Brushing away grasses covering the big hole, Alex jumped into the cave. Crash! The ground collapsed (倒塌) and Alex was down into the depth of the cave. 他挣扎着站起来，发现左胳膊很疼，好像断了(as though). Above him was the hole, which was far out of his reach.
④或者至少如果现在有个朋友和他在一起，他也不会这么 害怕。 Or at least if he had a friend with him now, he would not be so frightened.
Brushing away grasses covering the big hole, Alex
Assignment
1. Polish your story.
过去：had done
•She loves the baby as if it _w_e_r_e her own son.
•I remember the whole thing as if it_h_a_d__h_a_p_p_e_n_e_d_ yesterday. •They talked as if they__h_a_d__b_e_e_n_____friends for years. •It looks as if he __w_e_r_e_/i_s___ drunk.
Guess!
I guess she would rather her boyfriend….
二、主A would rather 现在: did
(that) 主B+谓.
过去: had dk at the terrible situation I am in! If only I ___ youBr advice.
A cave adventure
One day Alex decided to explore a cave at the edge of his village. Parents warned children away from the cave but kids were extremely curious about it.
A. follow
B. had followed
C. would follow D. have followed
You say:“ If only….”
现在: did
三、If only 过去: had done
未来: could/would… + do
现在： did 四、as if /though + Clause
读后续写微技能指导6 —虚拟语气在续写中的运用
表达的精准性和丰富性
Review 虚拟语气
一、虚拟语气在if条件状语从句中
条件 从句
If 从句的谓语形式
主句的谓语形式
现在 did (were)
would/could/should/ might +do
过去
had done
would/could/should/ might+have+done
One day Alex decided to explore a cave at the edge of his village. Parents warned children away from the cave but kids were extremely curious about it.
五、虚拟语气should类 表示要求,命令,建议的虚拟语气。
宾语从句中常见动词: 一个坚持, 两个命令, 三个建议, 四个要求。即 1). insist 2). order, command 3). advise, suggest, propose 4). demand, desire , require, request
夸张
as if it had been broken. Above him was the hole, which was far out of his reach.
How did Alex feel then?
翻译：①被困在这个黑漆漆的吓人的洞里, Alex害怕 又后悔。 ②要是他听妈妈关于这个洞穴的警告就好了 (if only) ！
jumped into the cave. Crash! The ground fell and Alex
was down into the depth of the cave. He struggled to
hsibs fweaest afinlleddfowuinthd rheisgrleftt/aarnmgehru…rt.as though it had b+ee虚n b拟ro语ke气n. 句Above him was the hole, which was far
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gratitude
“If you had been more careful, Poppy would not have been lost!” I
couldn’t contain my anger and shouted at Dad.--The Lost Dog anger
续写：A cave adventure
Suddenly there was light flickering in the distance and there came
the faint voice. “Alex! George! Where are you?” It was their
parents who came to their rescue! Both boy ran with all their
1.did(were) 未来 2. should+ do
3. were to do
would/could/should/ might +do
Today is a rainy day. The girl’s boyfriend sent her an umbrella, but she would rather he….
had brought his mobile phone with him! Or at least if he
had a friend with him now, he would not be so
frightened.
心理描写
What would happened next?
However, in the two following two hours Alex and George explored the maze(迷宫)-like cave, attempting to find a way out, but in vain(徒劳). Now Alex was exhausted and his arm was sore.
the rabbit into the forest!----2018.6浙江续写：骑re马gr遇et白/ d兔esperation
If it had not been for Dorothy, I would not have brains. I owed(欠) all
my luck to her.--- The Wizard of OZ «绿野仙踪»
in her eyes. ----2016.10浙江高考续写：夫妻吵架 森林迷路regret
We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. I was almost
on the edge of break down. How I wished I _h__ad__n_o_t_f_o_ll_o_w_e_d(not follow) the rabbit into the forest! / If only I __h_a_d_n_o_t_f_o_ll_o_w_e(ndot follow)
might into their parents’ arms. Now they couldn’t help bursting
inWtorittienagrstaasnkd：swore to themselves that never would they be so bCooldmapnledteretchkelesstos rayn,yumsinogres.ubjunctive mood ----if虚拟条件句 / wish / if only / would rather ---1. How could they feel then? angry / frightened / regretful… 2. What might they think or say? (P.S. write no more than one dialogue.)
out of his reach. Trapped in the black scaring cave, Alex
was filled with fright and regret. If only he had listened
to Mum’s warning about it! Besides, how he wished he