高考英语写作技巧讲解
词汇使用四原则
• 1、词组优先原则 • 2、地道原则。 • 3、避免重复原则 • 4、后、高、长原则——后学到、较高级、较
长词汇。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. It’s very helpful. It benefits a lot. / It is of great help.
2.Your efforts will be very important. Your efforts will make a great difference.
4.The students there needn’t pay for their books. Books are free for the students there.
5. As a result the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure.
Only in this way can we achieve success..
• It is so easy that even a child can do it.
So easy is it that even a child can do it.
• Smoking did great harm to his health.
7、 各种名词性从句 That’s what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs
help at present.
8、 各种状语从句
Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, we’ll catch up sooner or later. Do call me before hand so that I can meet you at the airport. They had to wait because the rain was getting more and more heavily.
It was smoking that did great harm to his health
• Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete. He won the first prize in the 2004 Olympic Games.
Liu Xiang, an excellent athlete, won the first prize in the 2004 Olympic Games.
Yesterday we went to the East Gate, where we bought a lot of clothes
• The postman comes on time every day
The postman never fails to come on time.
• I have made great progress in English with his help
6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.
7. She went to Austria in order to study music. She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.
10.You can find my house easily. You’ll have no trouble finding my house.
二、使用丰富的句式:
利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思, 能增加文章的文采。 1. 感叹句 How happy I was when I received your letter! What a kind boy he is!
陈述不如倒装妙
• 在书面表达中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级 语法共有五种:倒装,强调,从句,独 立主格和分词结构,以及虚拟语气。倒 装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点 的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四 种形式,足以应对书面表达,如何应用 倒装,有很多方法和技巧。
• 1.否定词开头:如果写出的句子中
2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him .
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
The 2008 Olympic Games, whose slogan was One World One Dream ,was held in Beijing.
• Yesterday we went to the East Gate, and we bought a lan not only relax us, but also broaden our horizons
Not only can travelling relax us, but also broaden our horizons
• We can borrow five books, and we can keep them for a month.
2. 强调句 It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.
3、 倒装句 Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man. 4、 省略句 They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary. 5、 with短语 I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.
8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.
9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. Our school is made up of twenty–six classrooms.
6、 定语从句 In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place
where we can find much useful information.
Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
I couldn’t have made great progress in English without his help.
肯定不如双否好
修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点,在高中阶段 很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞, 而且对于考生来说,只要稍加注意,可以在文章中设 计双重否定的句子。例如想表达“邮递员天天准时 到”,如果写成The postman comes on time every day, 就不如变成双重否定,The postman never fails to come on time,就变成了亮点句,起到强调作用。“几乎每 个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响”,写 成双重否定There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude towards life had not affected by the earthquake.应 用类似的修辞会在高考中为考生加分。
Beautify your Composition
如何算是一篇好文章?
要
点 全
1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构
和词汇 词汇,句型 (高级)和
语法多样化(较复杂)
连
接 3. 有效地使用了语句间的 词 连接成分,使全文结构紧凑
• 书面表达在评阅时遵循 • 语言第一位(语言高级) • 内容第二位(要点齐全) • 结构第三位(文章分段) • 一、高级词汇和语法; • 二、修辞手法; • 三、有效的连词; • 四、名人名言或谚语。
• To prevent the pollution is very important.
How important it is to prevent the pollution!
• She is a clever girl.
what a clever girl she is!
• We can achieve success in this way.
3.Suddenly I had a good idea. Suddenly I came up with a good idea.
4.more and more people an increasing number of people
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.