learn swimming. The second reason is …..模拟试题:How can we learn a skill?1. What do you want to learn? (swimming, cooking, reading books….)2. Why do you want to learn it? (Give at least two reasons)3. How will you learn it?要点分析:1. 着重写一个你喜欢的技能。

2.第三点要展开写。

3.最后要从这个技能的学习中得到一个启示。

写作思路:I 给出学习技能的一些小建议1. I will learn to cook from my mother. I think the dishes which my mother cooked are delicious. I will learn washing, cutting and cooking step by step.2. I want to learn swimming . I’ll go to the swimming pool to learn it every week no matter it’s rainy or windy. Swimming is an important skill in our life.3. I’ll learn it with the help of my mother. I think if I put my heart into it, I will learn it soon.4. When I grow up, I will go to a driving school and learn how to drive from coaches. After having drivers’ licenses, I will practise driving carefully.II 特别给出一个学习以外的技能掌握—跆拳道I want to learn the popular skill—T aekuondo which is from Korea. It should really be body –to body combat and must be tradition to properly defend and attack.I believe that this skill will have some suggestions: protecting myself, helping the mind flow movements, strong my muscles.范文选登原文稿:I am a girl who is interested in cars. I want to learn how to drive as soon as possible. I think driving is very exciting and by driving I can get closer with the cars.When I grow up, I will go to a driving school and learn how to drive from coaches. After having drivers’ licenses, I will prastice driving carefully. In China, people under 18 are not allowed to have drivers’ licenses, so the only thing I can do now is to learn the law about driving.I believe I will be a good driver.〔点评与评分〕作者在整篇文章中条理清晰,意思连贯,语句通顺,用词得当。

亮点之处是举例角度新,抛开了常见的一些实例。

按中考作文20分计算,属于第二档的文章,可得14-16分。

需改进之处:1.学习开车的第二个理由不太妥当,可以改为:学会开车可以给我们带来便捷。

2.学习的过程还需要更详细些。

3. 学会开车后还得注意安全驾车。

修改稿:I am a girl who is interested in cars. I want to learn how to drive as soon as possible. I think driving is very exciting, and It will bring me more convenience to go anywhere. When I grow up, I will go to a driving school and learn how to drive from coaches.First, I will have a certain time to practice driving. Second, I will remember some tips about driving skills. Third. driving carefully is the most important thing . After having drivers’ licenses, I will driving carefully on the roads and pay more attention to safety . In China, people under 18 are not allowed to have drivers’licenses, so the only thing I can do now is to learn the law about driving.I believe I will be a good driver.参考文章1. The skill I want to learn most is cooking. I want to learn to cook because my parents are always busy, and I have to eat alone. If I can cook, I can cook for myself. That would be fantastic. I will learn to cook from my mother. I think the dishes which my mother cooked are delicious. I will learn washing, cutting and cooking step by step. Welcome to my home and taste my dishes after I have learn it.2. Swimming is a kind of skill. It can make our bodies strong. This is the first reason I want to learn swimming. The second reason is swimming can protect ourselves and other people. That’s a pity that when you see a child drawn you can’t help him because you can’t swim. For these reasons, I want to learn swimming . I’ll go to the swimming pool to learn it every week no matter it’s rainy or windy. Swimming is an important skill in our life.3. As we have grown up, we are no longer depend on parents, so we should learn some skills to do something by ourselves. I want to learn riding bike. First, it’s convenient and helpful . Second, if I learn it, I can go everywhere by myself. That’s great. I’ll learn it with the help of my mother. I think if I put my heart into it, I will learn it soon.其它范文1. Learn to do houseworkAs a Grade Nine student, I should do some housework with my mum.. I also want to be independent. So I learnt from my mum. Firstly, I learnt to buy fresh vegetables. Then I washed them clean. After that, I cut them into pieces. Later, I put some oil in the pan, heat oil and put vegetables in it. At last, put some salt in it and put them into a bowl. I practise cooking weekly, and now I can cook delicious food.In my opinion, when we learn a new skill, we should often practise and never give up. As the famous saying goes, “Practise makes perfect.”The harder you tried, the better you made.(说明文)2. I want to learn cookLife is full of challenge, so we can’t stop the step of learning. Although the knowledge in our books is important, different skills in our daily life are also important. For the time being. I want to learn to cook. First, it will be convenient if I can cook. I can cook an6y delicious food I want to eat. Second, if my parents are busy. I can cook dinner for them I think they will be very happy. Although it’s not easy for me to cook delicious food, I believe if I try my best, nothing comes between success and me.3. I’m eager to make soupMaking soup is one of my great loves. It brings us a lot of fun. So I want to make Luosong soup by myself.To make this nice soup, first, I buy a big piece of beef, some fresh vegetables and tomato sauce. Next, I cut the beef and boil it for a few minutes. Then, I put the kinds of vegetables into it, add tomato sauce, too. The tasty soup is finished.I‘m sure it will be one of the most delicious soup in the dishes. I’m eager to make it.4. Making craftsCraft is one of my great loves. Greeting cards are fun to make. I also buy many old things and try to make them look new with some paint and glue. I am learning some simple carpentry, too. I want a book-case but don’t haveenough money, so I will build it by myself. This makes me so happy and proud. During holidays when I have much free time, I’m going to make some other large crafts like model plane. I am sure it will be great fun.5. We should Learn to Do ChoresDoing chores is very important for every child. It can make us take a break from our schoolwork and care for our parents. It also helps to develop our self-help skills for our future life. So even we are still young, we should learn to do that. When we are free, we can help our parents wash the dishes and do the laundry. After we get up, we should make our bed by ourselves, and hjelp clean the bedroom and other rooms. If we experience the labour of doing housework, we will love our parents more.6. Chinese paper cutChinese paper cut has a long history of over 2000 years. It can be seen in useful. different parts of China. Many people, no matter young or old, are fond of it.People in northern part of China do well in making paper cut. They cut paper into different shapes, like birds, animals, flowers and so on.I think Chinese paper cuts are not only beautiful but also very useful. People usually put them on doors or windows when they celebrate something happy, especially for Spring Festival. More and more people are interested in it.I hope you’ll come to China to see more Chinese paper cuts one day.相关主题1. The fun of learning… (English, painting, play the piano, play basketball.a. your experience of learning….b. the reason(s) you think it is fun learning…2. My favourite traditional skilla. What is your favourite traditional skill?b. Why do you like it? (Give at least two reasons.)3. Learn to do housework4. Making crafts5. I want to learn cook.6. I’m eager to learn swimming.7. __________ has helped me to learn a lot.a. What has helped you to learn a lot?b. When did you first take it up?c. How did it help you ? Give some examples.(Reading books Being a volunteer Using computers Travelling)。

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