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高考英语 概要写作

Let us remember getting up early is a good habit. In a word, if we stick to getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot from it.
A possible version
Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why can’t we act before this happens? Why can’t we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?
高考新题型
概要写作
Summary writing
概要写作评分标准第五档(21–25points):
1.理解准确,涵盖所有要点
contents (内容)
2.准确使用相应的语法结构和l词an汇guage skills
3. 完全使用自己的语言。(60-80W()语言)
4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使概要 结构紧凑 structure
Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable.
You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.
spent much money on
treasure treat it kindly
use it carefully
• _S_o_m__e_t_im_e__a_g_o;_I_n_t_h_e__,industrial goods past; Decades ago were made _to__be__u_se_d__fo_r_a__lo_n_g_t_im__e__. to function well for a long time; durable
Passage 1
Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and got up early, we would be energetic the whole day. Nowadays, people still hold the same view. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
(结构)
Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.
Since ancient times, great importance has been attached to getting up early, for morning is a fantastic time to enjoy the freshest air and have a more accurate memory.(要点1) Besides, people who stick to physical exercise in the morning, thus, will be increasingly healthy.(要点2) Furthermore, getting up early can enable us to make good preparations for the day.(要点3)In a word, it is beneficial for us to form the good habit of getting up early.(要点4)
概要写作难点 1
• How to get the key points quickly and correctly? (如何快速、准确地捕捉要点)
抓住主题句或关键信息,忽略次要信息
Para 1: topic sentence Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. 忽略具体事例 detailed examplecharacteristics
Additionally, if we get up early and do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier. That is why many people getting up early do physical exercise year after year.
Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why can’t we act before this happens? Why can’t we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue? (182W)
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
Step 1 . Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points.
Once upon a time,ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱindustrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.
In fact, morning is the best time of a day because the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than at any other time of the day.
You spent much money on it and treasure it.
Para1.
Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable You spent much money on it and treasure it.
概要写作难点 2
• How to express the key points by using
your own words properly?
(如何灵活诠释,规避抄袭的嫌疑)
近义词替换
1.Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever.
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
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