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托福独立写作—中间部分

★独立作文核心思路搭建Heading (立场段)Position= Question response —Clear!程度+ 态度*To large extent, I am on the opposite side of this claim. * To large extent, I am on the side of this claim.Body (主体论证段)Support--Strong!论点+ 论据(概括)(具体)* CS1—Concede (agree) / (disagree)+ support (reason)--分析/ 解释CS2—Point1 (disagree1) / (agree1)+ support (reason)--分析/ 解释/ +--案例/数据CS3—Point 2 (disagree2)/ (agree2)+ support (reason)--分析/ 解释/ +--案例/数据Ending (总结段)Conclusion—Complete* To sum up, there is no point to claim that …. What is more, it is essential for us to have circumspection before any critical decision-makings. (it is essential that circumspection is made beforehand.)(建议类话题)* To sum up, there is no point to claim that …. What is more, it is essential for us to have circumspection before drawing a conclusion. (结论话题)☆题型分类:建议类:2011年02月05日agree or disagree:The parents should let children make mistake and let them learn from their own mistake.2010.1.30agree or disagree:The government should support scientific research that does not have any practical use.2010.3.12agree or disagree: If parents want their children to do well at school, they should limit the time their children spend on watching TV.结论类:2011.7.9agree or disagree:It is more important to choose friends that have fun with than to choose friends that will help you when you need them.2010.5.8Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:The best way for parents to teach their children about responsibility is to have them care for animals.2010.5.20Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Workingat home using computers or telephones is better than working in the office.2010.2.13Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:People holding different views cannot achieve success as a team.Frame—思路框架应对题型1:唯我独尊型(排他型)(the only/ the best/ the most important…)D o you agree or disagree that the m ost important thing that government can doto improve health care is to clean the environmentDo you agree or disagree with the following statement:The best way to improve education is to raise teachers’ salaries.同意否:University Education is the most important factor of success in lifeDo you agree or disagree that improving schools is the most important factor in successful development of country?D o you agree or disagree that v isiting museums is the best way to know a country.A gree or disagre e: the best way to travel is i n a group led by a tour guide.A gree or disagree: T he best way for parents to teach their children about responsibility is to have them care for animals.*题型特点:The …est is X*思路框架:HeadingTo large extent, I am on the opposite side of this claim.BodyCS1. ConcedeConcede—A is …(好/ 重要/ 有效).To begin with, I have to concede that X, at certain degree, plays an indispensable role in…/ is indispensable.限制级让步:…, to certain/ some extent, ……, at certain / some degree,……, in certain/ particular cases, ……, on certain / specific occasions,……, under certain/ particular circumstances,……, theoretically speaking,……, in short-terms,…CS2. Disagree1 (Optional)Nevertheless, X is also problematic./Nevertheless, X also suffers from some defects/ flaws/ drawbacks./*inevitable-- … + v. + inevitableIt can inevitably give rise to / trigger disasters.-- It is inevitable that…It is inevitable that … runs the risk of giving rise to disasters. / negative influences. * immune--be not immune toNevertheless, it is inevitable that X also suffers from several defects Nevertheless, X is not immune to several defects* makes the claim misrepresentativemakes the claim fail to be representative.makes the claim open to question.makes the claim vulnerable to any question or challenge.* degrade … asdegrades the claim as misrepresentative.! Nevertheless, X is not immune to several defects, which makes the claim vulnerable to any question or challenge.Nevertheless, it is inevitable that X also suffers from some defects, which makes theproblematic/ fail to be representative/ open to question./Nevertheless, it is inevitable that X also suffers from some flaws, which degrades the claim that it is such solution that is of the most significance as misrepresentative./estimate—estimationassess—assessmentevaluate—evaluationNevertheless, it is inevitable that the overestimation over the effectiveness/ the objectiveness of X also suffers from some flaws, which degrades the claim that it is such solution that is of the most significance as misrepresentative./Nevertheless, it is inevitable that the ultimately positive attitude toward X also suffers from some flaws, which degrades the claim that it is such solution that is of the most significance as misrepresentative.CS3. Disagree2X is not the …est.What is more, there is no point to assert that X is supposed to be/ X is entitled to be eternally the best approach./What is more, there is no point to assume that X is entitled to enjoy the eternal priority to any other approaches.CS4.过分侧重X 后果严重,危害巨大。

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