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高考英语:观点对比类作文写作技巧23张
一认真审题,把握题材
审题包括:
1审体裁及格式(记叙文议论文说明文应用文 ---书信、通知、演讲稿、普通格式) 2审人称(根据题目需要对人称进行合理的选 择定位) 3审时态(文章应该主要使用什么时态) 4审要点与段落(文章需写几大段落及要点分 别是什么)
二组织要点,紧扣主题
观点对比类书面表达其要点似乎已被 出题者定位好了。但仍要逐个地,完 整无缺的把内容要点用英语短语或词 组例出来,并根据需要按顺序安排好。
3. 应用较多的语法结构和词汇。 (5\4\3\2\1)
4. 具备较强的语言运用能力。(5\4\3\2\1)
5. 使用连接成分,使结构紧凑。 (5\4\3\2\1)
总分计:
Fast food Fast food is very popular with people in China ,especially the young .The reasons for its popularity are as follows. Firstly, with the quick pace of modern life, fast food is really convenient and time-saving .People can save a lot of time and trouble in getting ready for their meals so that they can devote themselves to taking part in other activities .Secondly ,the prices for fast food are so reasonable and the services are quite excellent . However ,it is not good food in terms of nutrition, because the nutrition in it is not well balanced. We also don’t know whether it is safe. In my opinion ,people can have fast food when they are really in a hurry ;If not ,they had better spend more time in having the traditional food.
住很多单词
要学英语,易混淆
3.能为以后的英语学习打下坚 3.会影响汉语学习和今后的英
实的基础
语学习
讨论:未取得一致意见
注意:1.文章的起始句已给出 2.词数:100左右(不包括已 给的起始句);3.参考词汇:基础 — foundation 汉语拼音— Chinese pinyin
审题
体裁: 议论文 人称: 第三人称为主 时态: 一般现在时 内容要点及段落安排:
④People hold various opinions on...
Some people think...,others think...
介绍正方观点:
Some people think that …According to them, all of us should...
Some believe that… They are of the opinion that …
④ most importantly 最重要的是
⑤ on the one hand, ... on the other
hand, ...一方面,另一方面
⑥Each coin has two sides.
介绍反方观点
However, … of the students think…
On the other hand, …of the students think…
important (越来越重要的) role in our
daily life.
②Recently there is a heated discussion
about...
③When asked about…,different people
will hold different opinions.
In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.
the structure of the article
topic sentence
for the opinion
against the opinion
ending sentence
第一段:引出话题---- 学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始 第二段 赞同 1.儿童时期开始学英语。
2.儿童记忆力好,记单词多。 3.为今后打基础。 反对 1.从儿童时期开始学英语。 2.既学汉语拼又学英语易混淆。 3.影响今后的汉语和英语的学习。
第三段:结论---- 讨论未取得一致意见
The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Opinions are divided on this issue.
第四档(好):完全完成试题规定的任务, 漏掉1、 2个次重点。(16-20分)
第三档(适当):基本完成试题规定的任务(11-15分)
第二档(较差):末完成试题规定的任务。(6-10分)
第一档(差):末完成试题规定的任务。 只能写出与所给要求内容有关的一些单词。 (1-5分) 未能传达读者任何信息 : 0分 。
支持快餐的原因
反对快餐的原因
1.该食品很受欢迎。 2.方便,省时。 3.价格合理,服务好。
1.营养不均衡 2.是否安全
注意: 1. 词数120词左右。 2.参考词汇:营养nutrition 均衡的balanced
Fast food评分Fra bibliotek1. 完全完成规定的任务。(5\4\3\2\1)
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。(5\4\3\2\1)
Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood. As little boys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This will help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning. But others do not agree. Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school. If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time, it will be very likely for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but also to their future English learning.
Para1 __________ had a discussion about whether__________.
Para2 Opinions are divided on this issue. ________of the students think _________ should ________. What’s more, _______. But/ However/On the other hand, ______ of the students think _______ shouldn’t ______.
However, others have different opinions.
But …of the students think…
Others argue that …In their opinion,…
What’s worse… What’s more…
In addition, …
Besides, …
Para3 In short, _______ have not arrived at any agreement yet. / In my opinion, _______
Challenge your memory
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精彩开头句
Nowadays,…plays
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