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高考写作评分标准1.总分25分,按5个档次给分;2.先根据文
• According to recent survey (poll/study/report/research), …
• A recent study/statistics/survey…shows…
• It has been (is) accepted (believed/proved/reported/estimated/agreed that…
• My idea/opinion may be expressed as follows:
• There are various reasons for…Firstly…Secondly…
• Opinions vary from person to person.
• Perhaps the most important reason is…
1. 词数150字左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。 2. 文中不得提及本人的相关信息。
The information and requirements for HalfControlled Composition are usually given
1. by Outline (提纲式)
Directions: Write an English composition
• I decided I would pioneer a new way, explore unknown powers, and unfold to the world the deepest mysteries of nature.
• I read all the books I could find that threw light upon these matters.
Step 2 Organize your composition
● use both sides of paper; plant more trees; Part 3 make some effective laws (measures)
Part 2 ● living a low carbon life is necessary
请结合下面的图片分,析谈谈你自己的看法。具体要求如行下为:
1.结合下图简要分析身边同学不符合“低看碳法生活”的行措为;
2.施针对这些行为谈谈你对“低碳生活”的看法及应采取的 措施。
说
Use both sides of paper
明
文
注意:1. 词数100-120;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文 连贯。
of/apply/employtly • 述说-say—put/state/claim/describe • 参加-join—participate/attend/take part in/ go in for/engage
in/be present at
• Some people believe (say/maintain/hold/claim) that…while others argue that…
• Now an increasing number of people are coming to realize the importance of English.
(opinion)
Part 1
● use paper cups / disposable chopsticks;
leave the lights on
(behavior)
1 use paper cups / disposable chopsticks 2 plant more trees; 3 use both sides of paper 4 make some effective laws 5 leave the lights on; 6 living a low carbon life is necessary
Step 3 Enrich your composition
Now, more people have become aware of the importance of protecting our environment. However, there are many people not realizing it. AnSyoomtheesrtbuedheanvtsioor?fte..n. forget to turn off the lights wSuhcehn athse: yusleeapvleasthtiec cblaagsss;roleoamv,ewthheicwhaistear rwuansntiengo;f eulseectariirccitoy.nPdaitpioenrecruwpsheanndundnisepcoessasbarley;cdhroinpkstbicoktstled awTrrayetetoorf…tpeenrususeadd,ecraeuasdienrgs htoaramgrteoeowuirthenyvoiurornompienniot.n, usLinivginsgoma eloswupcparobrotinnglifseeinstennecceess.sSauryc.h as: reasons, idiNomotso…nly can we save electricity but also we can plant more trees as well as use both sides of paper. TAhney goothveerrnmmeeanstusrehso?ul…d make some effective laws. Such as: some school activities can be held…
The application of transitional words:
in my opinion; to my surprise; as a result; in the meantime; for the sake of…
first of all; secondly; thirdly; then; next
下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题,有些孩子沉溺 于于网网上上交交流流而而忽忽视视了了与与父父母母的的沟沟通通。请你根据对该漫画 的理解用英语写一篇短文。该文应包含以下要点:
Half-controlled
Composition
1. 该该漫漫画画告告诉诉了了我我们什么 ; 2. 你你对对此此现现象象的的看看法法; 注意:
• With the rapid development of economy, China has become increasingly prosperous.
• With the advent of TV sets, people’s living standard has greatly improved.
• It may result in/give rise to/lead to…
• Considering/Given (鉴于/考虑到)
• As far as I see/know
• When it comes to…(就…而言)
• Apart from the…mentioned above,…
• The answer to/explanation of this problem involves many factors. For one thing, some…For another, others…
注意: 1、报道应包括图表所示全部内容,可适度发挥。 2、文章的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 3、词数:150 4、参考词汇:调查--make a survey
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according to the instructions given below in
Chinese. 假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部,开展了为
期两个月的活动。现在,你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行 经验交流,请写一篇英语发言稿,主要内容如下: 1.简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动; 2.谈谈你们开展该活动的收获。 注意: 1.词数不少于120个; 2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
A proverb says/As the old Chinese saying goes…(常言 道…) Various view exist as to…(关于…有很多说法)
It goes without saying…/There is no doubt that/No one can
deny that/Needless to say, …(毫无疑问)
Three-part strategy:
Part 1. opening Part 2. the main body Part 3. closing
It is strongly suggested that you have a topic sentence for each of your parts.
6.书写较差,影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
第一档(21—25) 1.完全完成试题规定的任务; 2.覆盖所有内容要点; 3.应用了较多的语法和词汇; 4.语法结构和词汇有些许错误,但为尽量使用复杂结 构和较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言应用能力; 5.有效的使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑; 6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。
In spite of the great progress made in…/ Despite the fact that… Recently, there has been much (heated) debate (discussion/argument) about (on/as to) Those who object to…argue (maintain/say/argue) that… Recent years, there is (has been) a sharp increase (growth/rise/decline) in/of… It is known to all that…/as we all know,… Those in favor of…believe that…