对外经济贸易大学远程教育学院2011-2012学年第一学期《商务英语写作》课程期末考试复习题（答案供参考）一．请你判断(40%)请你仔细阅读本课程教材《商务英语写作》第4章和第5章，然后对以下两份简式报告的写作质量做出判断。
请你参照上述两章中的体例，采用该教材第61页上说明的标记方法（采用英语字母A, B, C和D来分别代表“错”、“差”、“对”和“对且好”），在所给填空处写下你的评分，然后就每份提出至少三个问题和修改意见。
1. (A Short Report)Report on a Place for Rest (Opening Conference Room)Dear Sir,We‟d like to ask for your permission to open the conference room for all the staff to have a rest during lunch break. We would be appreciated for Necessary recreational facilities, such as cards and Chinese chess, etc. With a nice rest, we‟d be more energetic in our work. Thanks for your consideration.All Staff我认为这份报告得分为___C____（英语字母A, B, C和D中任选一个字母）如果你认为这份报告写得很好，没有需要修改的地方，请在这里打个对勾：________（也就是说，下面的题就不用做了）。
我发现这个报告至少有以下三个句子有一些问题（依次抄写你认为有问题的句子，然后在其下面写出你的简短评论和你的修改版）：We would be appreciated for Necessary recreational facilities, such as cards and Chinese chess, etc. Necessary 不需要大写直接将Necessary改为necessary.All Staff 落款应该是Yours faithfully,2. (A Short Report)Dear Sir,In order to ease the pressure of work every day, we would like to have a better place for rest at noon. And here is our proposal:1. Open some of the conference rooms from 12:00-13:00 for staff2. Supply some appliance, such as newspapers, Chinese chess, and etc in the conference rooms for staff.We are looking forward to your approval.Yours sincerely,我认为这份报告得分为_______（英语字母A, B, C和D中任选一个字母）如果你认为这份报告写得很好，没有需要修改的地方，请在这里打个对勾：________（也就是说，下面的题就不用做了）。
我发现这个报告至少有以下三个句子有一些问题（依次抄写你认为有问题的句子，然后在其下面写出你的简短评论和你的修改版）：3. (A Short Report)Dear Sirs,We are so happy to have a relaxing time at noon. But now our problem is no place to do it. Would you kindly open a place for us? Thanks a lot and hope your kind reply.Best regardsAll staffs我认为这份报告得分为_______（英语字母A, B, C和D中任选一个字母）如果你认为这份报告写得很好，没有需要修改的地方，请在这里打个对勾：________（也就是说，下面的题就不用做了）。
我发现这个报告至少有以下三个句子有一些问题（依次抄写你认为有问题的句子，然后在其下面写出你的简短评论和你的修改版）：4. (A short Report)Dear Mr. President,I am writing to apply for the daily opening of the meeting room.A good rest in the noon is necessary for work effective in the afternoon. Due to the busy work, we hope for your permission to open the meeting room from 12 am to 1pm on work days. Some recreational activities like Chinese chess or cards will be also are highly welcomed.Jack, on behalf of the staffJanuary 12, 2011我认为这份报告得分为_______（英语字母A, B, C和D中任选一个字母）如果你认为这份报告写得很好，没有需要修改的地方，请在这里打个对勾：________（也就是说，下面的题就不用做了）。
我发现这个报告至少有以下三个句子有一些问题（依次抄写你认为有问题的句子，然后在其下面写出你的简短评论和你的修改版）：二．致辞撰写(30%)请自行确定一个主题，使用英语撰写一份正式的致辞。
提示：●字数请在200个英语单词左右，正负不过10%。
●如需涉及国外人名、地名、机构名称，可以虚构，但必须是英语国家的。
●业务内容限于国际商务活动，即必须是中国人念给外国人听的致辞。
●不能照抄本课程教材或其他教材中的例信例文。
Ladies and Gentlemen,It is with great honor that I extend a warm welcome to American State Trade Delegation. I am very happy that you are here to attend the opening ceremony of Canadian Industrial Exhibition. I would like to take this opportunity to convey to our American guests the warm greetings from the American Chamber of Commerce.These exhibition is a display of recent industrial achievements in Ameria,as well asa showplace of our high-tech advances in such areas as aviation,machine tools,electronics,coal mining,power generation equipments,off-shore oil exploration,automobiles,covering all sections of American industry.I am very proud that some of the exibits are the products from some American-canadian joint ventures.Although these products are a mere fraction of all our exhibits,they mark the arrival of a new era of the economic and scientific and technological cooperation between our two great nations. Our cooperation is one of great promise. As you know,”A good beginning is half the battle.”In addition,we are staging business and trade dissction with major American companies.The parties may scheduletime for business or technical talks with them.The American State Trade Delegation is the largest visiting group to attend our exibition and I wish my Canadian friends a most rewarding visit.三．贺信撰写(30%)请自行确定一个主题，使用英语撰写一份正式的贺信。
提示：●字数请在150个英语单词左右，正负不过10%。
●如需涉及国外人名、地名、机构名称，可以虚构，但必须是英语国家的。
●业务内容限于国际商务活动，即应当是中国人写给外国人的贺信。
●不能照抄本课程教材或其他教材中的例信例文。
CONGRATULATIONSDear Bob,On reading today‟s notice on today‟s University Paper, I get to know that you have been elected as “the top five national schlors” in our university, and I …d like to addmy voice to the congratulations from around.This award will give pleasure to the people who get to know your hard work and diligence. I am so pleased to see that year‟s of your hard work has been positively defined and appreciated.Students by me are deeply impressed by your hard working and researching in the last few years. What you have done has been quite excllent and outstanding and it is quite gratifying to know that these have now been so suitably rewarded. Wish you greater success in the further study and future career.Best wishes to you and your tutors!Yours sincerely,Li Si四．简历撰写(30%)请你阅读本课程教材中的第16章，结合你的实际情况，使用英语撰写有关个人的工作经历。