2016年英语高考阅卷心得2016年英语高考阅卷心得今年全省英语阅卷总量是54万 4千份,参加阅卷的老师440人.整个阅卷过程紧张有序,筹备工作周到而充分,措施得力,为确保阅卷的质量,质量监控力度大, 多层次,全方位的把关,时刻关注着每一位阅卷老师的动态变化. 监控中多极管理, 省派小组---阅卷点领导小组---阅卷组组长----质检组----小组组长----阅卷员. 试卷实行双评制, 两位教师的评分如果超过7 分要进行三评.通过这次亲临高考阅卷工作, 真正体会了高考的严肃和神圣. 而且多了一份自豪感和责任感.闲话少叙,首先我想和大家一起解读一下作文评分细则,本人认为对指导学生写作非常有意义.极优档即百分制的 87-90-93-97紧扣主题;覆盖所有要点,内容充实;语法结构多样;词汇丰富,显示出较强的语言能力.语言小错不超过6个.专家评定的27 分作文How is everything going? I m very glad to know that you have come to Beijing to study. Are you satisfied with thelife here? Have you adapted to studying here?As you know, an English speech will be held in Beijing in July. I like taking challenges so I have planned to join the English speech contest. In order to win the competition, I went all out for it. But I meet a lot of troubles . I don tknow how to organize the files and how to use words express my thought, I d appreciate it if you could tell me the solutions to problems. I treasure this chances very much ,so it would be very kind of you to help me.In order to convey my heartfelt thanks to you . I llvisit you after competition. I ll take you to the Great Wall, and I am sure that you ll be stuck by this amazing world wonder.良好即百分制 73 77 80 83紧扣主题,覆盖所有要点,内容较充实, 语言有少量错误, 但基本不影响意思表达.专家评定的25 分作文How is everything going? I m so concerned about your life and study. Wecan communicate a lot in daily life.In order to participate in Middle school students English speech contest in July, I m planning to search for someuseful information. But I find I have difficulty in searching for information and spoken English. So I want ask you for your advice. I m sure I ll benefit a lot from your timely and valuable advice. I ll appreciate it your could help me.After my speech contest, I ll come to see you. I can show you around the tourist attractions. I think we will have a wonderful time!Looking forward to your early reply.专家评定的22 分作文How is everything going now ?I know that you came to Beijing for study last month. So does everything in Beijing agree with you? if you have any trouble living and studying in Beijing , I will go to help you.Recently, I took part in an English contest held inBeijing during holiday. But I found it difficult for me tolook for useful information and the use the language properly. And there are of great importance to win the contest.Thus, can you help me? What s more, I m going to visityou after the contest. Is it convinient for you? I do hopethat I can see you again. Looking forward to your reply.一般即百分制 60 63 67 70紧扣主题.基本覆盖所有要点, 能够表达基本内容; 语言错误已影响了部分意思表达,但多数句子基本正确.专家评定的21 分作文How is everything going ? Have you already adapted to the life in Beijing and do you have some problem in your study?I can t wait to tell you the good news that my middle school have just allowed me join in the speech contest group.I will be going to Beijing in July. But I still have some problem in search the information and English words, couldyou give me some suggestions? you can call we in the nextweek. Give me some advice on how to use the English words and some must-see problems.I intend to meet you after the speech contest, you can show me around Beijing and we can visit your school!Best wishes! I will wait for your early reply.专家评定的20 分作文How is everything going? I feel greatly honorned to be your friend. Do you smile at the life? And how is your study goes?I will attend an English speech contest in July. But I have some troubles searching the articles and the using the language. What s more, I don t know how to use the words. On the one hand , I hope you can help me solving these problems. On the other hand, I want to communicate with you. we have not communicate with each other for a long time.As far as I m concerned, you can give me a great help. What s more, I want to play with you. I m planning to go to the US after the speech contest, so that you can introduce your hometown to me. Last but not least , remember to smile at your life. I can t wait to receive your reply.专家评定的18 分作文I miss you very much. I want to know that your life and study. I hear that you came to Beijing to studied, so I want to ask you some questions.Because I will take part in a English contest in summer holiday, and I meet some problem which collecting paper and using language. So I want to you can help me. It is important for me . It is important for me to have your help. Becauseyou have reachied Beijing, so I believe that you can give me some suggestions. I know that you take interested in Chinese culture, so I think you give me papers in this way.When I finish the speech contest, I plan to visit you to communicate some interesting with you.较差对应百分制 43 47 50 53 57内容不完整,要点不全; 行文不连贯, 语言错误对应百分制20--23 27 30 33 37 40内容混乱或主要内容偏离主题;能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句.专家评定的11 分作文I want to see you very much. Do you have a matter? Your has the food in Beijing is must wonderful. What s the matter with your life. I think is must comfortable. And what s your study has the matter? You English is very much. So, I think you could help me.I will take part in a English speech contest. But, I havea problem, so, I need your help, I think my language is bad. And, my write is bad. So, I want to you help me . my English play doesn t write. So do you write a English play to me? If you can , I ll very happy.I wait English speech contest finished, I will go to Beijing visit you.I hope you recive letter to me, and I hope you can quickly. Because I will go to contest in April.Thank you!专家评定的8 分作文We have long time no meet. This is a very problem. I very miss you . you life is very ok, do you active? I am go to the active long time you study is ok? I have a speech contest .do you help me. I very hope you help , you are very good.I have lot s of problem. I want you help to cost the problem.do you help me, this is a very good and neet thints you have to help. Because we are a good friendsI weil go to you home I want meet you.I will go to you home to meet you after the speech contest.极差 0 3 7 10 13 17只能写出与内容相关的词语,没有有效信息;抄写其他文章或只写出与作文无关的内容.专家评定的4 分作文Hello, my good friend Tom. You are in the time how do you happy? You in the Beijing . Can eat Chinese food? I think Chinese food is very good. Want you in the Beijing learn stay is fun.I from to the Beijing in the 7 mon. from to in the student English speech contest. I hpe you help my English speech contest . I can speak English a later. Hope you help. However, the speek contest ask we can speak good English, want you lean to me.I want the speech contest in the over. Go to you home and you school ask to you in long time don t look you. I is very very hope you.In last, want can you help me. In the English speech-ontest to be good. Thank you. is very thinks, bey.通过以上对评分细则的解读,也许各位老师内心多少有点触动或感悟.下面是我在阅卷中从考生试卷中摘抄的经典高频出彩句子,或者是典型错误,希望对老师在以后的教学中有些作用.出彩句子:1. I have some difficulty in doing something.2. I ll appreciate it if you ----.3. Only with you help can I ---.4. Faced with so many problems, I have to turn to you for help.5. I will participate in a speech contest to be held in July.6. do somebody a favour7. there is no doubt that clause8. I am convinced that9. I have no choice but to典型错误Difficult----difficultygrammer grammarinformations informationadvices/advise advicea news newsmounth monthtroubles ---troubleheared heardI very miss you . I very happy . I am miss you verymuch .I in favour of you .I will to visit you.最后,我想对指导学生写作方面,谈以下我本人的一些粗浅的做法.1. 高考英语写作的类型并不是主要的事,关键的是教会学生如何正确有序地根据题目所给的要点去表达. 我们山东从2017 至2016 年作文全是书信, 因为书信最能有效地考查多个语言功能,比如说问候,道歉,感谢. 不管山东还是全国各地的高考作文,都注重了学生的生活,学生生活中,有可能接触到的事,人,或者某中想法. 总之一点,学生看到作文题目后,都有东西可写,得分高低,就看个人的英语表达能力了.2. 要点全是得高分的首要事.指导学生提炼题目中的写作要点和要点间的逻辑关系, 做到行文流畅,至少能保证及格线.3. 写对句子是保障. 作到要点全,行文流畅,句子对,至少在21分左右,也有可能得到更高的分数,23, 24等.所以我们在平时的教学中,从简单的五中句型抓起,强化练习,保证70% 以上的同学能把句子写对,写出符合五中基本句型的句子,将是我们备考最有效的过程之一.4. 整理加工能够让学生作文出彩的句型或高级词汇,不需要很多,多了学生记不住. 我认为有20-30 个就足已.这是影响作文提高的瓶颈问题. 这个问题看来简单,其实要付出我们全体老师共同的智慧和汗水,方可完成这一任务. 我晚上无困意的时候,我总在想这个问题,我们是否形成自己的独特的有效的指导学生写作的蓝本,公式化,具体化,让英语作文得高分,不在是神话.5. 我对英语作文高分总结了几句话,这也是我在阅卷中对写作的感受的凝聚.从整个阅卷的感受,我给考生三句话.首段勿出错二段要出彩三段快收敛为了能使考生写好高分作文,我编了几句三字经,也许有点作用.要点全,行文畅.句子对,忌罗嗦.内容实,别空洞.有细节,勿干瘪.有亮点,避造作.卷面净,布局美.得高分,我怕谁.总之, 这次高考阅卷给自己带来好多的感动,因为从中学习了好多东西,高考阅卷的过程不再是头脑中凭空的想像; 同时内心产生了巨大的冲动,发自内心的一份动力油然而生,摩拳擦掌,兴奋不已; 更多的是,阅卷的过程和阅卷工作结束后的思考给自己带来心灵上的触动,感到以前对事物的感知是那样的肤浅;自己在教学中好像还有点责任没有完全尽到;自己在工作还缺少更多的思考和总结;自己好像对高考研究的还不够深,而骄傲自满.刘广厚附送：2016年药剂科工作人员的工作总结2016年药剂科工作人员的工作总结在过去的一年中，药剂科各项工作坚持以科学发展观和构建和谐社会为己任，认真贯彻执行药政管理的有关法律法规，在院党政领导的关心和分管院长的直接领导下，在有关职能部门和科室的大力支持下，紧紧围绕医院的工作重点和要求，全科职工以团结协作、求真务实的精神状态，顺利完成了各项工作任务和目标。