新课标、新高考、新思路---聚焦核心素养、获取关键能力语篇精深、读写结合（练习案）语篇四2018年6月浙江省高考读后续写真题阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer,and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque,a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul,my dad’s friend,picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning,Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast."The day starts at dawn on my farm,"he said.After breakfast,I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens.while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool.In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a hose ride,and he said yes,as long as my dad went with me.I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats,got on our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper,"Uncle Paul cried,"and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK!"my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks,the deep green pine trees,and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph2We had no idea where we were and it got dark.写作思路微技能之G-N策略:运用Given-New策略，我们可以基于原文本和首句（Given information）提供的信息，采用围绕中心词问一些相关问题，然后回答这些问题（New information）的方法，拓展我们的思路和角度，最终形成合力的故事情节线。
第1段我们可以尝试问这样的问题：1.What was the rabbit like?2.What was my reaction to the rabbit?3.What would we see while chasing the rabbit?4.What happened next?然后进行详细的回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段文章：_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________第2段的写作，我们可以根据上一段的内容以及段首句We had no idea where we were and it got dark.我们可以得知两个信息---迷路和天色已晚。
因此我们可以围绕这两个信息试着提以下问题：1.How did I feel and how did Dad react?2.Did we find the way out?How?3.Who may come to our rescue?4.How about the surroundings in the darkness?然后进行详细的回答，我们就可以写出这样的一段文章：_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________牛刀小试---句子翻译与句型转换1.受到惊吓，马突然跑了起来，跑得如此快，以至于我什么也看不见只能听见风在耳边呼啸。
2.突然，我听见远处潺潺的水声。
我突然想到或许我们可以沿着河流找到回农场的路。
3.时间一点点过去，夜幕开始降临，天空开始出现闪闪的星星，同情地看着我们。
4.随着太阳下山，天色渐暗，岩石和松柏都看不清了。
当黑暗追逐着最后一丝阳光，那些岩石和松柏也渐渐被夜色吞噬。
5.随着夜幕的降临，风吹得我有点冷。
当黑色笼罩了大山，风开始吹得冻骨了。
6.为了取暖，父亲生了一堆火。
一切万籁俱寂，只有呼呼的风声和噼噼啪啪的火苗声相伴。
7.更糟糕的是，树林里开始起雾了，周围的一切都被蒙上了一层纱，这无疑增加了我们的困难，让我们更加无助。
KEY:1.Frightened by the rabbit,the horse began to race.It ran so fast that I could hardly see anything but heard the wind whistling in my ears.2.All of a sudden,I heard the faint sound of water tumbling in the distance.It occurred to me that maybe we could find our way to the farm by walking along the river.3.As time went by,the night began to fall and the stars appeared in the sky,twinkling their eye at us with sympathy.4.As the sun set,it was getting darker and I could hardly see the rocks and pine trees clearly.5.As the darkness was chasing the last ray of daylight,the brown rocks and deep pine trees were swallowed by the night.As the night fell,I felt a bit cold when the wind blew.6.To keep warm,father built a campfire.Everything was in silence,only the howling of the wind and the flames of the fire for company.7.What’s worse,fog crept in without being noticed.Everything around us was veiled,which undoubtedly added to our difficulty and left us even more helpless.参考范文欣赏1：Paragraph1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.“What a lovely rabbit!”I shouted with terrific excitement.It was quite different from those I saw in our city,thus immediately stimulating my interest.Dad was also stunned by this special rabbit,gawking at it motionlessly.“Dad,let’s catch it as our pet!”I suggested,unexpectedly receiving his prompt agreement. Entirely forgetting what Uncle Paul had told us,we chased after that pretty rabbit,frantic with rapture.Unfortunately,so clever and swift was it that it disppeared in the forest before long.Not until then did we realize that the last ray of twlight was quickly disapearing among the numerous trees and we couldn’t find our track at all!We did get lost.Paragraph2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.The bone-chilling wind howled fiercely like a wolf,making the darkness even more suffocating.“Dad,what can we do?”I threw my arms around him tightly,quivering and seized by stark horror.“All is going well!”Dad answered in a gentle voice,calm and mollified.We wandered in the scary forest and didn’t know what horrilbe things would happen to us,hoping to find the way back.Suddently,we heard the sound of water roling down the river.We were over the moon and decided to follow the river.After a while,we heard the familiar sound of sheep and then caught sight of the farm house.The family were waiting for us in the distance.Seeing this,a radiant smile lit up both of our faces.参考范文欣赏2：Paragraph1:Suddently a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.My horse was so frightened that it began running ferociously.I could feel the air hitting my face heavily and hear my dad’s hysterical cry from a distance.My heart was pumping wildly and my blood was pulsing through my veins.I pulled back the reins,distracted the horse and tried every means to stop the horse butin vain.After what seemed an eternity,my dad caught up with me breatlessly and managed to stop my horse.But we found that we were in distress,with no track beside us.Paragraph2:We had not idea where we were and it was getting dark.The river beside us was still and serene under the last ray of sunshine but we didn’t have the mood to enjoy it.Suddenly,it occurred to us that there was also a river nearby the farm house.Realizing the river may be a guide back,our spirits soared and we began to trot briskly along the river.Just a few minutes later, catching sight of the silhouette of the house,I felt a feeling of relief and relaxatio surged through me.I could picture Uncle Paul’s smiling face and our delicious supper and I thought to myself that our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life.。