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雅思考试写作金牌教程(6-7.5分)教学方案第一次课一、教学目标:雅思写作概述、基本构成、雅思写作考试与其他考试的类比二、课时陈述:第一次课,2.5小时三、教学重点:议论文体和报告文体的题型四、教学难点:雅思评分标准与其他考试评分标准的异同五、教学亮点:雅思考官阅卷的潜规则六、课堂结构:1、雅思考试介绍2、雅思考试评分标准3、雅思写作话题介绍4、雅思写作题型介绍5、中英两国写作对比1、雅思考试介绍雅思写作的量分 task1 占三分之一,而task2占三分之二。

Task 1 (以下简称小作文)题型:LINE PIE BAR TABLE DIAGRAM MAP MIXEDTask 2 (以下简称大作文)题型:argumentation report2、雅思考试评分标准孙武子说“知己知彼,百战百胜”.为了更好的对付雅思写作考试,我们起先要了解它的具体评分准则。

Task Response and FulfillmentCoherence and CohesionLexical resourcesGrammatical Range and AccuracyBand 7—good userHas operational command of the language, though with occasional inaccuracies, inappropriacies and misunderstandings in some situations. Generally handles complex language well and understands detailed reasoning.具体要求:Task response: whether all parts of the task are addressed; whether a viewpoint is clearly expressed, developed and supported.Coherence and cohesion: whether the response has a suitable layout and logical ordering of points; correct and appropriate use of connectives. Lexical resources: range and accuracy of vocabulary; the examiner will check the correct forms and the spelling of words used.Grammatical range and accuracy: the range and accuracy of tenses and sentence structures.Task response or fulfillment (完整性)一篇文章必须有一定的架构,议论文通常由“内三合,外三合”所构成。

内三合讲求论点,论据,论证。

外三合正是Introduction(引言段)Body(正文)Conclusion(结尾段).此外,每个段落的主题思想靠推展句来实现,若只有主题句没有推展句来进一步充实,则有头无尾,不能构成一个完整的段落,反之亦然,若只有推展句,主题思想没有得到相对交代的话,则显突兀,也不算完整。

Coherence(连贯性)连贯性包括:意连和形连意连指的是内在的逻辑性,形连指的是转换词语。

两者相辅相成,只形连没意连,句子或段落缺乏有机联系,只意连无形连则行文不够流畅。

Sample:表示层进:first of all, firstly, to begin with, in the first place, secondly, besides, in addition, moreover, meanwhile, third, thirdly, what’s more,表示举例:for instance, such as, to take… as an example.表示解释:as a matter of fact, in other words, frankly speaking.表示总结:overall, in summary, to conclude, on the whole.表示强调: above all, what’s more important, in fact.表示让步:nevertheless, in spite of, even so.表示比较:in comparison, similarly, equally, in the same way.表示转折:in contrast, on the other hand, yet, despite the fact that. 表示原因:since, because of, due to, in that case.表示结局: to sum up, in conclusion, in brief.Cohesion (统一性)一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心,任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。

One simple point is that fossil fuels are bad for our environment. The use of fossil fuels leaves behind particles in the air which can cause breathing disorders and pollute the natural world. The environment is naturally able to deal with a certain amount of pollution, but humans are now so numerous and our use of fossil fuels is so vast that this has now become impossible. As a result, we are faced with choosing renewable forms of energy or destroying our natural environment.Vocabulary & sentence structure注意熟识与精确记忆高频精妙词汇,如遇到语言类考试:The proliferation of (如语言,互联网,环境) plays a dominant role: lesser-known languages(小语言),go extinct灭绝如遇到环境类的考题:“一次性”社会:throwaway society 有毒的:poisonous 有害的:Hazardous 放射性的: radioactive 生态系统:Ecological system恶性循环: Vicious circle. 不可再生的:non-renewable如遇到文化传统的考题:少数民族:minority ethnic groups 文化特性:cultural identity精神载体: carrier of the spirit 文化遗产:cultural heritage\legacy学习地道的语言模块reduce greenhouse gas emission 降低温室气体排放conserve fossil fuel 节省化石燃料develop low-carbon technology 研发低碳环保技术environmentally friendly products 环保产品alternative energy resources 新能源积累同义表达child-rearing - nurture - parenting - raising children - rearing -children teenager - youth – youngster- young adult句子结构:多变,简单复杂句并用(复杂句包括:从句,并列句,非谓语动词)句子结构的开端要多样化。

如:整形手术收到了最多的褒奖与批判。

No operation has received more praise and abuse than the cosmetic operation.No invention has received more praise and abuse than the Internet句式的升级:普通版:Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.升级版:Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisements in all forms of media.First, most people would agree that the Internet has improved the way we communicate. (此为六分作文中常见的句子)Firstly, few people would disagree that the Internet has greatly improved the way we communicate. (此为七分的句子)First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate (此为满分句子)Fast food is now much more widely available than it was 50 years ago. (六分)In the past 50 years the availability of fast food has increased dramatically. (七分)The past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the availability of fast food (满分)句子的地道程度:拒绝生硬的汉语字对字翻译,多熟记一些地道的表达方法,如,请试译:小汽车改变了一切:收入的增加和人口的增长,可能会使得城市小汽车的密度大约每十年增加4%至5%;交通流量上升,以致把所提供的任何规模的公路塞得满满的。

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