2011年6月1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3.我的建议Online ShoppingOnline shopping, as an act of buying products and services over the Internet, is grow ing in popularity ever, which has been significantly shocking our lifestyles. Many individu als favor this kind of shopping because of its ease・ But like any other newborn device, p eople may unconsciously expose themselves to the threat from it by incaution.For those who work for lengthy hours, the internet offers them much convenience・ Fi rst of all, they do not have time to visit the store during regular trading hours, while onli ne retailers allows orders twenty-four hours a day. As well, online shopping gives the cust omers the facility to compare prices and features of the products thanks to the detailed pr oduct description・ In most occasions, the items are cheaper than online than in the conven tional stores, making it an appeal to most people・While there are numerous advantages of online shopping, there are also threats and fe ars regarding this way of shopping. Information security is the key concern. Online payme nt may not be so secure because of identity theft. Another problem of on line shopping is encountering misleading and false product information.In my viewpoint, online shopping is a double-edged sword ・ Buying on reputed on line stores is a good solution to ensure the pleasure and comfort of the internet shopping.Online shopping, as an act of buying products and services over the Internet, is growing in popularity ever, which has been significantly shocking our lifestyles. Many individuals favor this kind of shopping because of its ease. But like any other newborn device, people may uncon sciously expose themselves to the threat from it by in caution.For those who work for lengthy hours, the in ternet offers them much conve nience ・First of all, they do not have time to visit the store during regular trading hours, while online retailers allows orders twenty-four hours a day. As well, online shopping gives the customers the facility to compare prices and features of the products thanks to the detailed product description. In most occasions, the items are cheaper than online than in the conventional stores, making it an appeal to most people・While there are numerous advantages of online shopping, there are also threats and fears regarding this way of shopping. Information security is the key concern. Online payme nt may not be so secure because of identity theft ・ Another problem of on line shopping is encountering misleading and false product information.In my viewpoi nt, online shoppi ng is a double-edged sword ・ Buying on reputed on line stores is a good solution to ensure the pleasure and comfort of the internet shopping.2010年12月1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2.为了让孩子独立，父母应该……2. How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent3.Nowadays, there is a growing con corn over such a phenomenon, t hat is, some parents take care of almost everything concerned with their children,including study, work, marriage. Some parents believe that this is love, however, it is only to destroy children，s independence thoroughly.For the future of the next generation, more efforts should be macleby parents to help their children to be independent. The fundamental one is to cultivate the awareness, namely, the importance and necessity of being independent, which is supposed to begin from childhood. Childrcn should be taught that no one can be stronger and more helpful than themselves in this world.5.The quality of independence is so indispensable for us that parents had be tt er act as a tutor, n otei dicta tor. And only wit h pare nts，t rus t, can the next gencration accumulate confidencc step by step.6.点评：' '今年的作文主题非常贴近考生的生活，给了考生很大的发挥空间，擅长写日常牛活细节的学牛可以写上三五个句子勾勒父母对于子女的过度关爱，而擅长逻辑思考的学生则可以更多地阐述父母怎样的行为才可以培养子女独立的品格，而过度宠爱正导致了独立精神的消失。

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