写作要求 假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难， 请根据下面提示给她写一封 100 词左右的信。 1．要交朋友首先要做一个朋友； 2．要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友； 3．友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。
审题谋篇 项目 体裁 话题 时态 人称
结构
结论 应用文 向好友提建议 一般现在时为主 第二人称 第一段点出写信的目的 第二段正文列出所提的建议 最后一段写出写信人的希望
actually：事实上 especially：特别，尤其 homesick：想家的 anxious： 焦虑的
Here are some tips for you. First ,you’d better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment(环境） as soon as possible. Second, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. You will feel less homesick with many friends around.
To begin with, why not be a friend if you want to make friends? In addition, wouldn’t it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend? Just as a saying goes(常言道）,
增分佳句 1．建议信开头常用句式： ①I’m sorry (that) you are having trouble/difficulty/problems in making friends. 很抱歉听说你在交友方面有麻烦/困难/问题。 ②I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. 我知道你目前在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到 孤独。
2．表达建议常用句式： ①First(ly), why not join a club? If you do this you can make friends. 首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部呢？如果你这样做的话，就 会交到朋友。 ②Second(ly), you should/can try to talk with others. Then/That way, you will feel better. 其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。
词句推敲 1．词汇 ①交朋友_m__a_k_e_f_r_ie_n_d__s______________ ②做……有困难__h_a_v_e__tr_o_u_b__le_/_d_if_f_ic_u_l_ty__(_in_)_d__o_in_g_________ ③做朋友___b_e__a_f_r_ie_n_d______________ ④和……同甘共苦__sh__a_re__h_a_p_p_i_n_e_s_s _a_n_d__so_r_r_o_w__w__it_h_.._.____ ⑤需要____c_a_l_l _fo_r_/_n_e_e_d______________________
③I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on... 很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。 ④Here are some tips to help you./Here are a few suggestions. 这里有帮助你的一些建议。
③Third(ly), it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music. By doing this, you will calm yourself down. 第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样 做，你会使自己平静下来。 ④Last but not least, you should talk with her first. 最后同样重要的，你应该先和她谈一谈。 ⑤As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, you should help each other. 就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。
a friend in need is a friend indeed. Last but not least, wouldn’t it be a good idea if
you put your heart into making friends? It is well known to us that friendship calls for time and effort. • I hope you will find these ideas useful.
如何写建议信
文体感知 建议信是书信的一种，是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告 的一种文本。注意事项： 1．建议信一般由开头、正文和结尾三部分构成。 2．建议信开头要做到开门见山，直接点出写信议，可以利用适当的过渡词让 正文结构更有层次性，从而引出所给的建议。 4．使用“希望这些建议会很有用”来结尾，简短有力。
2．句式 ①知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。 I am sorry to know _t_h_a_t_y_o_u__a_r_e_h_a_v_i_n_g__tr_o_u_b_l_e_i_n_m__a_k_i_n_g_ _fr_i_e_n_d_s_________． ②如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种处境是很容易的。 The situation __is__ea_s_y__to__c_h_a_n_g_e__ if you take my advice. ③下面是帮助你的一些建议。 Here are __s_o_m__e_t_ip_s__to__h_e_lp__y_o_u_______．
3．建议信结尾常用句式： ①I hope you will find these ideas useful. 希望你会发现这些办法有用。 ②As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above. 如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加理解你， 会愿意和你交朋友的。 ③I believe that if you follow my advice, you’ll get along well with your classmates. 我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的。
⑥患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。 一般表达：A friend in need is a friend indeed. 高级表达：____J_u_s_t_a_s__a_s_a_y_in__g_g_o_e_s________, a friend in need is a friend indeed. ⑦我们都知道交友需要时间和投入。 一般表达：We all know that friendship calls for time and effort. 高级表达：___It__is_w__e_ll_k_n__o_w_n__to__u_s_t_h_a_t_____ friendship calls for time and effort.
妙笔成篇 [注意使用 however, to begin with, in addition, last but not least 等关联词] ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________
• Dear Su Ru， I am sorry to know that you are having trouble
in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
• Third, you take part in some social
activities. It will help learn more about the local customs （习俗） and cultures（文化）.
④要交朋友首先要做一个朋友。 一般表达：If you want to make friends, you should be a friend first. 高级表达：If you want to make friends, _w__h_y__n_o_t_b_e_a__fr_i_e_n_d_ ___f_ir_s_t____？(why not) ⑤你要和朋友同甘共苦。 一般表达：You should share happiness and sorrow with your friend. 高级表达：_W__o_u_l_d_n_’_t _it_b__e_a__g_o_o_d_i_d_e_a_i_f___ you share happiness and sorrow with your friend?