（七分范文）Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career， while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.Discuss both views and give your opinion.When they finish school， teenagers face the dilemma that whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school， I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way， they can become independent， and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their career，young people who decide to find work， rather than continue their studies， may progress more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career.On the other hand， I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Firstly， academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example， it is impossible to become a doctor， teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result，university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities， and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly， the job market is becoming increasingly competitive， and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete.For the reasons mentioned above， it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.以上就是这篇雅思写作7分范文的全部内容，字数足够。

这篇雅思写作范文所占的观点是应该在大学继续学习，但是对另外的观点也做了相应的论述，所用的篇章结构的语法结构都值得大家借鉴。

Band 5Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?What knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many years. Some people think that the true function of universities provide knowledge for their own purpose, but nowadays, more and more people point out that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills according to the workplace.The first reason for universities should provide these knowledge and skill is the students’ needs. Obviously, the most of the students go to university purpose of is to get some knowledge and skills which could make them have the ability to get a job. If a university does not provide these knowledge and skills, the students might not get a job and they would be very disappointed. As a result, the university would lose its students.Moreover, providing knowledge and skills needed in the workplace makes a university progress. The new skills and information always are initiated in the workplace, so focusing on the needs of the workplace the university could get sound strategies to do research and make it more modernization.Lastly, providing these knowledge and skills could benefit our country which usually gives a financial support to universities. Having these knowledge and skills, studentsare more easy to get a job, and this can make our coun tries’ economy strong.In conclusion, it can be said that providing the knowledge and skills which the workplace needs is every university’s basic function.只能拿到5分的原因：一、这个题目中有两方的观点：some 及others的，很明显这位考生在后面的论证过程中完全忽视了others的观点,都在一味地论证some 的观点的正确性，于是考官给出的评语是：it does not address all parts of the question.写作建议NO.3：Do not neglect any part, or you will regret your mark.不要忽视任何东西，否则你的分数会让你很伤心。

二、这位考生在连接词和复杂句型上都表现得不错，可是他太偷懒了，knowledge andskill这个词组一共用了9次，这种高频率的repetition让这位考生付出了比较惨重的代价，所以看者希望你们能够汲取这样的教训，多注意Paraphrase的练习。

尤其是常考的考试主题所可能涉及到的高频单词更是要做好homework. knowledge and skill就属于top 3 的高频考题的教育类，所以这类的词汇一定是多多准备才对，如expertise, conversance, instruction, competence, aptitude, technique, prowess, dexterity 都可以拿来替换这两个词。

写作建议NO.4：Paraphrase helps you parachute into a higher band.改写能助你拿到高分。

Band 6Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather thancompete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Nowadays, purpose of education being changed in Korea. There are some people who think that competition in children should be made, also others believe that children who are taught to co-operate as well as become more useful adults. There are advantages and disadvantages for both of the arguments.To begin with, what is good if a sense of competition in children is made? They could develop themselves more and more as they learn and study a lot to win from the competition. To prove this, in Korea, it is popular- even common now- to have a tutor who come to student’s house to teach extra pieces of study with paying a lot of money. They learn faster than what they learn at school. Furthermore, during the vocations, students study abroad to learn English for a。