雅思精讲写作班精讲班第 1 讲讲义
第一章 第一章 写作概述
60 分钟
Task 1 150w G: letter A:graph 1/3
Task 2 250w Essay
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评分标准（四要素作文法）
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第二章 第二章 议论文----概述
一、字数、时间 250-300 words 35-40m
As one of the most important inventions of the past century, TV is playing a more and more important role in modern life. However, some people are starting to worry about its negative effects on traditional families. I am convinced that the existence of TV has brought about alienation among family members.
Those who strongly approve of the ban lay too much emphasis on the rights of nonsmokers. They ignore smokers’ rights. Smoking is just a personal hobby and amusement. It is a kind of lifestyle. It is a stress reliever and can bring great pleasure to smokers. Furthermore, for smokers, nothing seems more difficult and painful than giving up the habit.
二、理由段 2-3 段 12 句左右 主题句(1 句)+支持句(3 句左右/5 句左右) Topic sentence: Announce the main idea of the whole paragraph Supporting sentences: Why Topic sentence? One paragraph, one main idea
二、命题形式 1.Argumentation 辩论型题目 80% 2.Explanation 解释型题目 20%
第三章
第三章 argumentation 辩论型题目
结构一 一边倒结构 ☆开头 ☆理由 1
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☆理由 2 ☆（理由 3） ☆结尾
一、开头段 3-5 句 1.（背景）+双方观点+说出自己的观点（+引起下文） 2.（背景）+对方观点+对方观点的一到两个理由+说出自己的观点（+引起下文）
Tobacco is a wonderful commodity to tax. It contributes much to the government’s revenue. For example, the government of Britain collects enough from smokers to pay for its entire educational facilities. If smoking is banned, there will be a great loss to the government’s income. In addition, more serious social problems will arise such as unemployment because tobacco industry employs a lot of workers.
government’s income. In addition, more serious social problems will arise such as unemployment because tobacco industry employs a lot of workers.
Those who strongly approve of the ban lay too much emphasis on the rights of nonsmokers. They ignore smokers’ rights. Smoking is just a personal hobby and amusement. It is a kind of lifestyle. It is a stress reliever and can bring great pleasure to smokers. Furthermore, for smokers, nothing seems more difficult and painful than giving up the habit.
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Some people suggest that the government should ban smoking completely. Indeed, smoking is harmful to people’s health and it violates the rights and freedom of nonsmokers. However, in my opinion, smoking should not be totally banned for the following reasons.
Furthermore, families often quarrel over what programs they should watch. Thanks to hardworking TV workers, we enjoy more TV channels and more colorful TV programs. But a question has arisen: it is difficult for families to choose a common channel because they have different interests. It is inevitable to give rise to quarrel among them.
Tobacco is a wonderful commodity to tax. It contributes much to the government’s evenue. For example, the government of Britain collects enough from smokers to pay for its entire educational facilities. If smoking is banned, there will be a great loss to the
In addition, poor-quality TV programs can have severe effects on people’s mood and behavior. For instance, a person who watches too many idealized programs may become unrealistic. In addition, unhealthy programs which contain obscene and violent contents may cause people’s curiosity.
To sum up, I do not think that smoking should be banned. Tobacco industry makes much contribution to the government’s economy. Smoking brings many psychological benefits to smokers. Moreover, the complete ban of smoking will give rise to many social problems.
三、结尾段 1-5 句 重申观点(+重申理由)(+写点别的)
例1
Topic. Some people propose that smoking should be banned. What is your opinion?
Some people suggest that the government should ban smoking completely. Indeed, smoking is harmful to people’s health and it violates the rights and freedom of nonsmokers. However, in my opinion, smoking should not be totally banned for the following reasons.
例2 Topic: Some people hold that it is the television that makes the relationship of family members not as close as before. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
First, Watching TV occupies our time to communicate with our families. TV provides a ready means of relaxation for people who spend their days doing routine and busy jobs. As soon as TV enters into our home, most of our free time is controlled by it. What is more, the one-eyed monster requires absolute silence and attention. If any member dares to open his mouth, the others order him to shut up immediately. Therefore we communicate less with our family members.