读后续写高分作文的写作方法指导（以衡水中学四月联考英语作文为例）2020江苏省丰县中学上课讲义正文指导版本一：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.The ceiling of thick branches shut out the sky and covered the path in darkness.Jane looked around blankly,a shiver of alarm going through her.Soon the full moon rose,large,round and clear,shining in the deep blue.“Why not pick stones from the stream and make them in the form of SOS?”cried Jane excitedly,determined to save herself independently.Having finished it,she feltso exhausted and slept beside the stones.T omorrow will be another day.It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Birds were chirping,the branches swaying to the rhythm of the wind,and the leaves fluttering like graceful butterflies.A ray of hope rose naturally in her heart.Suddenly,the buzzing of the helicopter came overhead again.It didsaw her waving yellow blouse and most important the SOS.Upon its landing,so thrilled was she that she threw herself at T om and hugged him tightly,tears of joy welling up in their eyes.“I miss you so much.Have you found the spot?”“Yes,in our heart.”版本二：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.The trees cracked and groaned in the dark.A thrill of alarm came through Jane.Eventually,she determined on spottingan open area,awaiting another helicopter.She stumbled her way through the horrible forests and climbed to a high place.No time to waste.After she flagged her yellow blouse,Jane sank tothe ground,anguished and defeated.Gazing at the sky,Jane recalled T om and tears blurred her eyes.T errified as she was,she fell fast asleep in the wild.It was daybreak when Jane woke up.And,as luck would have it,a helicopter just came by! Jane yelled and skipped,waving her yellow blouse.T o her great joy,the helicopter noticed herand landed.What astounded her most was that it was T om who sat in the helicopter!Out rushedT om.A huge smile spread across Jane's face and the couple hugged tightly for a long time.It was the narrow escape that made Jane perceive that love was priceless.Over the next years,a change came over the couple.Reasoned discussion replaced fierce arguments and politeness replaced contrariness.They treasured the life and love more.结论是：1.首先要找到conflict在哪里，然后最多五句话说清楚solution。
解决方案不包括心情和环境描写。
第一篇昨天文章里已经分析过，下面只说第二篇：Solution:She stumbled her way through the horrible forests and climbed to a high place.a helicopter just came by.Out rushed Tom.看起来就非常简单，无非就是：找空地失败；天亮飞机又来了；夫妇重逢。
2.其次围绕solution，进行心情和环境描写的铺垫，以上两篇都是非常好的例子。
第一篇昨天已经分析过，第二篇的分析：第一段：环境描写烘托恐惧：The trees cracked and groaned in the dark.A thrill of alarm came through Jane.心情描写：Jane sank to the ground,anguished and defeated.Gazing at the sky,Jane recalled T om and tears blurred her eyes.Terrified as she was,she fell fast asleep in thewild.第二段：心情描写：A huge smile spread across Jane's face and the couple hugged tightly for a long time.但这篇的结尾太多的议论不合适，需要大胆舍弃部分，这样也不会超出太多的字数。
实战：（衡水中学四月联考卷）Paragraph1:On the Christmas eve,Cathryn received a call,which said to return thepet to her at the park gate.Praagraph2:Just then Mary recognized the thief was her boyfriend.写作指导一、情节构思：Conflict--Solution本文的conflict:find the thief;how to treat him，而solution就要分两种：forgive or not to forgive?无论选择哪种solution，都要用最简洁的3-5句话：1.Mary陪Cathryn去。
2.小偷出现。
3.他们走上前去。
4.小偷解释。
（小偷为什么这样做？联系break up，同时一定要注意开头weak dog）5.Mary回复（是原谅还是让他去警局解释，这就要表现表现Mary的性格了，刚正不阿还是温柔善良）。
二、细节铺垫：心情描写、环境描写（Cathryn接到电话后的兴奋；Mary的怀疑，这里要表现她的性格特征，为下文回答铺垫）1.Mary陪Cathryn去。
（公园门口的环境描写：阴沉）2.小偷出现。
（小偷胆怯害怕；认出小偷后Cathryn的愤怒）3.他们走上前去。
（直面小偷的愤怒）4.小偷解释（挽回爱情，把狗治好）5.Mary回复（照应开头她的性格）具体过程：第一段：激动怀疑环境描写Action-Res ponse第二段：跑过去Action-Res A feeling of excitement ran through her body,her heart thumping fierce ly and the phone falling to the ground with a loud bang.But with a cloud of suspicion hanging over her,Mary couldn’t stand an y crime and decided to accompany her mom to the park.A thick mist enveloped the park with dead leaves fluttering slowly in th e air.Suddenly,a young man came into sight who looked around carefully a nd tiptoed to the gate,a cute dog—t heir Labradoodle—i n his arms.“He was the very male that day.”Cathryn blurted out in anger.They rushed over,looking him in the eye,so furious that they just co uldn’t contain themselves.He felt a ripple of fear pass through him.“I’m…sorry,”stammered theponse man,“I just wanted to cure the weak dog and give you a surprise aft er breaking up with you.”“You go too far.Your selfish behavior may well kill my puppy,”Mary sneered,“You need to go to the police station and explain it to the policemen.”结尾Then,she turned around and left without a word.完整的：On the Christmas eve,Cathryn received a call,which said to return the pet to her atthe park gate.A feeling of excitement ran through her body,her heart thumping fiercely and her phone falling to the ground with a loud bang.But with a cloud of suspicion hangingover her,Mary coul dn’t stand any crime and decided to accompany her mom to the park.Athick mist enveloped the park with dead leaves fluttering slowly in the air.Suddenly,a young man came into sight who looked around shaking with fear and tiptoed to the gate,acute dog—t heir Labradoodle—in his arms.“He was the very male that day.”Cathryn blurted out in anger.Just then Mary recognized the thief was her boyfriend.They rushed over,looking him in the eye,so furious that they just couldn’t contain themselves.He felt a ripple of fear pass through him.“I’m…sorry,”stammered the man,“I just wanted to cure the weak dog and give you a surprise after breaking up with you.”“You go too far.Your selfish behavior maywell kill my puppy,”Mary sneered,“You need to go to the police station and explain it to the policemen.”Then,she turned around and left without a word.。