M1: 李华。（该怎样介绍自己才合适呢？） I am a student in China … M 2: 写信。（①写给谁？如何称呼？②写信 的目的？③什么样表达方式才算礼貌得体？ 结尾的语言？开头与结尾的格式？）
1.Dear sir / Madam 2. …so I am writing to you for further information about…. 3. I am looking forward to your early reply. 4. Yours faithfully Li Hua
M3: 计划 I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the coming vacation. M4: 广告 I’ve seen/ read your ad on a newspaper. I am interested in your scheme/six-week English course . M5: start date? When will the course start? What is the date when the course starts? Would you please tell me when the course will begin?
• 三)参考模板:Dear ______ , • ①How are you doing? I am____(问好+ 自我介绍) ②I am writing to ask for information about... ______(要询问的内容). • ③ First of all, what are ______(第一个 问题)? Secondly/Besides, when will ______(第二个问题)? Thirdly, is ______(第 三个问题)? • ④ I would also like to ask ______（别的 问题) • ⑤ Thank you for your kindness, I would be grateful to receive a prompt reply. • ⑥ I look forward to our early reply.
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笫二节书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期 六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封 信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）
注意：1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3．参考词汇：住宿-accommodation
认真审读汉语提示 假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英 语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意， 请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内 容）。
M6: class size? I wish there would not be too many students in a class. M7: hours per week? How many class hours are there per week? M8: How much? I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course. Is the accommodation included?
读懂英文提示， 准备完美句子
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四）解题步骤： 1）审题 ： 确定写作的类型---应用文— 询问 信？ 第一，二 。时态：现在，将来 确定话题、人称： . 2)列提纲：将题目要求的要点陈述出来。 ①开头：自我介绍（或问候） 写作目的（点明打算要做的事情，并向 对方咨询信息） ②详述要咨询的信息 ③结尾：：表示感谢、期盼 回复 3）写作：4）检查：①是否写完要点；②是否有 语法错误。
参考范文： 称呼）Dear Sir/ Madam, （自我介绍）I am a student from China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.（写信 目的） I've seen your ad, and I am writing to see if you could provide me with information about your six-week English course.
15. 对……感兴趣 be interested in .
套用句式背诵 1. 如果能给我I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning…
2. 我写信是想知道您能否给我提供有关……的信 息。
4. 您能告诉我……吗？
4. Would you be so kind as to tell me…?
5. 期待您及时答复。
5. I am looking forward to your immediate response.
• 询问句式背诵: • 一般疑问句 • Meanwhile, would you please tell me more information ? • Should I take some tests? • Finally, are there dormitories for students to live in ?
• 特殊疑问句 • In addition, what is the expense for each school year and how many school years in all? • Above all, how long will the courses last?
• 提问式的陈述句 • I wonder what requirements you have for the academic subjects? • I 'd like to know whether your agency will provide us with...
Dear Sir/Madame, I ’ m writing for more information about the day tour to London. As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?
2. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding…
3. 此外，有没有我要特别注意的事情？
3. Besides, is there anything that I should pay special attention to?
• （表示感谢和期盼回复）I look forward to your early reply. Yours, • Li Hua
• 五.模拟训练: • 假定你是李华，正在英国牛津参加短期语 言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网 上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体 信息不明确（箭头所指内容）。请给该旅 行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。 • 注意：1．词数100左右，信的格式已为你 写好。 • 2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行 文连贯。 • 3．参考词汇：牛津——Oxford • 费用——fee
M9: type of accommodation?
Would there be host family or university dormitory?
连句成篇 1. 巧用连接词与过度副词把简单的短句连成 比较长的句子。 连接词：and, but, rather than, or, etc. 过度副词：otherwise, however, besides, or rather, first, second, the last, first of all, secondly, finally, etc. 2. 合并信息相关的句子，使行文简洁不啰嗦。
询问信
• （一）文体概述 • 咨询信是写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣，希 望了解详细信息的信件。通常包括三部分内 容： • 1.自我介绍并表明写作意图，说明写这封信 的目的是要寻求什么样的信息； • 2.某一具体问题进行询问； • 3.表明获取信息的急切心情，可以提供联系 方式以便收信人与你联系，并表达你的感谢 之情。
常用语块
• • • • • • • • 1.计划做某事 plan to do sth. . 2.上学 attend school . 3.广告 advertisement=ad. . 4.暑假期间 during summer vocation . 5.六周的 six-week . 6.课程 course . 7.每周 per week . 8.多少... how many/ much .
• （具体询问） First ， when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory?