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中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.1: 抓
➢断句
1.“他(Jim )的父母都有钱”
2.“他们给他很多零花钱。” 3.“他(Jim)理解父母的不容易” 4.“他不多花钱,想办法省钱。” 5.“他喜欢阅读,在网上买书” 6.“他有时去图书馆借书” 7.“别人买饮料他却带水上学” 8.“他从不花钱买零食” 9.“有人认为他的做法很怪异,但我.....”
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
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Stage 2.4: 抓
➢句子结构 It’s … to do sth.
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中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
因并果列 顺序
观点 …… 源句内化
Stage5:改
Stage4: 连
Stage1: 审
思
体裁 维 时态 导 人称 图
Stage3: 扩
Stage2: 抓
断句 动词 语块
(mind map)
造句
结构
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文, 把他介绍给大家,并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
(1)Jim的父母有钱,给他很多零花钱。 (2)Jim理解父母的不容易,不多花钱,想办法省钱; 他喜欢读书,在网上买书,有时去图书馆借书;别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学;从不花钱买零食。 (3)有人认为他的做法很怪异,但……。 参考词汇:零食 snacks 要求:(1)词数:80 ~ 100个。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
Some classmates think that it is very strange for him to do so. But in my eyes, his behaviour makes a lot of sense to me. After all it is a traditional virtue to save money.
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.2: 抓
➢动词
时态
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.3: 抓
➢语块
p零oc花ke钱t money b从or-ro- w- -.借.from _p_更ref喜er欢to做d某o…事…__
From the point of my view, we are supposed to learn from him. Only in this way can we live a meaningful life.
要点
文 章 语言 的 评 价
行文
齐 全
语 法
准确
选
词
丰
连贯
富
连接词
过渡 性句
子
英文写作评分标准(部分)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 1: 审
➢体裁________________ ➢时态________________ ➢人称________________
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文, 把他介绍给大家,并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
(1)Jim的父母有钱,给他很多零花钱。 (2)Jim理解父母的不容易,不多花钱,想办法省钱; 他喜欢读书,在网上买书,有时去图书馆借书;别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学;从不花钱买零食。 (3)有人认为他的做法很怪异,但……。 参考词汇:零食 snacks 要求:(1)词数:80 ~ 100个。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
Better Your Writing
Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich. Therefore, a lot of pocket money is given to him by his parents every day. But to my surprise, not like others, Jim tries his best to save money as possible as he can instead of wasting money. The reason is that he knows how hard they work to earn the money. Jim loves reading, and he buys books from the Internet. Sometimes he borrows books from the library in order to save money. Apart from that, he always brings water to school instead of buying juice. In addition, he never buys snacks with his pocket money.
第五档: (13-15分) 能写明全部或绝大部分内容要 点;语言基 本无误;行文连贯,表达清楚。 语法、词汇、标点、大小写、时态准确 分段、连接词、复合句、高级词汇使用恰当
第四档:(10-12分)能写明全部或大部分内容要 点;语言有少量错误;行文基本连贯,表达清楚。
第三档: (7 - 9分 )能写明大部分内容要点;语言 有较多错误; 尚能达意。